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1  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Herbarium / Re: Dream Flower on: 12 April 2012, 14:11:29
Thank you for looking this over. I shall integrate the comments right away.
2  Organization and General Discussions / Bell-Ringing - Notifications to Developers / Re: Bard Judith! on: 08 April 2012, 20:31:05
If you would please take the time to look here and drop comment or two, that would be most appreciated ^^

Thanks,
Ridgen
3  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Herbarium / Re: Dream Flower on: 05 April 2012, 15:57:08
Hello there! Thanks for taking the time to have a look at my little plant here ^^

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My only request is that you think beyond the Kasumarii being assassins, and find uses for the plant that would aid their survival in their everyday lives on Cyhalloi. If it helps the body retain heat, then they could use it like a lotion for the skin to keep them warm as opposed to wearing bulky clothing? They could cultivate it, and have it as a dependable resource. Or perhaps, in very small doses, it can provide a state of "waking dreams"- used to speak with the tribe's gods or something? All just suggestions, of course, as you should take your plant in the direction you desire.

I am afraid that the plant only appears on Cyhalloi in small numbers. I can put it there, but the Kasumarii will have to use it rather sparingly, as a medical tool as opposed to using it for warmth. Perhaps, though, the very rich could afford to buy it as a means of keeping warmth in? I've edited that little detail in, if you don't have any objections.

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Also! What does the flower smell like, what kind of fragrance does it have? What does the liquid from it taste like? I'm pretty sure that I didn't see anything written about that. :)

I believe I have mentioned in there somewhere that the liquid tastes very sweet - almost like honey. I do admit, though, that I have neglected the matter about the fragrance, and I hope that my edits have fixed that.

I believe I have addressed all of your comments. If you have any more, they are more than welcome :) Thanks for taking the time to look over my entry :D
4  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Herbarium / Re: Dream Flower on: 05 April 2012, 13:05:39
Finally done :D Comments welcome :)
5  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Herbarium / Re: The Blister Petal on: 01 February 2012, 14:35:18
I found one or two little tidbits in your usages section. Nothing much, just a grammar check. Comments in ORANGE :D

Usages:Strangely, the petals of the plant dissolve instantly in liquid, When? and when the liquid is drank ( by any race ) any blisters on your body will heal! Which makes this plant great for trackers. Even better if your traveling through a snowy region. As these plants are really in their element up there.

The liquid that oozes from the thorn is a very potent remdey <- what's a 'remdey'? also for <- why make a new line here?
blisters, if one were to drink the liqud <- what does 'liqud' mean? :P from the thorns, the remedy would infact <- I'm not sure that's a real word ;) be too powerful and could have some nasty side-effects;from head-aches to bleeding from your blisters.
6  Santharian World Development / Magic in the Lands of Caelereth / Re: Elemental Property Discussion on: 08 January 2012, 08:07:55
Sorry if I sound impatient, but Rayne, did you overlook my post? I just want to know whether or not I did the little description right.
7  Santharian World Development / Magic in the Lands of Caelereth / Re: Elemental Property Discussion on: 07 January 2012, 18:21:53
Tranquility (Spiritual)
Tranquility represents composure and calm, a property expressing water's existential desire to become still. Anything expressing the property of Tranquility retains a sense of calm and composure - the calmer something is, the more it expresses the property.
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I'm not quite sure whether I'm doing this right, actually buck but I tried :P
8  Santharian World Development / Magic in the Lands of Caelereth / Re: Ximaxian Magic Review Discussion on: 05 January 2012, 16:45:06
My goals? I guess I'd want to understand this system a little (eh, who am I kidding, a LOT) more than I do now. By the end of this, I'd want to have contributed SOMETHING to this magic thing buck
9  Santharian World Development / Magic in the Lands of Caelereth / Re: Ximaxian Magic Review Discussion on: 03 January 2012, 18:28:08
What concerns me is that 'fluidity' is more or less equal to 'liquidity', liquid being one of three states of matter.

Question: Do all properties have to have exactly one property (of the opposite element) that opposes it?

Because all I can really come up with for this one property is something that goes three ways (fluidity - solidity - gaseousness)

Just my worthless two sans.
10  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Herbarium / Re: Sleepflower on: 03 January 2012, 14:16:47
Question: Will it be okay to put this in Contamar Forest? O.o
11  Santharian World Development / Magic in the Lands of Caelereth / Re: Ximaxian Magic Review Discussion on: 30 December 2011, 14:07:31
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Refraction: The turning or bending of any wave, such as a light or sound wave, when it passes from one medium into another of different optical density.
Essentially, that means refraction really has no 'opposite'. Bend said wave in any direction (whether to warp or straighten it) is 'refraction'. Just my two sans.
12  Organization and General Discussions / Newbie Information, Joining Requests and Recruitment / I am/will be back :D on: 29 December 2011, 14:28:59
Hey there, any of you people on the dev side remember me? :P I'm back :O and I'm staying here. Or at least I will be, after New Year's celebrations are over. (It's a big thing for my family. Not that I have much of a family, but I digress)

Some of you will notice I've been active on the RPG side and not on this side (boo! buck ) and I kinda regret not being active enough on this side (mostly because I've found the inspiration I was kinda lacking when I went on that super-long hiatus.) I will (hopefully) be a lot more active on this side from now on, so like, yeah. You'll see my face a lot in the magic section :P

So... yeah. Das all. A late Merry Christmas and an Early Happy New Year to you all :D I even brought cookies :O
13  Organization and General Discussions / Newbie Information, Joining Requests and Recruitment / Re: Return of... Well, this guy! on: 19 May 2011, 21:26:51
Will do xD
14  Organization and General Discussions / Newbie Information, Joining Requests and Recruitment / Return of... Well, this guy! on: 19 May 2011, 16:57:50
Heya guys, long time no see! I'm back and I'm ready to uhm... complete my two development entries xD

So what did I miss?
15  Santharian World Development / Magic in the Lands of Caelereth / Re: Air or Water? on: 05 March 2011, 14:38:11
Thanks to you both :)
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