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« Reply #30 on: 12 May 2003, 22:14:00 »
Well, looks better Viresse. :)

Only a few problems, and more than half of them are just little mistakes in wording or grammar or whatever that I can just fix when I prepare the entry.

However, there is one thing I should mention.

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The Ca'rall of the caster is used to perform this spell, which makes it difficult for low level casters.


Like Silfer said earlier, all spells use Car'all, hence low level casters use car'all for all their spells, not just this one,and the difficulty is based on how well those initiates can (or cannot) control their car'all, not the fact that the spell uses it. (as all do)

Other than that, I don't see any other problems. :)



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« Reply #31 on: 12 May 2003, 23:00:00 »
Degradoing oneself and honesty are two different things. Silfer and Tarq know far more about magic than me, and because of this they're word weighs more.

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« Reply #32 on: 12 May 2003, 23:11:00 »
It just sounded like it to me.... but then, I have a tendency to oft take things the wrong way... :



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« Reply #33 on: 13 May 2003, 00:03:00 »
::hugs Dass-a-bunnie::

We still love you.

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"There is much misjudgment in the world. Now, I knew you for a unicorn when I first saw you, and I know that I am your friend. Yet you take me for a clown, or a clod, or a betrayer, and so I must be if you see me so. The magic on you is only magic and will vanish as soon as you are free, but the enchantment of error that you put on me I must wear forever in your eyes. We are not always what we seem..." -Schmendrick the Magician, The Last Unicorn
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« Reply #34 on: 13 May 2003, 00:22:00 »
*returns hug*

And you know we all still love you too, Rayne. :)



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« Reply #35 on: 13 May 2003, 01:35:00 »
Indeed this loks much better, Viresse! However, still some small things:

This spell can invoke once-living bones to form objects ( chairs, cages, swords).


On swords: As this spell simply accembles the bones, not shapes them, making a sword is not really possible, lest you chnage it to be able to form the bones.

Next, Car'all, as has been said

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Once all the pieces of the item are constructed from the summoned bone, the mage should paint the structure with a mixture of sentient ashes, blood, and powdered wizardleaf if he wishes to keep it


How I love expressions like that! "Sentient ashes..." Made by the spell "Sentience to the ashes", Xeua lvl. 6....No? I am kidding, Vir dear However, reword that to "Ashes of a sentient creature" to keep the Ximaxian students from laughing to death.

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But it is impossible to destroy a ca'rall held structure with brute strength. It must be broken by magic.


Who says so? I disagree... all things, living or dea,d have car'all... and it should be very possible to destroy something imbued with more car'all...

Thats all i see... and this is much better than what I usually see.


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« Reply #36 on: 13 May 2003, 01:39:00 »
On swords, Silfer, it depends on the bone used, really. The fang of a... say, warg, or something, cut easily be the blade. True, you can't shape bones with the spell, but it can use bones that are already shaped for that function.



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« Reply #37 on: 13 May 2003, 07:42:00 »
A tooth with sharp edges? Hard to imagine.,.. it can have a pointy tip, but edges...    
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« Reply #38 on: 13 May 2003, 09:41:00 »
Ick, love. I think I'll take my exit on that. Adios, all, until next time.

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« Reply #39 on: 13 May 2003, 15:40:00 »
A tooth, or say a femur bone that has been broken in a point-like fashion.
This spell does not RENDER BONES.
It just ASSEMBLES them.
If you have a finely-filed bone, then I think that would make a great sword blade.
Gah. Maybe I'm being too broad.
How about a Rapier?!
Huh!?
*screams in frustration*
You guys are marring every single word I'm typing?!
*begins sobbing*

Seriously, you guys are making me not want to work on this. When I remotely think I've got a grasp of it, you shred it again. Do you gyts want to do it?!
Then at least it will be perfect!
*storms off to take a break*


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« Reply #40 on: 14 May 2003, 05:01:00 »
*Smacks himself on the head* Of course one can take the bone and make it sharp before casting this. Me stupid. Well, so much for the sword debate, my point is lost.

However, Vir, coments such as

Seriously, you guys are making me not want to work on this. When I remotely think I've got a grasp of it, you shred it again. Do you gyts want to do it?!


Make me wonder why I bother commenting. I have a great deal of patience, Vir dear, but do not test it...


On the spell itself... It looks good now! See, Vir, if you stop sulking and work, you get it right in the end.


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« Reply #41 on: 14 May 2003, 09:32:00 »
but sulking's fun.
And as I said, it's finals week- my brain feels perma-fried, it seems I am unable to think staight as of late.
Damn Oliver and that Layout Class...
*sulks and goes to Animate*


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