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« Reply #15 on: 30 December 2006, 16:17:42 »

Well, the main problem I have is where to put a Styrásh two-liner effectively, you know. Add it to what kind of poem page, or make a new one with what kind of title etc.
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« Reply #16 on: 31 December 2006, 01:36:58 »

Hmm...

Well, I am endeavoring to make an entry for the Library called ''The Poetry of the Elves'', so what we could do is hold off on the integration of this little poem until I get around to that main page.  I envisioned it as being sort of like the Weapons Overview page, where there would be a list of the different forms of Elven poetry with a little blurb underneath each heading.  Once that page is up, then the heading for whatever form of poetry this little haiku-ish verse will end up being can be a link to a separate page, where all poems of that type will be collected.

Did that make any sense, or was I just blabbing incoherently?
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« Reply #17 on: 04 January 2007, 15:30:10 »

No, that was quite coherent!  You aren't talking about reorganizing menus, just setting up a linked page, correct?

  I do hope you'll let others 'play' in your forms - I think Rayne, for one, wrote in styrash, though I'm not as daring.  I did do an entire story AND a song in ThergerimTaal, but it was quite labour intensive and I can 'cheat' by making up words I don't have yet (guilty look). 

   I'm encouraged by the thought that haiku can be written in other languages than Japanese, by simply following the scansion and content rules - thus perhaps you'll accept 'steléyri' in Tharian, written by humans who admire the elven form?

 (flashes emeraud eyes at Ysuran with a merry smile)
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« Reply #18 on: 22 January 2007, 23:24:54 »

Just a thought, now that I'm catching up on my reading (looks guilty)

If it's a "wise elvish saying" shouldn't it go under Proverbs and Sayings?

BTW, a beautiful piece of work, Ysuran, congratulations!  I'm not brave enough to write in elvish either, though I do have several "translated" poems and songs published.  If you do accept steleyri in Tharian, maybe I could submit some for consideration...

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« Reply #19 on: 22 January 2007, 23:46:13 »

Why can't this go  under "poems of nature"  below or above my haikus, then it is not so alone. Just because it is a very short form it should not have to sit and wait for uploading. It has two stanzas with the translation.

Ysuran, just do another two, or/and write a a few short sentences who wrote it!!
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« Reply #20 on: 03 February 2007, 08:01:04 »

Shamelessly bumps his little idyllic musing...

Just ensuring that I remember to add my notes to this later in in the month.

So far, I have a back history on this little reverie and four companion poems to go with it, so that we can set a decent basis for this form of elven poetry.  I have devised five types of Styreian wordplay so far, and will probably post these as a different entry altogether.

However, I will be limited in my time this coming month, so things will probably go very slowly on my end.  Not to worry, though - I vow that the poor muse-less elves shall revel in their poetry before two month's time is up.  :)
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