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« Reply #15 on: 27 January 2007, 13:51:16 »

I am delighted to find what looks like a completely honest grammatical error of the sort teachers always love to chuckle over but are certain are apocryphal.   

"n this period of the year the young lizards reach adultery and are fighting for new lairs. "

Babies grow into 'childhood'.   Children grow into 'adolescence'.  And teenagers grow into 'adulthood' - NOT 'adultery', which has a completely different meaning.   :)
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« Reply #16 on: 27 January 2007, 16:37:53 »

lol Young lizards doing adultery sounds indeed even more ethically questionable than adults doing adultery! Well, the Kruswik Hopper seems to be a strange beast...
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« Reply #17 on: 27 January 2007, 16:48:59 »

Arceon, welcome in the club of those who manage to amuse our dear Bard and others!  :D (and bring to laugh: Judy nearly fell from her chair when reading my "mistakes" ;) )

(*We shouldn't tell them that we are trying very hard to let it look like we really didn't know it better, no word to them that we considered long which error we could introduce to amuse them ;) )
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« Reply #18 on: 28 January 2007, 19:00:21 »

 lol rolling rofl
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« Reply #19 on: 28 January 2007, 22:36:27 »

:)  ;}   :D  :lol
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« Reply #20 on: 30 January 2007, 04:51:34 »

Eyewitness report added! Into the Diet section, if you don't mind?
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« Reply #21 on: 11 February 2007, 05:41:18 »

Just bringing it up from the depths of the board!
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« Reply #22 on: 11 February 2007, 22:11:25 »

Okay, everything seems in order, except you should tone down that eyewitness report, make it sound like it has been taken from a diary, not like it is being told as a story. If you can do that you can have the blue arrow.
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« Reply #23 on: 13 February 2007, 04:14:21 »

I hope thats better now! Changes in the report in red!
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« Reply #24 on: 13 February 2007, 04:23:16 »

I will grammar check it tommorow, then I will give it the intergration arrow.

Good Work!
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« Reply #25 on: 13 February 2007, 04:31:16 »

Cool! Thanks!
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« Reply #26 on: 14 February 2007, 05:50:00 »

Sorry for procrastinating your entry Arceon...I promise this will be done within the next two days

I have to help my dad with a speech that he will use to get one of his incompetent supervisors demoted [in turn him promoted] to a group of Japanese businessmen-Lucky for him I know a little Japanese ettiquete.
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« Reply #27 on: 15 February 2007, 03:52:20 »

No big! :)

Just try hard to get that speech well done!  grin
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« Reply #28 on: 20 February 2007, 03:30:38 »

Please forgive me for not getting this done in time for the update  cry

I will do a part now and the rest later (probably tommorow)- Okay?

I know it sounds like I'm making excuses but I need to edit my Media film coursework (damn tempermental macs!!!) after it was deleted. Sorry

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EDIT: Seems it was easier than I thought...There you go Arceon! Sorry for the delay
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« Reply #29 on: 22 February 2007, 01:03:15 »

Don't worry, two entries in one update are better than one(as I'm planing to finish Shady Grove for the next update).
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