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Takór Salenár
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« Reply #15 on: 15 March 2007, 06:14:38 »

Well, I do, for I had to rethink quite a bit. Maybe we talked about that at Santhmoot II. But if you don't remember - that is fine, then I'm free to develop te town's growing. To Lucirinas map - I know that it exists and I thought about how I could integrate it somehow.

I don't know that Judy has shown any interest in Bardavos.
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« Reply #16 on: 15 March 2007, 11:24:43 »

If I can help, let me know.  I can build on RPG information or expound on sketchy outlines to add detail, character, and life to a town - and Bardavos is definitely interesting.  On the other hand, I've got lots of stuff on the go,  and if I had my choice I'd work on New Santhala as part of a higher-priority Team Project....

Perhaps this thread should be split, though, because it's not about Irid's great story so much any more....   and again, though I'm flattered that she's included my poem, it WAS done for the RPG and it CAN be changed if it doesn't fit the existing history or if history is going to be changed - which is what I meant by 'feel free to rip it up', by the way.  No need to either be touchy or assume that I'm being touchy about it.   I

Let me know when something is decided and I can easily 'fix' the song.

Irid, are we getting more on the story? 

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« Reply #17 on: 15 March 2007, 22:55:28 »

Congratz Irid!
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« Reply #18 on: 16 March 2007, 00:58:09 »

Thanks Drasil :)

Judy, I will hopefully start on chapter two soon, but Real Life is butting in again. I'm sure that you understand that *grins*

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« Reply #19 on: 20 March 2007, 11:16:20 »

I loved it!   :D    Sometimes I wish I could put Real Life into a box and purolate it somewhere far away.  Very nicely written, Irid!


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« Reply #20 on: 22 March 2007, 03:57:10 »

Looking forward to chapter two! thumbup clap
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« Reply #21 on: 10 April 2007, 00:52:58 »

Irid, very nicely written.   So far crisp, clean characters.  The way you integrated Judith's character and poem into the plot was flawless.  Your scene development drew me in and I could not only feel but hear the color of it.  The way you implemented Santharian terms in a way that would be recognized by even a non-Santharian, or Caelereth, I applaud and admire.

I look forward to the second chapter.   

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