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« Reply #15 on: 21 August 2008, 15:20:24 »

Okay...
Lots of villages here, need domestic pig, Rimmlich Cow, and the Injera Eagle.
Rimmerins=Tribe unto themselves - not in actuality, but def. blending of cultures
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« Reply #16 on: 22 August 2008, 03:41:23 »

I guess this could be your masterwork, Nsiki - you're collating already quite a bit of information on that region, and added to that you're focusing on the Eyelians as a tribe, so there's ample room to integrate this culture into some parts of the Rimmersin Ring. So Yeah, Rimmerins Ring sounds quite fine for a masterwork I'd say, once the other entries have been taken care of you're still dealing with. Still comments to come on that other Places entry of yours, but one after the other...
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« Reply #17 on: 22 August 2008, 05:39:22 »

Of course i'll wait Art - I just got the Bladeleaf entry updated, its still missing that spark though... hopefully I'll get that up soon. I've got comments to integrate for Kyttering, and I can do the Yourth'Dibaj ones fairly quickly. I should be ready after this update.
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« Reply #18 on: 27 August 2008, 12:29:52 »

Just a bump for me- need to get cracking on this!
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« Reply #19 on: 04 September 2008, 11:27:13 »

Making some excellent headway on the Rimmerins Ring- would someone mind commenting the teal?
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« Reply #20 on: 21 September 2008, 03:27:10 »

Argh....
I need to get this all sorted out.
Turns out this is a very big project... ;)
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« Reply #21 on: 24 September 2008, 07:36:45 »

People, flora, and fauna, should be up by tommorow.
Description, not so much. :p
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« Reply #22 on: 12 December 2008, 06:19:30 »

Well, after over a dozen rewrites of the first section alone, I'm finally almost finished with it.....
But.
Things should move along considerably smoother now.
Just FYI.
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« Reply #23 on: 13 December 2008, 03:56:57 »

I take it that the first section is the Description section, not the Overview we usually have on top. Don't forget to add that at some point, Nsiki.

What you have there so far is pretty good, with some really nice references in there like getting in a link to Faugar, then also regarding Eyelians or that funny mentioning of the Serphelorians with your quote "They’re so cold, their senses have gone south!" lol All nicely put together. Here and there some more specification wouldn't hurt though, like more details on where exactly the ogres live, how large their presence is etc.

"Dwarven" BTW should be written "dwarven". I also don't know if dwarves live aboveground in a hamlet, so that would be something for Judy to look into.

But it looks pretty good so far. You don't need to colour it all red I guess, makes reading more difficult for red/green colourblinds like me - besides, you should mark changes, so standard post should be white as usual.

Let's hope that indeed the next sections will be done more quickly, cause a Rimmerins entry is definitely something I'd like to add to the site due to its pretty central position... ;)
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« Reply #24 on: 13 December 2008, 13:42:17 »

*salutes*
Should be on a roll now, sir.
And I'm not actually sure why I colored all that.....
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« Reply #25 on: 13 December 2008, 15:23:54 »

I suspect somebody forgot to put the lid back on the paint can (that is, didn't close his ezboard codes...er, I mean, forum codes properly....)   :)

Coming right along, 'Siki!    Anything you happen to want illustrated for this?  Coz I'm on a roll myself.... and the paint cans are all open!
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« Reply #26 on: 15 December 2008, 06:04:58 »

Ya-HA!
Illustrations?
I'd love illustrations!
Flora, Fauna, Mountain Vistas, Eyelians, Brownies, Dwarves, a view from the ring, looking down on New-Santhala, the possibilities here, are truly endless.
Maybe a little crowd, have an Eyelian, a brownie, a Seph, a Dwarf, a Ylff, a human, all looking down from the Ring onto the city in a picture of true camaraderie!
Sorry if I got carried away there....
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« Reply #27 on: 15 December 2008, 06:10:33 »

Description section finished, if ye wish to comment, then comment ye may.
Art, I'll work in the specifically on the Baal Ogres a bit later, under races, though I would like BARD JUDITH'S
opinion on the DWARVES HERE.
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« Reply #28 on: 15 December 2008, 11:59:22 »

(rubs her ears and wonders if Nsiki could possibly have yanked the bellrope any harder)

Yes, yes, hon, I'm awake!  It's just that I have just finished exams, and work, you know?  Some of us need a bit of a sleep-in and a rest before they start in on the housework!

I'm taking a break from active developing for a week or so (though I am checking the forums thrice daily, as you may have noticed) so getting my opinion may be somewhat delayed.   You too, Irid - I DID get the PM, sorry for not responding ASAP....    :)

Do feel free to keep reminding me, or post a little parchment  in my bellthread.

Hugs,
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« Reply #29 on: 15 December 2008, 12:46:14 »

Sorry, ma'am, I'll get to fixing that rope right away, then :)
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