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« Reply #15 on: 07 January 2009, 19:40:11 »

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Habitat and cultivation: all I meant with this problematic cultivation is to say that this plant requires  desert(semi- desert actually) conditions. People can plant it everywhere but it will not grow(or it will be smaller) if those conditions aren't met(like soil and humidity)
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if you water it too much or too little it will die it is very hard to keep it alive
Yes, I understood this, maybe formulate it a bit clearer. An abundance of water is more difficult to explain though, maybe just write , that it likes "dry feet", the long roots provide it with enough water, otherwise the branches do rot or something similar
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I had an idea of plantingit on crossroads to mark places where roads divide or cross each other and to form some places to rest
Oh well, this might not be the right plant for that purpose, for the dar'ii tree give more shade (kind of akazia). And, as I said already above, there are not many crossroads, for there are not many roads. There are no roads in the desert area, only the shendar know the paths there and they will surely not plant a bush to tell others where a kind of crossroad may be! It is their secret!

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branches are hard to break because they are full of oil and with a hard skin
Ok, say so in the text

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roots can be used as a hooks to keep th dome to the ground(think I read something like that in the cultur section with Shendars) but that is just a suggestion
It is ok, we don't have enough bones of the Rahas Estar to use them for all purposes

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and about mythology I don't know much about Shandar(actually any) mythology andreligion so those were just some basic concepts just like the body painting ideas
I will come up with something, actually I liked your idea of the origine of the body painting!
I will put other ideas( like oil, dye, roots) in story
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« Reply #16 on: 12 January 2009, 22:30:30 »

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« Reply #17 on: 13 January 2009, 00:23:48 »

Could you please try to find a grammar check? Does word have one? Or any of this office tools?
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« Reply #18 on: 14 January 2009, 07:50:54 »

i think word has some check
I'm going to run it and see
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