Swamp Stalker Pic-Update

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Swamp Stalker Pic-Update

« on: 17 March 2009, 12:55:55 »

All right , this has been a tough one. Here is my depiction of the Swamp Stalker in the SilverMarshes. You will notice that the Stalker is busy feeding on a Red Lysh Pike. You may also notice some Krakenweed in the water and Squilla Fungus on the tree behind the Stalker.

The Stalker is well described however I found myself struggling with putting some of the details to "canvas" . Let me know what you think I could use some help.


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #1 on: 17 March 2009, 13:33:11 »

I really like the way you work, you pay a lot of attention to the written entries and your talent seems to just... flow freely

I like the blurred branches in the front, it's a really nice way to simulate perspective. I can see how this one was a bit hard to draw if I'm thinking at how there would be no way to show what exactly is the creature doing with that fish. But that's why we still need to read the entries and not just look at the pictures

I'm really curious what you're going to draw next... (*tries to appear casual* "Oh, this little bugger http://www.santharia.com/bestiary/eye_crab.htm was just following me around, really, he's mostly harmless, there's nothing to worry about...")

PS: You do have a white stripe on the bottom right margin that probably shouldn't be there.


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« Reply #2 on: 17 March 2009, 15:47:06 »

Oh, if we're going to ~~shamelessly~~ (*ahem*) promote our own entries... I saw you were saying something about things without definite form. The White Lady does have a definite form

Ok, enough with the advertising. For this pic I don't have too many comments. Or to be more exact, I don't have any comments. Just curious what your next project is going to be! Carry on the good work thumbup


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #3 on: 17 March 2009, 18:53:26 »

White Lady, hmmm? And what's THIS, pray tell?

Boy, drop out of sight for a month and you're forgotten.....


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #4 on: 17 March 2009, 19:12:11 »

Ooopsie.... Guess I still haven't integrated that one... Should get to that one soon! nerd

- Also: Irid obviously is just so enthusiastic about how great Seeker's pics turn out, so that she tries to secure one for her... lol

Anyway, comments on the Swamp Stalker pic still to follow. Stay tuned!


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #5 on: 17 March 2009, 21:08:05 »

That looks great, Seeker! I've got no comments to make other than I am loving the great pics from you. Its like suddenly striking gold and it just keeps popping out of the ground!

The Stalker looks very alien and creepy. I like the fish detail and the landscape. Maybe add some mist along the water to give it a really nice swampy, humid look?

I definitely must add, Seeker, that your talent could be used in other areas such as...oh say...the North? innoc

Just teasing. Getting good illustrations is what we sorely needed around here and poor Judy can't possibly illustrate the entire site herself!


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #6 on: 17 March 2009, 22:12:43 »

Thanks for the positive comments so far. Art I look forward to any suggestions you may have.

I definitely like suggestion for areas that need illustrating. Alysse is the one who introduced me to the SwampStalker after all. (And I am especially interested in getting her comments) So please don't feel embarrased by suggesting areas that need illustrating.

However I was browsing yesterday and I noticed Gouran (Avath cao'). She is really interesting and I would like an opportunity to illustrate her if there are no objections.

By the way, Bard Judith I love your picture of the White Lady. I like the feeling of emotion in her face. In fact I have noticed that you and Faugur have provided many of the illustrations and they really help bring Santharia to life.


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #7 on: 18 March 2009, 01:03:05 »

And still they come!

Another triumph from Seeker!

The fuzzy branches in the foreground, coupled with the stalker's head-up posture makes me think that he has just heard a small twig snap as our intrepid artist edges closer for a better view!

Well done, yet again, Seeker.


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #8 on: 18 March 2009, 01:15:53 »

Oh, Azhira, such obvious lobbying. You should be ashamed. What's next? Subliminal messages?
North! North! North! North! North!
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Anothr great work, Seeker. And the speed of which you do this is amazing. I hope that your enthusiasm doesn't wane, for at this rate, we can get the entire compendium illustrated in no time.North! North! North!
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And Judith, you could never be forgotten. And I love the Woman in White pic. Very nice.North! North! North!

I apologize Seeker for the shameless lengths the people on this site have gone in order to influence the direction of your next works.

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« Reply #9 on: 18 March 2009, 03:00:18 »

Wow!

Seeker, this is fantastic! I must admit I had not expected you to finish this so quickly and I have been away so my chances to get online are limited. (I am currently using my mom's computer.)

I love it, it's so creepy! You obviously followed my description very thoroughly, down to the fine details. I love the mossy bits and fungi growing on this thing.

I have only two suggestions for you. One, can you make the eyes a little smaller? That would make the lack of other facial features, like a mouth, nose, etc., more obvious so it would look even ghastlier. But just a little, they're cool and very "fly-like", if that is a word.

The second suggestion would be to make the swamp a little murkier. Right now the gorgeous vibrant green, while very beautiful, is too fresh looking. Maybe just tone it down, "grey" it a little bit? It's almost too attractive a background for this monster.

Other than that, I can only applaud with everyone else. It's amazing. Thank you so much for being willing to illustrate my revolting monster! I'm very excited to get a picture done for it, as you can probably tell. I will try to check in a few more times this week and comment further, but I'm afraid right now I need to go chase my kids

Thanks again, hug

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« Reply #10 on: 18 March 2009, 04:19:02 »

I see that Alysse likes the picture very much, so you've definitely managed to pretty much capture the vision of the author.

It might be more challenging to make a picture where you don't have any direct reference to something on Earth and need to work mainly from the description, but eventually these are the pictures that give the world its character. So these are very important, and it's good so see that you try to tackle some of these.

Alysse has addressed some things already, so here are a couple of general notes from me:

- Maybe you could add more swamp water/ooze to the arms of our little fellow, dripping down, so that you don't see the arms so clearly?

- Very thoughtful of you to include some plants, Santharian fish etc. - this way we can crop these parts and make double and triple use of the picture, can't ask for more! Guess you've got the idea cool

- In this respect a note on backgrounds: This might not always apply, but if you do a background on an own layer and put something in front, it helps to post the background as a seperate piece as well (in case it's not too complicated to do). Backgrounds are great stuff to use them in the Santhworld environment - there they are effective as room illustrations, or they can be used to combine it with something that we add to a picture. Or, say, if we want to show different pictures to depict different swamp "rooms" we can make two pictures out of one background, or rearrange a background with a little Photoshopping so that it doesn't look the same anymore. Thus: One good background - lots of stuff I can do with it

Oh, and:

No, there are surely no objections to a picture of Gouran (Avath'cao) if you'd like to try that one next, Seeker! As you can see everyone of course would like to have his/her entry illustrated, but the most important is that you enjoy working on a particular picture


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Re: Swamp Stalker Pic

« Reply #11 on: 18 March 2009, 05:12:07 »

Gerroff, 'es mine! I called him :p
Anyways, yes, another good addition Seeker - but perhaps tone the eyes down, and maybe make him pop out a little more- try a small drop shadow, see if that helps. Otherwise, I think its another great entry, and you're visualizing these things very well.


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Re: Swamp Stalker-update

« Reply #12 on: 21 March 2009, 12:25:17 »

Here we go, an update to the Swamp Stalker. These were easy changes so please let me know if for some reason you had something else in mind I can easily tweak the picture. I am posting two pictures one with just the background.