Picture of Gouran(Avath'cao) with Warg and Orcs

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« Reply #30 on: 19 May 2009, 06:35:44 »

Thanks Garret. Good luck with all going on in your life. I will bug Thar. It appears from his recent posts that he has been spending his time watching Britains Got Talent. *Seeker imagines a big green monster sitting on the couch with a remote control* hehe


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« Reply #31 on: 19 May 2009, 15:38:18 »

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« Reply #32 on: 02 June 2009, 11:14:49 »

Alright, finally here is the complete Gouran Pic. The biggest change is the Warg. This is a Rhom Warg based on the description Garret provided in the Bestiary Forum a couple weeks ago. The old Warg I have saved and will probably use at some point in the future.

Final comments welcome, but to be honest I am ready for this one to be done.


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« Reply #33 on: 02 June 2009, 13:48:56 »

The picture looks great, just a couple quick comments on the warg

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First off, it looks like a tooth is stickin' up from the bottom of the mouth. For the Rhom Warg, its most likely to be the top teeth that stick out. More likely to be seen than others even though they are usually concealed by the thick fur.

The fur around the muzzle would be a little longer and more bristly as that would be one of the most dangerous places to cut and its likely to be noticeably uneven. The fur along the body should be more noticeably uneven. Right now it looks kinda 'controlled' to me, especially around the head.

Finally, I see the Rhom warg bein' a little thicker. I generally thing Great Dane and St. Bernard in terms of size. The Rast would pretty much be the St. Bernard in bulk. The Rhom warg would be closer to the St. Bernard without bein' too extreme.

Does any of that make any sense? Sorry, testin' week and dead tired cause I was up early writin' an essay this mornin'. Anyways, just my thoughts on the picture. Amazin' work though.

Sorry for poorly worded and bad spellin' probably. Half asleep here. Just waitin' till 10pm so I can force my brother to go to sleep and I can get some sleep ...


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« Reply #34 on: 03 June 2009, 03:19:34 »

I see Garret knows every piece of hair at a Rhom warg... lol

Hope these changes aren't too dramatic to handle!

But this really is a breathtaking picture, Seeker! We have Gouran there, two orcs, plus a Rhom warg, which - aside from the mentioned small issues - looks also really convincing to me. And have a mentioned that I like that fog? Fog: Great! Yup, I like it really a lot in this picture, fantastically eerie! grin

So this picture has multiple components and the whole group and foreground to me already make it a true masterpiece!

Small quibble: The background above the mountains still looks a tad boring to me. Especially as you have all the characters (and the fog - have I mentioned the fog?) drawn in great pose and detail, the background takes away a bit of atmosphere. If you feel that it's ok with you, don't worry my rambling, but maybe just a hint of a moon (half transparent) and some clouds in front of it on the top left could make it all perfect. Surely not to much, as that could draw attention from the focus of the pic, so that's just an idea. At any rate a wonderful picture that has so much in it - really great work, Seeker! cool


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« Reply #35 on: 03 June 2009, 10:57:22 »

How does this look?


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« Reply #36 on: 03 June 2009, 13:48:32 »

Looks great. The top of the muzzle still looks a little clean cut, but thats me bein' nit-picky. Great job Seeker.


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« Reply #37 on: 04 June 2009, 02:36:05 »

Yay! That's really cool now with the added moon, love it! thumbup

Makes it all rounded up now, overall wonderfully atmospheric... Guess this one's ready for the next site update then, eh? clap


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« Reply #38 on: 04 June 2009, 03:59:02 »

Yes it is ready, and thank you all, as always the comments pushed the picture to a higher level of coolness.


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