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« Reply #15 on: 24 November 2009, 04:59:26 »

Altario,  This thread got a bit distracted with discussion on the ice beasts.  Is this sword entry ready to go?  It looks good to me.
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« Reply #16 on: 24 November 2009, 05:46:48 »

Still got the edits to incorporate :)  I myself got distracted with a few things myself.  ONe of which was the Hero Horse entry. :P

I'll put sme effort into this in the next day or so, and see if I can get it up and ready for next update.
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« Reply #17 on: 27 November 2009, 07:31:37 »

Edits were made.  Those edits I did not change are mentioned below.  Thank you everyone for the comments.  As always, they are appreciated and essential. :D

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And how you can write all of a sudden!
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I think it should be drunk, not drank.
 Drunk doesn't sound right either.  I looked it up, but all the examples I read were a bit ambiguous, so I left it as is for now, until I'm out voted. :)

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Third, injera is Styrash for sun. Would the Antislar use Styrash?
 I want to keep it.  I'm going to explain it by their having had a history with the Ice Elves.  The Antislar religion will be heavily based on Elvish religion.  The Antislar are the parasites of the northern peoples, taking from other cultures to a larger degree than other people.

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I have a name for the icicle monster, at least an orcen name: "Kalta'hnk" (lit. "Ice Biter").
 I took this one.  Orcs and half orcs are a part of Anntislar society, so it makes sense.  Plus, it's the coolest of the names. :)
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« Reply #18 on: 03 December 2009, 02:58:31 »

Looks ready then.  Great job.
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