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Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels
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« on: 24 December 2009, 06:46:26 »

Recently Rayne mentioned in a side sentence, that there is no ode for her. I looked it up, it was true! She, who has written so many for others, had none. And now, that she has returned, I thought it is high time for her to have one, even if I'm not a poet and have a hard time writing poems.

For Rayne

Last night - the morning was not far away -
I had a dream, of jewels in a sky so blue
and Xazure blooms adorned with dew.
A happy smile lay on my face all day.

It‘s ev‘ning now, the light is dim and gray
but I see hues of blues before my eye.
What was it that I saw today and why
was I so deeply touched  - I cannot say.

The night approaches, I do dream once more
and suddenly I see a glimpse of blue
again. I know I‘ve seen it once before,
that  brilliant violet and indigo,
in eyes, so glistening, on clothing too!
It‘s Rayne! Welcome back, my friend of yore!

That should be an Italian sonnet, a fixed form for our poetess, but sorry, no volta, not really a change of subject matter. :(

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« Reply #1 on: 24 December 2009, 08:11:52 »

Talia! This is beautiful!  clap I love it! My first ode!  grin I can't believe it!

You are wonderful.  heart Thank you so much.

And grats on getting over 10K posts!!
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« Reply #2 on: 24 December 2009, 15:22:30 »

Indeed, a beautiful piece!

clap Well done, Talia :D

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