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Artimidor Federkiel
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« Reply #15 on: 07 July 2012, 12:48:24 »
Here's finally an aura +1 and a blue arrow, Valan! Nice job!  thumbup

P.S. Still noticed something missing at the end of the Flora section

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« Reply #16 on: 09 July 2012, 23:58:53 »
Seems a very tiny entry. Was there possibly no more that could be added? Or maybe this is an entry that can be revised as Ru'nor development progresses (adding more races, flora/fauna etc for example later). It's already blarrowed, but just curious.
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« Reply #17 on: 10 July 2012, 00:11:10 »
*haha* Well, not every entry needs to be 20 pages long, and while this one perhaps could be more detailed here and there it covers the basics quite well I'd say. I think it doesn't hurt to get an entry down instead of writing on something for months - one can always expand it later if necessary, but that way one can cover an area faster with additional work instead of focusing on just one key element. Both approaches are fine with me :)
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« Reply #18 on: 10 July 2012, 22:54:57 »
@Azhira: Unlike other areas of the world, I don't have the work of six or seven other developers to pull from. Having an entry at all is what's working right now. And as you've proven, there's always time to go back and revise three or four times if need be. And it's better than leaving a dozen references to entries that might not get written for months.

@Artimidor: I've fixed the issue there. I'm not sure how I even missed it buck
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« Reply #19 on: 11 July 2012, 19:13:22 »
The nice part about leaving references is that if you are ever stumped what to write next, you can always write one of your references.

The fun part about not having six or seven devs to pull from is that you can develop solely on your own without "interference" or worrying about affecting a dozen other entries elsewhere.

Some devs work best with a blank canvas while others need to build on existing stuff. Either works.
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« Reply #20 on: 12 July 2012, 21:22:20 »
Has this already been uploaded to the site?  I noticed an instance of the old name remaining in the entry:
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The Shatterspine Mountains are located in the Isles of R'unor, on the island of R'unor itself. The Hylphan'xan'ian'krois are located in the northern half of R'unor itself due west of the capital, and almost directly north of the town of Stone-Shallow.
The two sentences also seem a little repetitive. 
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« Reply #21 on: 12 July 2012, 22:08:41 »
The entry is already prepared to be uploaded next update (which would be this Sunday). I prepare some entries already a week ahead on my local computer if times allows - like in this case :)

I've fixed that passage now as suggested, and it will look like that in the final entry:

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The Shatterspine Mountains are located in the Isles of R'unor. To be precise: they can be found on the island of R'unor itself, located in the northern half due west of the capital, and almost directly north of the town of Stone-Shallow.

Thanks for pointing that out, Mina!  thumbup
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