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Azhira Styralias
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« Reply #15 on: 04 June 2012, 17:47:54 »

Let me know how this sounds. :)  I have taken the view that we are going to try to keep Iol wilderness.

PENINSULA OF IOL, THE
The Peninsula of Iol is located in the far northeast of the Sarvonian continent, northwest of the Kanapan lands and east of the Caael'heroth landmass, west of the Ice Tribes territory, the Icelands Coast.
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Though mostly wilderness, most notably in the interior of the peninsula, it is inhabited.  The Antislar hold the most territory, mainly in the south and along the Camlyn River.  This human, and mixed, tribe control as far north as the southern shores of Lofty Lake, the caldera of a once massive volcano.  From there, few souls brave the harsh environment.  However, at the very far northwestern tip of Iol, Ice Elves inhabit the famed and mysterious Forest of Contamar. the Evathonrhim , also known as the Ice Elves, make the frozen Forest of Contamar home, and together with the Antislar, strive to keep the interior of Iol pristine.  Both tribes have long held treaties that prevent each from building settlements there.  Instead, they have Rangers who travel within and observe nature, reporting back, and defending it if need be.  The Rangers are perhaps most famous for their saving of the Eanian Warg, bringing it from near extinction to where it roams freely in the north of Iol.

I prefer one paragraph overviews, but thats just me. Perhaps combine the two? Suggestions in Orange. Otherwise, an excellent overview that forms the basis for future Iol development.  :)

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« Reply #16 on: 10 July 2012, 00:00:13 »

Alt and Dek:

Do you agree with the proposed suggestions I made so we can get these updated?
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« Reply #17 on: 10 July 2012, 05:53:59 »

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29 May 2013, 17:07:40
Ughh.   Better hold off, Art.  I've go some editing to do. :)
29 May 2013, 15:46:18
Talia !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  *Shakes fist in the air*  angry
29 May 2013, 10:03:27
But well, I see you already made an own post - I'll take that one as well then :)
29 May 2013, 10:01:15
No, not necessary... Just wanted to make sure that the text you want to integrate is the final version :) Just leave the rest there!
28 May 2013, 03:57:46
Do you need me to remove the rest of it?  It was supposed to be a full blown entry, but still gathering facts for the other stuff.  I'll move the stuff to be integrated into its own entry.  :)
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No problem there - are you sure that you've posted the final version? Text on the site is about a year old...
27 May 2013, 16:59:45
Art, I want to submit my Antislar Overview, Appearence, Territory and People sections for uploading on the next update, please. No rush with what you have going on, however.
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If it works, sure! :D
23 May 2013, 16:47:05
:(  Art, is this your little way of forcing me to do an entry?
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I see the board has been deactivated. Lets hope for a quick solution!
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