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[Shabakuk Zeborius Anfang]

Entry on Queen Jenefra.

The "Information provided by ..." bar cuts through the lovely picture, at least on my screen it does.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

The entry on has the same problem at the base of the page.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

Entry on Daedhirian Undead has under the Daedhirian Mages (In "People") section the word "esotherical". Unless this is like aceed, in which case this is a genuine Mithato Moment for me, this should be esoteric, I believe.

*Hopes and Prays that he got it right*

Athviaro the Cautious

EDIT: The same problem occurs under the History section. And many thanks to Judith for the kind Aura. I know that after my blunder I don't deserve one...

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

In the entry on Magic, in the Magic through Belief section (scroll up a little from the link), there is the sentence "on which clerical magic is based on". One of the ons should not be there, either one.

Athviaro the Pedantic Mistake Hound

[Valan Nonesuch]

I'm bothering all sorts of people today!
Two incidents of "Dak'Dinal" The first is on the map of Northern Sarvonia which marks the "Ruins of Dak'Dinal"

The second appears in the Territory section of the Wisp entry.

In the Northern Sarvonia continent, among the ruins of Dak'dinal near the Kuglimz lands, Wisps have been seen (mostly from afar as very few people dare enter the wastes around the fortress).

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

Just a couple brought to my attention recently (and congrats to those who did, Seeker and Art, I am reminded how much you do for this project)

The Everbright cult dismisses this philosophy saying that Anilya stands alone and achieved her powers and status without the help of a god. Some sages point out that the veneration of Anilya comes very close to being a religious practice itself. (I have removed the statement saying that Ximaxian mages are not religious to clear that whole issue.)

The bit in brackets should not be there, I think. Anilya the Everbright (a lovely entry, Azhira, and a great pic Seeker)

Also, the picture of the Antislar Fire Blade, another great pic and lovely movie (plus sound!) is titled on my web browser as "The Crystal Dagger ('Sliverphial')". Not the url or anything, just the tab caption / window text.

Athviaro

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[M´ruk Loshashzuck]

In the story "Bandits" by Agran Velion:

Agran stood up, shaking form the beating he had just received. For several moments he was too stunned to move, but the bandit (amid much cursing) slowly standing forced him back into action. Agran grasped the sabre that had been knocked aside, [/blue] and slammed it into the bandits stomach, the eyes of the man looked towards Agran, and than to the blade sticking out of his gut. Agran twisted the blade, head down, and felt a thick liquid splatter over him.

Should be "from", shouldn't have that blue sign, and should be "then".

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

The Sabre, Althiert plant and the Scholars' Table all look free of the then/than horror...

However:

With the exception of the Centoraurian Cavalry, only a handful of master non-Centoraurian blacksmiths who are trusted enough by the Centoraurian people know the secrets too forge this weapon. Several nearby tribes have tried to replicate the sabre, but the curve along with the thickness only in the back, led too many failed results.

Plus, do the cavalry forge their own swords? Also, this means that the Centoraurian Cavalry are non-Centoraurian, and that not all of the blacksmith trusted by the Centoraurians enough to know the secrets actually do know them. ?!?!?!?!

I would cut the whole subordinate clause at the start, and add some commas.

Thus:

"Only a handful of non-Centoraurian blacksmiths, who are trusted enough by the Centoraurian people" etc

Athviaro

[M´ruk Loshashzuck]

"Herool's prowl" isn't included in the "Ballads of Santharia" section of the music menu.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

I hate to burden our Webmaster with even more work than he already has, but Shabakuk's lovely work on the Fymbels has the original spelling of Fimble in the Appendix on how to make Lewd Duck.

Athviaro the Burdensome

[Sparkle]

General Use of 'tons' (could stay unchanged):

The Crimson Rose
http://www.santharia.com/herbarium/crimson_rose.htm
(territory) The Echiilianni build cottages where they cultivate tons of flowers, protecting them from the harsh weather. ->
The Echiilianni build cottages where they cultivate hundreds of pygges of flowers, protecting them from the harsh weather.

The Centoraurian-Stratanian Piracy Affair
http://www.santharia.com/history/piracy_affair_cent_strat.htm
(the campaign, fallen leaf 19…) The Tristin escapes in the sewers and, with tons of luck, leaves the city and takes refuge to Varcopas. ->
The Tristin escapes in the sewers and, with pygges of luck, leaves the city and takes refuge to Varcopas.

The Sage Artimidor Federkiel (so there is an Artimidor entry!)
http://www.santharia.com/people/artimidor.htm
(Biography, The Santharian Compendium) In the course of time many, many people from all parts of Caelereth joined this incredible endeavour, and in 9 years after its official start - in 1660 - a first rough version of the Compendium was published, containing tons of information compressed to about 600 pages, representing a paradise of information for everybody interested in knowledge of any kind. ->
In the course of time many, many people from all parts of Caelereth joined this incredible endeavour, and in 9 years after its official start - in 1660 - a first rough version of the Compendium was published, containing pygges of information compressed to about 600 pages, representing a paradise of information for everybody interested in knowledge of any kind.

Baveras, Santharian Goddess of the Sea
http://www.santharia.com/religions/baveras.htm
(religious rituals and feast days throughout the year, the song)
Baveras, Helping One, give the brave men tons of fish ->
Baveras, Helping One, give the brave men pygges of fish

[Artimidor Federkiel]

Ok... One section now done completely: Earth Heft Measures.

Still open however what we do with the three mentions of "ounce", here are the examples... Any idea how we could rephrase that? Maybe we could make our own Santharian idiom to express these "ounce" references? Any suggestions?

Blood Bear
While the terrible stories and retellings of encounters are enough to send a shiver down anyone's spine, there is only an ounce of truth to them

Alvang
In times long past dark elves, orcs, and dark mages populated the island, filling the isle with every ounce of evil they possessed.

The Gondolwenmith Men ("The Practical Krean")
Indeed, the Gondolwain approach the land they live upon and the waters they sail across as if they were conducting commerce with the elements, determined to wring every ounce of value.

[Valan Nonesuch]

Perhaps I'm missing it but excepting by looking through her team page, I can't find any of the Mullog lore written by our good colleague Seth. It's on the site, only walled off, as there don't seem to be any menus that link to these.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

No limit on archers is needed, so long as the players are calm and unruly.

This is from the entry on String the Ring, and makes no sense. "Calm" and "Unruly" contradict one another. I suggest:

No limit on archers is needed, so long as the players are calm and not unruly.

Although this is a tautology, at least it makes sense. I would however say that:

No limit on archers is needed, so long as the players are not unruly.

is better, and that since the two halves of the sentence are slightly unconnected:

The number of archers is only limited by the number of armed men who can be gathered in one space to play a game without becoming unruly.

might be better still.

Just spotted it.

[Athviaro Shyu-eck-Silfayr]

Also, there's an entry on the "Chemycals end Elemenes" that lists the earth name for each chemical; should this be changed to the "common/vulgar name" so as to maintain consistency?

Ath

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