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Llian Aarchim
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« on: 21 January 2003, 18:55:00 »


Introduction/Overview
The town of Kurstir is a town that will be forever regognized as the "The Garden Town" which is exsactly what it is. Kurstir is not only the most unique town upon the continant of Sarvonia but is the only one of its kind in the world. The town, instead of being built like conventional towns are the medium sized town was grown, yes grown. The town of Kurstir is due north-west of the south watch and is situated upon the Anchient River mainly so that the town is always being fed and watered, it is said to have been founded by the great Wizard known only to the locals as Defantion who was said to have casted a spell across the grounds of the town so that a Garden Town could be grown. Rumour has it he still lives in the great Plant Tower of Canton which is situated in the center of the plant town, but he is never seen. Kurstir is a town that was grown from seedlings over 300 years ago, the houses over that time were grown into giant mushrooms eatch standing over 20 feet high, hollowed out and made as a nice snug and warm home that a small family could live inside. Other houses known as Petal-Beds are made from the bulbs of a number of plants, a door is carved from the stem of the plant and dug down under the ground and into the bulb of the plant, these places often serve as a shop or store house. Msot of the towns populance are druids,healers and natralists who would rather live within a plant and nurture there home rather than a dirty great castle or unatural homes. Only residents of the town may actually enter the town. Outlanders, visitors and traverlers must say within a Inn called the "Gateway" which in its self is a giant mushroom standing well over 70 feet tall and its vines (used as walk ways from the harbour) stretch right out into the river for its feeding source. Many find the populance of Kurstirs way of living rather strange but for druids, and naturalists it is quite a haven.


- more to come, but before i continue and add much more detail can i have some opinions? I know its hard to understna dirght now but as i add the rest on after your thoughts it will be come way more clear what my goal is..:)  

Edited by: Llian Aarchim at: 1/21/03 1:03:35 am
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« Reply #1 on: 23 January 2003, 06:05:00 »

Looks interesting, but please don't forget to use the places sheme!

and another thing I don't like:

" Kurstir is not only the most unique town upon the continant of Sarvonia but is the only one of its kind in the world"

Please don't use such termini which exclude others to do Unique things as well. There might be a town as unique as yours - in an other respect.What about the town in the Sharadon forest?(Seraia??) it is as unique as yours. And you surely can't say, that it is the only town in the world build like this. What do you know about Nybelmar? There could be one as well. Or on this other totally undeveloped continent..what was the name of it?you may say it is the only one in this and that region, but not as generall as you did, sorry!

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