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« on: 03 February 2002, 15:42:00 »
 Ximax

Light and Shadow clash
Ahm and Soor; their lash
Tears open the fabric of the land

A sphere glitters and shines
Radiating magic lines
Beauty conceals danger's darkened hand

Ximan wanders forth
He wonders at his worth
But what is this strange shimmering band?

Energies stream out
Ximan's triumphant shout
Echoes in the mountains and the sand

Eleven Towers rise
Connecting earth and skies
All of them bearing the Founder's brand

Eleven Staffs are wielded
The Orb of Ximax shielded
The Magic City glows in twilight's hand

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« Reply #1 on: 04 February 2002, 12:41:00 »
What is this? Are we all becoming poets and don't know it? :lol

Actually I like it.

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« Reply #2 on: 05 February 2002, 23:04:00 »
Looks that way Capher lol  You're up next ;)  

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« Reply #3 on: 05 February 2002, 23:47:00 »
i, personally, like it. my favorite stanza being:
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A sphere glitters and shines
Radiating magic lines
Beauty conceals danger's darkened hand


something about that last line sucks me in and holds me mesmerized...

"Popai n'o sonko ligta luc for'is a ment'ik, popai o sonko lighta lac o mart."
Sor'inyt saying - "Ask not why the sun sets, but why it rises."

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« Reply #4 on: 06 February 2002, 18:02:00 »
Thank you, Anaea! It is the entire "feeling" of the Orb, after all. All the power of the clashes of Ava and Coor accidentally pouring through this spherical, beautiful, and extremely dangerous rift in the Dream. Kind of a supercharged Void.

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« Reply #5 on: 09 February 2002, 22:23:00 »
*shoves*

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