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« on: 21 August 2004, 05:05:00 »

Upon re-reading all the comments I recieved at my previous stories I came up to the decision that most of criticism indeed reflected the flaws in my writings. This time, I tried to write a "less ambitious" story as dear Bard Judith suggested ;) . As some of you might have noticed I've been working pretty hard on the forums; commenting, researching, writing and finishing up entries. I've also tried to drastically reduce the 'plethora of adjectives' I generally use in an attempt to prevent the telling of the story to interfere with the tale itself too much.

I have a few entries I want to set up this week. Hopefully I'll have enough time to finish them before next tuesday.

I really hope I was able to come up with a pleasant read for fellow Santharians and sufficient background to support the plot and characters.

As always, c&c is welcome. I do try to take in as many of them as I can no matter how harsh they are. Although they hurt at first, it is how we learn I guess. Below is a list of things mentioned in this chapter that may not be familiar to some of the readers. With a little of luck, I'll be filled with enough Judithicism/Talia-commenting/Rayne-inspiration/Art-wisdom in the following weeks to flesh out as many of these entries as possible.




Flora mentioned that need/don’t have entries

* Aleá root – dark ale
* Dark háráth tree – wood for doors. Thick, sturdy. A dark brown shine to it.
* Vrená lily
* Laurel leaves
* Larkentir Trees (working on it)

Flora mentioned that are done
* Squrim Moss
* Sou’cald Moss
* Nightshimmer Vine leaves – used to produce clairvoyant dreams when brewed under the hands of an extremely skilled herbalist.
* Waterstar blooms – are served as a fresh tea with a taste so delicate that it is hard to describe. Eating too many waterstar blooms is also associated with beauty.
* Wean Grass – a light yellow, delicately-bladed grass with a love for bright sunlight.
* Red (River) Birch

Fauna mentioned that are done
* Milch Goat
* The Taenish - a small bird whose drab look and lack of intelligence makes it easier to take care of and do away with when supper time arrives
* Havach ox
* Bat (darksinger)
* Nyjae – a good tasting fish living in the oceans around the continent of Nybelmar, the Crimson Isles, and the R’unor.

Tribes – discussed in the forums but still don’t have entries
* Zhunites: “The Anpagan passion for profit and Krant grit wasn’t always a pleasant combination”
* Banderrath nomads:

Orders/Sects/Occupations mentioned that need entries
* Blue Wardens: The most lethal and stealthy sentries of the Twin Kingdom. See Krean Men entry.
* the Assembly of the Thousand Eyes
* water dancers
* Bird Singers
* The Golden Coronet – entry coming right up!

Places – need entries
* The Graveyards of …:
-Flora: Squrim Moss, Sou’cald Moss
-Weather/Climate: Always gray and half misty there. Always a dash of wind tugging lightly at one’s cloak… The sky always on the verge of raining, yet the stones were hardly ever touched with anything more than a drizzle.
-Myth/Lore/Legend: Old power still strong despite the gaps in the structure.

* The Gardens – Leading herbiology school in Krath. Located in the southern jungles.

* Rháásthár – capital of the Twin Kingdom. See Krean Men.

People
- Déárán
- Khálíd Rhuníth
- Célérés “Sunshine”
- Lady Akánthá
- Lord Cyrús and Lady Aleríssá – Akánthá’s parents
- Aléron, Cyr, Endré, Gálen, Aláír, Evásn – Déárán’s friends from the Golden Coronet
- Gérán Fleetfoot – a famous ship maker of the time
- Sword Master Elí
- Sword Master Dérus
- 'Lady’ Anézhá – a fat and highly annoying noblewoman
- Councilor Vorán
- Aurellian – Advisor responsible for the Krean Queen’s celebrations

Titles
- Watch Master, Speech Master, Master Herbsman, Swordmaster

Products
- Anpagan cologne
- Spilk fabrics – see Krean Men entry and/or talk with Talia.
- Fruit(honey) liquor – see Krean Men.

Colors
- Karikrimson - see Judith's color palette.

Deities
- Loreán: Korweynite God of Beauty.
- Ankriss (aka Anuviss in Zhun): Krath High Goddess of Earth.

Time measurements (entry needed)
- Blink: One second.
- Sandfall: Five seconds.

Phrases
* May the Earth swathe you in your direst hour – a former Krath farewell.
* For the love of Kibele Anuviss – An exclamation common in eastern Zhun.

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