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Alysse the Likely
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« on: 24 June 2006, 12:09:00 »

A song for weddings and births from the Kuglimz lands.  When sung to celebrate a birth, the word "love" may replaced by "child".

" Song of Joy and Welcome"


The world is different now
Though still the seasons run,

The world is different now
But bright still shines the sun.


And yet the world will never be the same
For today my love, into my heart, you came


The world is different now
Though boys grow into men,

The world is different now
Yet we ride forth again.


And yet the world will never be the same
For today my love, into my heart, you came.

The world is different now
Though girls to women turn,

The world is different now
Yet lessons still we learn.


And yet the world will never be the same
For today my love, into my heart, you came.




Loosely translated from the Kuglimz'seitre by Alysse the Likely


As you wish, dear Webmaster, a name has been added, though it is also known as the Celebration Song and can be put up under that name if you prefer.  However, it is first and foremost a love song--whether between lovers or from parent to child--and that's how it should be classified  :)  

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« Reply #1 on: 24 June 2006, 13:58:00 »

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« Reply #2 on: 27 June 2006, 23:26:00 »

Hey Alysse! This is a wonderful piece!

Just one thing I feel could help it flow better but still keep things intact. Just the swapping of two words

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And still bright shines the sun.


And still shines bright the sun.


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« Reply #3 on: 29 June 2006, 12:03:00 »

Thanks, Talia and Kalina!

I've also added a verse--our talented song mistress Bard Judith suggested that I mention girls as well as boys and that three verses was a better length for a song than two.  So my thanks to her as well, and I'll provisionally add the blue arrow, though there's still time for  comments before next update.

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« Reply #4 on: 29 June 2006, 12:58:00 »

Another lovely song, Alysse, straight from your heart onto the Santharian Forum:)  :nod

Small hint: I would suggest to always give the songs/poems a proper name, e.g. here "The world is different now" would seems appropriate perhaps (or "Changes", something like that), because we might end up with lots of Kuglimz battle songs, celebration songs and what not. The "Kuglimz celebration song" could be used as some sort of subtitle, explanation here then.


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« Reply #5 on: 30 June 2006, 23:58:00 »

Aaaaaaaand.... just a little side note for my dear sister... I've composed a melody for this, Alysse.  It is my goal, before the end of the summer, to learn how to get my music OFF my keyboard and ONTO my computer as midi files.  

I currently have a 'gift' for Gean entitled "Sailing to Zandiria" - based on his island -  a wonderfully cheerful "Dwarven March" (featuring the Knertmor and Mezuzil!), a lulling freeform composition I've tentatively entitled "Dusk Notes", and now your "Kuglimz Celebrations"...

Somehow these have to make it from a 'my-ears-only' status so that they can be shared with my fellow Compendiumists.  Further updates as events warrant!  

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« Reply #6 on: 01 July 2006, 08:07:00 »

(squeals) Ooooh!  A Bard Judith tune for my song!  I can't wait to hear it and I do hope you can get your songs onto the computer to share with the rest of the Dreamers.  I love the "Sailing to Zandiria" song, it's especially beautiful.

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