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« Reply #30 on: 18 March 2003, 16:54:00 »

*knock* *knock*

How are the final revisions here, Viresse?


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« Reply #31 on: 18 March 2003, 22:36:00 »

Sorry, busy...
I'll take the snippet you gave and poke that into the entry; hopefully tonight!


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« Reply #32 on: 25 March 2003, 14:36:00 »

*points with finger to entry like mommy does when telling the baby to eat all the soup*

Viresse! Finish please! Only a few lousy things left to do... ;)  


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« Reply #33 on: 25 March 2003, 17:06:00 »

*nods ruefully and sets to work*


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« Reply #34 on: 25 March 2003, 17:17:00 »

Dropped in some more text.
Maybe a Uri check, please?


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« Reply #35 on: 26 March 2003, 14:06:00 »

Is there an exact definition of an Uri check BTW?

I checked it already in detail before you did your final changes, Viresse, so I guess there's nothing major wrong with it, and all the small things which are still a bit unclear will be adjusted when I put it up (and a might add a line or two here and there).


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« Reply #36 on: 26 March 2003, 15:04:00 »

A uri check is basically copying the Text, pasting it into a reply and then pointing and adressing the mistakes EXACTLY where they occur; usually using a Bold face or a different color.

Fish are really kewl. Cool I like when they hop out of their tanks and walk around on the floor. Uhm, maybe some eels, but fish don't do that. They have rad luhnges Uhm, they have gills, and that word was spelled LUNGS and smell like roses. Ha. No they don't. I want more fish!


And that's pretty much a Uri check.


And what do you plan on changing? If I knew what I was doing wrong It'd happen less... *sniffles*


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« Reply #37 on: 27 March 2003, 16:55:00 »

*hihi* Cool example. Yeah, I think an Uri check might be a good idea. I'll do the next Places entry check using the Uri system;)

BTW: At a final version when I put things up, I usually don't write completely new things, just rephrase a few sentences or add a detail here and there which pops into my mind at the time when I read it one final time. I try to mention major things always when I comment, and an Uri check will make things even easier for both sides I think;)


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« Reply #38 on: 27 March 2003, 19:07:00 »

it defenitely works at the Char board. Sometimes after reading such a long CD you forget the weird stuff at the beginning and only comment on the last stuff- letting a weird amount of unclear or wrong info slip through.

Doing a Urie check can correct spelling and grammar, as well as state weird or unclear ideas RIGHT where they happen. It saves time and people know what EXACTLY you're talking about.


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