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« Reply #30 on: 30 October 2009, 04:53:20 »

I'm still working on it! I think most of the complicated things are covered. I just have to flesh out the flora, fauna, and a few other sections. One thing I did notice was Loiblh bread. It's said to be disputed whether it was created in Alvang or Elsreth. Since it clearly can't be an Alvang specialty, can I just nab it for Elsreth, and update that entry as well?
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« Reply #31 on: 30 October 2009, 04:56:38 »

Ok, just take your time, I can check back again anyway not before next week, because it's update weekend:

Loibla: Indeed, the Alvang reference definitely has to go, but I'd recommend to simply change that reference to something else, because this rivalry between these two locations is part of the entry.
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« Reply #32 on: 27 May 2010, 04:04:12 »

I would like to offer this near complete entry for an apprentice to finish off. Chronusian's work shouldn't go to waste. Since we helped finish Mannix's pigs, perhaps we can help Chronu here as well.  thumbup
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« Reply #33 on: 27 May 2010, 04:23:37 »

Me please! (If that's ok... :D)
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« Reply #34 on: 27 May 2010, 05:30:12 »

It's great that M'ruk is enthusiastic, but:

Has Chronusian been sent a PM and e-mail? Is there a chance that he might return and do the job himself? I think we shouldn't take things out of authors' hands before we've given them ample chance to let us know if they want to complete their work.

PS: I just checked Chronusian's profile and saw that he logged in today...
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« Reply #35 on: 27 May 2010, 06:01:44 »

Well nevermind! It seems Chronu magically reappears after several months... ;)

I was just hoping to see this entry finished, so I apologize to Chronu if I jumped the gun a bit. I do hope you can come back soon though!  wave
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« Reply #36 on: 27 July 2010, 04:51:45 »

Hi! I'd like to go ahead and wrap this up, but I'm terribly busy of late. So if you'd like to help finish it, I'd be more than happy to have your assistance.

At the moment, I'm having trouble picking it back up, because the computer that held my notes on it decided to die, so my massive cross-reference and resources listings I no longer have available. I'll look at what I can pick up based on what's been posted here... shouldn't be that much. I believe part of the history is most of it, ala the Elemental Archbishops and a few minor edits throughout.

It's of my opinion that because history is constantly changing and developing that it's not necessary to have the -complete- history of the city mapped out. It will serve to further delay the publishing of this significant city to the site.
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« Reply #37 on: 27 July 2010, 04:59:37 »

And Chrocu, err, Chronu makes his yearly appearance... Yaaaaay!  cool

Anyway, hope you can stay a while longer this time... And yeah, would love to see this getting picked up again, and if it's done by the original writer, then even better!  thumbup

I'd also say that getting all the history drawn out isn't really necessary - some key dates, in case they can be found on site already or you can come up with some more, is fine, but you don't need to list everything from beginning to end, definitely not. ;)
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« Reply #38 on: 04 August 2010, 01:00:38 »

Okay Arti, I've looked over the Entry and it seems as if what's left is to address the things mentioned in the last Uri Check you posted. I'm going to work on those things as quickly as possible. Because of my schedule, I can't finish this quickly, but I expect to have it done withn the next 2-3 weeks.
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« Reply #39 on: 04 August 2010, 02:41:28 »

That''s fine, as long as you don't forget about it and can get to it more sooner than later :) So take your time and let me know then when you're ready, so that I can give it another look.  thumbup
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