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« on: 29 May 2000, 23:32:00 »

Just finished the first draft. it is currently 4,300 words (9 pages in Word) long, an will get longer as I add better descriptions and conversations than it currently has. Basically it's Greybark's backstory, why he left the valley on an owl, etc.
It currently has no name and hasn't even been spellchecked yet.
Just wanted to let all of you know :)  
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Edited by Greybark  at: 5/29/00 7:55:30 am
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« Reply #1 on: 18 June 2000, 05:59:00 »

Up to 6,000 words.
Beginning to be more far-reaching because of introduction-flashes for some of the more important Brownies of the clan.

Spoiler Alert.

One of the characters has firsthand info on what Santharia will become in five thousand years

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« Reply #2 on: 18 June 2000, 08:40:00 »

Nice to hear of your progress, Greybark:)  But what the hell is this strange hint at the end? Will Santharians build the nuclear bomb in 5.000 years? Will they fly away on spaceships?? Does anyone still remember Artimidor at this time??? Is this character you speak of someone who went back in time, now turned to a brownie by some scientific device shrinking humans???? *haha*

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« Reply #3 on: 18 June 2000, 09:00:00 »

No nuclear bombs.....that wouldn't fit a fantasy world very well. Lets just say that someone shows up (a Brownie) that everyone is afraid of, but claims to have knowlege of the distant future, and be working toward an unknown goal towards changing it......then again, so far she's a bit character....she could be lying, I guess....haven't gotten that far yet.
BTW, just about ready for you or a Beta reader to preview this, chapter 1, before putting it online :)  

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« Reply #4 on: 19 June 2000, 05:05:00 »

Ok, mail it over there, Grey:)  Eventually I will give it to Thalydia after I had a first glance at it!

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