THE
SANTHARIAN
POET
MONSONIUS
(MENS
LORSON) |
The son of a Caltharian merchant and an Avennorian trader-lass, Mens Lorson (1272-1295) lived an intense, yet only very short life. He is known mainly under his author's pseudonym "Monsonius" and is remembered for his romantic lyrics and his groundbreaking approach of writing semi-poetic novels by many a Santharian today, even centuries after his far too early death. Especially his re-discovery in the 16th century paved the way for a strong Manthrian tradition of the so-called "Monsonian poetry" which tries to follow the unique style of the works of this rather humble Marcoggian artist. Thus, without any doubt, Monsonius can be considered to be one of Santharia's greatest and most influential writers, who has remained unforgotten to this very day. Aside from his brilliant writings, his personal tragedies may have contributed to lending Monsonius an aura of immortality that only a handful of other writers share.
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Appearance. Though "portraits" of the Manthrian poets can be seen nowadays in many a publication or a museum in Marcogg, there unfortunately exist actually no confirmed drawings of the great writer. For one, Monsonius was a rather withdrawn person with only a few personal friends, so he was rarely seen in public. Rather, he was known to seek out a quiet place near a lively creek, where he could listen for hours. He shunned social events; some say one of the reasons was because of his sensivity about his slight hunchback, a deficiency he was born with.
Fame came
only after his death, despite his
tragic liaision with the daughter of the Parthanul Count that brought him
briefly into
the public's eye, fame came only after his death. So while his works were
valued by a handful of people of his literary circle, the sketches that were
made of the person Mens Lorson existed mostly in written form. They would find
their way into a proper biography not before half a dozen years after he had was
interred next to his beloved Stela. He was then drawn
based on such texts and the memory of those people who still had known
Monsonius in person.
His fellow writer Aimen Jolith, in his well-known "Memoirs of Time Past", probably provides the best insights on how
Monsonius appeared to others when he writes in his memoirs: "I often wondered
how that small, inconspicuous fellow that lived next to the bakery in the
Northwall above the Mashdai came to that rich language. How he had learned that keen
reasoning and how to dream at the same time, how he was capable of painting with
words, yes, painting I'd call it - all those perceptive descriptions of people
and landscapes that seem to descend on
our world from somewhere else through the means of his quill. But yes, I
wondered how that all happened, very much so, as he was so different to all the
other writers I've known. After all I saw him buy the same kind of
loibl every day at that bakery,
never would he have dared to lay his hands on another kind, never would he have
broken away from what he had been used to all his life. He must have appeared as
a rather dull, even a gawky lad to everyone else on the street in the way he was
scuffling home, his shirt's collar awry, his thoughts elsewhere.
He would lean to the side a bit when walking, due to his deficiency from birth
on, and I've heard the noblest ladies giggle when he was passing by.
Though once they had had the honour of being introduced to Mens, their laughter
would soon yield to wonder, as in his eyes was reflected the melancholy of his solitary life.
He looked sad, yet mysterious, like a well whose depth you don't quite know unless you throw
a stone into it. I recall that he was always frowning at the ladies of society when he first met them, and
his out-of-place stern look made everyone feel as if staring into an abyss or at
the open sky, wonderful or tragic, it was always hard to say. He had that
mystery in his eyes, a sparkle that kept one guessing what lay behind that
face. And then, when conversation was inevitable, he started opening up - and it
usually caught everyone by surprise that he was actually a very entertaining and
articulate fellow. I must admit I didn't know what to make of him, and
eventually only got a glimpse of who Mens was in his writings, and most of this
I only had the chance to see when he
had already left this world."
The most common sketches we have of Monsonius reflect this
description perfectly, and it also might convey the character better than his actual
appearance. Because as so often when a young person dies, an ideal image is kept
in the hearts of those who survived the deceased - and soon an entire myth is
born.
Personality. From his early days of childhood Mens Lorson was
destined to become lost in life. While he was born in
Marcogg as a result of an affair of a
visiting Caltharian merchant, he
spent the first years of his life in Carmalad,
following the wish of his reluctant father. But when his mother became sicker and sicker,
Mens and his parents returned to Marcogg,
only to bury her about a year later when Mens was nine cycles of age. In the
following years his father was rarely present in
Marcogg, leaving the education of his son in the hands of the best private
teachers he could find while travelling the lands searching for business
opportunites. Mens had difficulties in making friends - as soon as he had
settled in Carmalad he found himself
elsewhere, confronted with the loss of his mother and dire prospects without his
father being around. More and more Mens slid into his own world, which mainly
consisted of reading books from all parts of the world he could lay his hands
on, and early on he tried to imitate these writers by constructing poems and
writing imaginative tales. Often he would spend hours and hours on a simple
paragraph, attempting to make the lines perfect, forgetting everything else
around himself.
Yet his loneliness and melancholy, the fact that he felt torn
and lost in a world that wasn't made for him, always shone through in the pieces
he wrote. His only hope for escape was doomed right from the start, when his
muse, the beautiful Stela, succumbed to her long
illness, which only made Monsonius even more reclusive. Interestingly, he rarely ever actually talked about himself in his diaries, though it was filled
with observations on everything around him, with thoughts on it and how it could
translate into his work. Monsonius also created texts of hope, of dreams and worlds
that follow their own weird but strikingly beautiful kind of logic. All these
works can stand entirely on their own and read very refreshing and uplifting.
But on retrospection, once we take a closer look at the person of Mens Lorson, all his
works somehow point back to his tragic existence, which followed a natural
scheme he was convinced that he couldn't escape. "To suffer from fate means to
simply experience accidental things that follow on purpose," Monsonius once
remarked. "But it is preposterous to think that a mortal has any insight in said
purpose, whereever it might have its source."
The most personal text Monsonius ever wrote in his diary - a rare piece
indeed - clearly mirrors the ups and downs of his life, the loneliness and
desperation which he however accepts for himself, following his belief in destiny. It
refers to the vastness of sea and the experiences gained from it, a metaphor
which was in common use for many an
Avennorian poet of that time. The following text also already provides a
glimpse of Monsonius' tendency to begin a text in mere prose and embed in it
poetic rhymes, a way of writing that would give direction to many
Avennorian writers following his
example:
Entry of 3rd Molten Ice 1292. I am but a
wave. Far out there, in the endless depths of the Adanian Ocean, horizon
way in front, the Injèrá far above.
Next to me my comrades are floating, some ahead, some behind,
following the wind and his commands -
and are deaf and mute as waves are supposed to be. Regardless whether I'm
just drifting along, mumbling or even roaring in my tiny wavy life,
the voyage is long, so long, but sometime, so I've been told, we will all
arrive. Thus we're continuing, the thousands and thousands of waves that we
are, always on the move, away and away, right into the next eternity, some
ahead of me and some behind. From time to time however the
wind, our only Lord and Master, dies
down and with him each one of us, and we join together, are sad and we are
purling aimlessly, whispering to us for comfort: So far, so far... |
Biography.
Unplanned Child (1272). Mens Lorson was born during
the Age of Discovery, a tranquil, thriving time for the
United Kingdom of Santharia. The wars of
the south were long over, what had been destroyed was by now rebuilt, and trade
between the tribes and races was better than ever. So it happened that a
Caltharian merchant by the name
of Thertin Lorson visited the Manthrian
province, where he made the acquaintance of the daughter of an
Avennorian business
contact, Menja Skangarris. One thing led to another, and the merchant and Menja
ended up in the same bed following a raucous festival in
Ciosa. And as far as the merchant was concerned, this was all there was to
it and should ever be.
Yet a few months later he received a letter from Menja, who had found out about his
address by going through her father's business contact list. Thus he learned that Menja
was pregnant with his child and that the disgrace of a premarital child was
too much to bear for her in face of her family that held high moral standards.
So she left
Ciosa once and for all, begging him to help
her deal with the situation that concerned both of them. Reluctantly Thertin Lorson followed her wish and paid the rent for her
hideout in Marcogg, and briefly stayed in the
town as well in the last months of Manja's pregnangy. The child was named Mens (following his mother)
and received the second name from his father. Mens was born with a slight
hunchback, which was barely noticeable at first, but which would develop more
prominently in his early teens.
The Early Years in
Carmalad (1273-1279). Only a few months
after Mens' birth, his father decided to bring him back to his own homeland, to the Caltharian port town
of Carmalad. While this seemed to solve all
problems at first, Mens' mother soon became ill after the arrival with a condition that the
healers couldn't put into a drawer. Some say the she couldn't get used to the
Northern port town air of
Carmalad and its strong breezes, others say
that leaving her family forever deeply gnawed at her and that it was only a
matter of time until she succumbed to her feelings of guilt. The illness of
Mens's mother became more and more troubling and his father lost many business
opportunities due to that as he made many sacrifices in order to tend to her
personally. Both their lives were about to be destroyed. In all that Mens himself
spent little time with his parents, instead his father invested in nannies and
teachers that should raise him while his mother was incapable of doing so.
But hope that her life could still be saved dwindled as the months passed.
The Return to
Marcogg (1280).
When Mens was eight cycles of age, his father finally gave in and the family
moved back to Marcogg, in the hopes that the
condition of Mens' mother would improve. The family even settled in the very
same house where Menja had given birth to her son, a small cottage in the
Northwall District above the Mashdai River. It is obvious that Thertin tried his best, confident
that the memories of her son's birth would help his wife recover. But it was
already too late.
Death of Mens' Mother Menja (1281). When Mens'
mother died as a result of her illness where nobody could fathom what caused it
and how to counter it, her only son was nine years of age. The tragedy hit the
family hard, as the only center of attention for many years was now gone, and
while Thertin still had money left, he needed to pick up where he had left and
put all his energy into re-establishing business contacts and earning money. Mens
still needed education and therefore was left back home most of the time while
his father travelled around Manthria. He
was taken care of once again by private teachers, destined to follow in the
footsteps of his father as a merchant as well. Yet, soon it became clear that he
was better with dealing with words than juggling numbers.
First Work, first Encounter (1288). Aged sixteen,
it became apparent that Mens was highly talented in various fields, which
resulted eventually in a position helping out with bookkeeping for Count
Jorscogg, Lord over one of Manthria's
coastal fiefs, Parthanul. Jorscogg had an office in
Marcogg to handle administrative procedures
and was happy to welcome the young and promising Mens. Soon it turned out that
Mens also felt strangely attracted to the third and last daughter of the Count,
Stela, who apparently was strikingly beautiful, yet
suffered under a supposedly uncurable mental disease that caused a persisting
depression. She usually avoided company and rarely talked, and like Mens she had
lost her mother early on in life. Due to these symptoms she was constantly under
observation by local healers, who prescribed her long walks in the countryside.
Mens, already back then a quiet, even reclusive person, however seemed to
relish Stela's presence and she his, and they often
walked together along the Northwall, over parts of Stormwarden Ridge, happy to
be together, and interestingly - as observers tell us - often without speaking
a single word for hours. The Count approved of his daughter's relationship with
a commoner, knowing too well that there was little else he could do to make her
happy. It was at that time when Mens started to write
seriously, first by composing songs and poems about nature and beauty in
general, which he'd recite to Stela. From that time also
date his first diary notes. Mens considered her his inspiration, his muse, yet
it seems that both were happy with these circumstances, and soon the first
fruits of Mens' work would show.
First Publication: "Man" (1289). By 1289 Mens had
already produced dozens of poems, elegies, parables and fables, which brought
him an invitation to a literary circle, that had gotten aware of his talents. As
many believe, the invitation was probably suggested by Count Jorscogg himself.
Reluctantly Mens agreed to share his works there, yet only appeared occasionally
to discussions. Nevertheless, he received offers to publish his works - and as he always was in
need of money, he gladly accepted. For some reason he decided not to use his
birth name when he published his works and instead went for "Monsonius", a
tradition that would become very popular much later in the 16th century among
his followers, the so-called "Monsonians".
The first novel Monsonius finished was titled "Man" and deals
with a man, or more precisely a human, who is
convicted for a crime that is never specified in the entire novel, nor whether he is actually guilty or not. Written from an entirely subjective point
of view, the protagonist expects execution, yet is spared from it and put into a
dungeon, where he eventually is forgotten. Whether, and if so when, he dies in
that dungeon only the reader can decide, as storytelling shifts from actual
happenings to memories to dreams and back again. Monsonius already weaves many
lyrical passages into the novel, and at times it seems that everything dissolves
in an otherwordly dream, which by many is interpreted as a reference to Avá's eternal
Dream. The title itself also hints at the fact that the story is a parable on
the human condition that is trapped in a
prison of restraints where there is no escape, and that there are other truths
out there that transcend it. While not fully understood and appreciated upon its
publishing, the book made Mens a respected person among other writers and
he earned enough money to be able to persue a career as a writer.
Fate strikes again - the Disappearance of Thertin Lorson
(1291). In early 1290 Mens saw his father for the last time. It is no
secret that Thertin had turned to drinking after the death of his wife and that
business wasn't taking the direction he had planned, but somehow he had always
struggled through it. In spring 1290 however he suddenly disappeared, for
reasons unknown. He was meant to go on a business trip, yet he never arrived on
his destination and a body was never found. Mens was now left all alone, yet now
with 19 cycles of age he was already a man by himself and earned money through
bookkeeping and writing. His only consistent relationship was with Stela
Jorscogg, other than that he became even further withdrawn, dedicating most of
his time to writing. He had several narrations, many poems and even two stage
plays published that year.
"The First Battle" (1293). More and more Monsonius
became an established writer with every piece he published. After two more
volumes of poetry he finished the monumental 700-page long novel titled "The
First Battle", dealing with people who are supposed to defend a besieged city
from an impending onslaught. The book describes only the preparations for the
inevitable fight, the considerations, the various beliefs, the fears and the
tragedies within the people of the town before the assault actually happens. The
book ends at the moment the battle begins. Many scholars consider the "Battle"
Monsonius's masterpiece, as it reflects on many different perspectives of a
situation, presented in a gripping, suspenseful way, where everyone has to
decide upon his or her ultimate priorities in the face of death. Destiny seems
to move the pieces on the board in a way that there is no escape on from
decision-making for anyone - and there are some suprises in store.
The Death of
Stela Jorscogg (1294). On a bright summerday morning in 1294
Monsonius lost his last anchor in life. The beautiful Stela,
his friend and muse, died peacefully in her sleep while resting in the garden.
Shaken by the course of events that seemed to eliminate all hopes and prospects
he ever might have had, Monsonius needed weeks to write another line. Eventually
he sat down to get the famous poem "A Bright Summerday" committed to paper,
a document about the transitoriness of life and a touching
remembrance to his beloved muse. Again and again the day of
Stela's death haunted Monsonius, and he wrote a multitude of poems on the
subject from various angles, which later came to be known as the "Summerday
Cycle". Each of these pieces displays extraordinary mastery of his craft.
The Death of Monsonius (1295). Beginning with "A
Bright Summerday", Monsonius didn't seem to drop his quill for several months.
He wrote dozens of fantastic tales in his semi-poetic style at that time, aside from
long elegies and extensive diaries. He finally began a major, yet untitled work that
should deal with the "breath of the world" as he put it at some point in a side
note of his diary. Alas, many of the things he started and was working on,
remained unfinished.
One summerday in late Sleeping Dreameress 1295 Mens Lorsen was found at the
Stormwarden Ridge, a place where he and Stela had often
enjoyed the beautiful view, looking at the
Mithral Mountains, the Canyons of
Ar'Zunith, and far in the distance,
Keep Mistrash. There he lay at the bottom of the gorge, his neck broken. He
was carried home for final prayers on his deathbed by his writing colleagues
who had found him, guessing that he had been visiting
Stela's grave on the foot of the mountain. Thus the third and last member of
the Lorson family had died within just a few years, but one cannot say that this
unfortunate family did not leave its traces in
Santharia's history. With Monsonius died one of the kingdom's greatest
poets, forever to be remembered.
Importance.
The unplanned child Mens Lorson, better known as "Monsonius" to most of the
world,
became one of Santharia's greatest
literary treasures.
Although during his lifetime Monsonius did not receive the appropriate
response from the readers which would have been justified due to the quality of
his writings, he never ceased to continue in his lyrical efforts in order to
describe the world he was part of and to transcend it in any way he possibly
could. Only years after his death he received first substantial
recognition, and it was not before the
16th century of the Santharian Calendar
that
Monsonius was re-discovered by Santhalian
scholars. Thereafter, his works have remained unforgotten.
A literary movement following Monsonius' footsteps arose in said century in
the Manthrian province, consisting of
independent writers that produced various works in the tradition of their
Avennorian idol. It was
spearheaded by the Ciosan poet and sailor
Chyrán, who was often referred to as the new Monsonius. In 1558 he became famous
overnight with a typical poetical novel written in Monsonian style, which he
left without title.
This work, by
many known in the meantime as "The Ring" is an extraordinary cyclic story, that
slows down and speeds up in what critics described as a "dance between prose and
lyrics, between fantasy and reality", even more daring, more engaging than
Monsonius himself ever managed to accomplish in his texts. The book is written
from a subjective point of view where the protagonist returns from a long voyage
on the sea and discovers himself already sitting in his house upon arriving
home. He observes himself working on a novel describing a man returning home
from a long voyage on the sea. As the protagonist looks over the writer's
shoulder he seems to read about himself and his return home, but still things
change miraculously chapter by chapter when the character in the book discovers
another alter ego and so on. This leads the reader more and more into a world
where nothing is what it seems and at the same time the reader gets overwhelmed
with fascination by the strong poetry found in the text. People old and young of
very different education levels seem to enjoy Chyrán's poetic novel. Even
sailors take it with them on long trips, reading it again and again, constantly
discovering new sides in the text, and being lulled into sleep by the rhythm of
the lyrics found in the book, reminiscent of the breath of the sea while conveying
an aura of peace and tranquility.
Undeniably "The Ring" is a stylistic masterpiece, where the
author has studied the works of Monsonius rather well, and if one looks closer
at the text one may also discover that there are many references to a certain
poet from Marcogg in it that are not
apparent at first glance. Actually, after several scholars have studied the
text meticulously, it seems to be common belief that the protagonist of "The
Ring" is no other than Monsonius himself. There's no greater honour a
Santharian poet can receive than to be
worked into a masterpiece of another poet, and the fact that dozens of scholars
were needed to decipher the text in order to notice his presence which is right before one's eyes clearly adds to
that.
Today Monsonius's work is essential for a multitude of people - for lovers, who
cannot get enough of his "Summerday Cyle"; for those who have to face their
foes, be it as internal struggles or against actual enemies in a war, "The First
Battle" is literature one shouldn't miss; also Monsonius's fables give advice or
pose necessary questions everybody should deal with - and finally for people to
bridge the differences between the races there's always the monumental work of
Monsonius he simply titled "Man". It is hard to find a person who should not be
recommended to read the poet's works, as in his texts so much is reflected "that it
is frightening to see how he lived a full life-time and more in his mere 23 years" as a
recent critic put it. And to those that seek the author himself in all those
fabulous texts, his diaries included, and find little of him, should be recited the
enigmatic words of the likewise immortal Chyrán:
"Don't look for Mens in his works. But there's surely someone to be discovered in there when you read his texts.
At least he has already found you. Maybe you'll find someone too."
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