Ruil Mallister / Erpheronian / Brigand

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[Twén Aråerwén]

OK since I do not have time for a lengthy explanation. Weapon skills of ANY magnitude are strengths. Lack of weapon skills are NOT weaknesses. End of discussion. If you do not wish to take my comments at face value as they are applied to other characters with the same even-handedness, I do have writings of my own to work on. My comments above stand, your call on if you desire integrating them. I would not of mentioned them if I did not feel they needed adjusted. If you find my comments not to your liking, then maybe another mod will see things your way. Sit back and wait for one to wander by. Peace.

[Ruil Mallister]

I definitely owe you an apology, Twen.  I'm sorry.

That is the first and foremost thing that I need to say.  I am indeed sorry for being so harsh, and, well, a prick.  While it doesn't excuse me, I feel I should explain why I was said prick: I had a fairly crappy weekend, and it's the same reason I haven't responded in 11 days.  And by crappy I mean that I was called by my landlady due to late rent, and I explained to her my financial situation and told her I'd get the money plus the late fee by the next weekend.  She seemed okay with it, but then 24 hours later I got a call from her saying that if I didn't find a place to live in three days, I'd be homeless.  I've spent said time trying just to find a place to stay, and thought about my shitty response to your input.  So again, I'm sorry.  I was very stressed, but I shouldn't have taken it out on you.  I hope you can forgive me.

I've reviewed Ruil's strengths and weaknesses once again, and I've just now posted my new edit.  I just want to point out that I don't include weapon skill with a mace as a strenght simply because he doesn't really have any skill with it.  He uses it as a last resort only, and specifically carries it because the mace by nature doesn't need much skill (afterall, it's basically whacking a guy with a stick).  If you feel that it still needs to be considered a strength, I'll gladly go back over it to see if I need to re-balance him.

I've included several weaknesses that I feel should give him flavor and get him to an even feel.  I hope they work for you.  I've also put his jousting skills in the strengths, just in case.

Let me know if you need me to change anything, and I again apologize for being an asshole.

[Twén Aråerwén]

All mention of dragon sightings must be removed from the CD. Still far too many weapons mentioned for one so young. He was taught in the sword, though he may stink with it he is beyond your average peasant. He uses the spear very well and he can joust with the lance very well. The mace needs to be mentioned, it is not just a whacking stick. It is a weapon that he uses somewhat frequently by the mention you have made of it. Such a multitude of weapon skills is beyond one of such a young age.
 

~Sincerely~

Cáo fá cár'tuulén:Twen Araerwen

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