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Author Topic: Frozen Darkness: OOC I  (Read 2572 times)
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Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin
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« Reply #210 on: January 04, 2008, 07:28:47 AM »

Hi Weivoc :)

There is a fundamental problem with what you are writing here, and I will try to express it properly.

You are posting as you, the writer, based on the things you have read.. other posts.. CDs and the like....

Though you MUST read all those things to be effective at writing, you cannot use them the way you are.  Do not write as You, the author... write as Weivoc the character...  He steps into a strange bar in a strange land where he is all alone...

He does not know who is a mage, who is a knight, who is an artist.. he sees people milling about.... people sitting, talking, drinking... who are they?  He has no idea yet...

The sounds of the tavern would drown out anything going on upstairs.. especially from someone who just entered the tavern... You ever walk into a crowded mall?  On the ground floor, you cannot tell what is going on in a store on the second floor...

In short... read everything... learn what is going on as the author.. but then when you start to write, become Weivoc.. only see what he sees.. only hear what he hears... only touch what he touches... feel what he feels inside.. his fears, hopes, suspicions, loves, hates.... then you will create a post that is effective ....

Hope that helps. :)
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« Reply #211 on: January 04, 2008, 11:27:46 AM »

Also, Vallari is no longer sketching Simonne's face. The pages have been scattered and picked up again, and now they're talking to Laoise.
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« Reply #212 on: January 04, 2008, 12:05:45 PM »

I am not quite sure how, by the way, it would be that he would have had the ability to see the picture from his position in the room if it was still out any how...
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« Reply #213 on: January 04, 2008, 02:59:43 PM »

ok, its been edited, sorry, everytime i tried to check up on everything, by reading the last 2-3 pages, the conversations kept getting me confused.
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« Reply #214 on: January 04, 2008, 03:07:02 PM »

Not a problem, Weivoc.  If you ever have questions, please feel free to contact us mods, as that is what we are here to do.  We are more than happpy to explain story points that confuse you, or give you advice if that is what you need.  We wish to make this an enjoyble experience for all, as well as create an intricate and interesting story.

The Wison is a busy part of the story, and to that end, it can be daunting to keep up.  But asking questions beforehand is preferable to innacurate posting, so do not be afraid to clarify certain points if needed.

Happy Posting. :D
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« Reply #215 on: January 05, 2008, 03:38:37 AM »

Sorry for my bit of absence, holidays and all that. Will get around to making a post soon. :)
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« Reply #216 on: January 06, 2008, 10:29:34 PM »

Here Ye Hear Ye... 2nd hour of Daywayne has struck.. the sun is lowering on the horizon now.... :D
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« Reply #217 on: January 06, 2008, 10:31:31 PM »

Gah the frozen-in-time disease had caught me too!
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« Reply #218 on: January 06, 2008, 11:42:36 PM »

Come back to life!
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« Reply #219 on: January 06, 2008, 11:53:02 PM »

Yeah. I'm gonna post tomorrow. Hopefully. If I can find Denrykmar's posts in that jungle of posts in the wison's breath inn ;)
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« Reply #220 on: January 07, 2008, 12:13:13 AM »

Well, you are in luck, as I was mid post.. so it will be right near the top for you. :P
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« Reply #221 on: January 07, 2008, 08:27:41 AM »

Hi everyone. It's Yarrow. Sorry for disappearing without telling anyone.... I've been going through lots of hard times, but now I'm back, this time more cheerful  grin i'll be posting again, but i worry about not being able to catch up since i've been gone for almost a month.... anyhow, nice to be back again!
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« Reply #222 on: January 08, 2008, 09:16:11 AM »

WB Yarrow. :D

One note, the bear is no longer in the Wison, and has not been for awhile now.
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« Reply #223 on: January 08, 2008, 02:40:05 PM »

I will finish the post when I get back home, but what type of horse, and what doe sit look like, is it friendly or mean, excited or lazy, please describe the horse for me.
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« Reply #224 on: January 08, 2008, 03:29:10 PM »

Let your imagination run free. Keep in mind that any horse other than a Koroch fey Moloch would probably not be used in Remusiat :) Show us your writing skills in describing this horse, we'll keep to your description ^.^ For inspiration, you can always read the entry.
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