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Rayne Avalotus
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« Reply #15 on: August 05, 2003, 01:10:22 AM »

Unless this bit concerning family and why they're at Shan'Thai is hidden some place other than history, I can't find it..


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Elenaria
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« Reply #16 on: August 05, 2003, 12:00:22 PM »

It is after everything at the bottom of the page and it islabeled as FAMILY:

Hope that makes it easy, I didn't know that you wanted it in the History section.

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Rayne Avalotus
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« Reply #17 on: August 05, 2003, 01:44:22 PM »

Titled, Hun.


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Elenaria
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« Reply #18 on: August 05, 2003, 08:01:22 PM »

>Eyes widen even more< Yes, thank you!!! Thank YOU!!!! THAANK YOOOUUUU!!!!!!

No seriously, thanks a lot, making characters is hard work, but it is fun too.

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Talia Sturmwind
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« Reply #19 on: August 05, 2003, 09:41:22 PM »

An interesting char! Not  a strong warrioress for a change, lol.

One thing which you still should change (Rayne is overworked, take a rest, hon!): No comparison to an Italian lute from the xxxth century.

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it resembles a 16th-Century Italian Lute from our world.


You may write instead (Only thing I can think of in the moment), that Saran(?) bought her an exquisite lute (old or new), made in Bardavos from the famous master such and such.... We can surely establish a lute workshop there.

And I still don't see the need to let her grow up in Shan'Thai, where she would fit so neatly into Shan'Furrionnis. Any reasons other than what you wrote?

***Astropic of the day***

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Elenaria
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« Reply #20 on: August 05, 2003, 10:01:22 PM »

Well when I was creating Elenaria, I looked at the map of Aeruillan and I couldn't find Shan' Furrionnis (my printer only printed half the map) and I saw Shan' Thai and decided to use that as her hometown.  

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