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Cár'ámn Glasajcín
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« Reply #30 on: May 19, 2008, 01:20:56 PM »

Hi

Thanks to the kindness of Mina and Quaélh'Orín.  I believe I now have the proper name and title for my CD. Thanks!

Please find that I have completely removed to History section for the time being and only placed the information that comes before it now.  It requires a rewrite of an enormous nature that I will continue to work on.  If you wish you may comment on what is present.

I will still be taking him south although the story will be a much happier one. Roll Eyes

I seem to have created a sort of amalgamation between Gervase and Benedict and what a mess I made of it. fish

Thanks for your patients.
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Mina
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« Reply #31 on: May 21, 2008, 10:18:11 AM »

Just a small correction: Glasajís means "of sorrrow".  "Of sorrows" would be Glasajías. 
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Benedict Bennett
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« Reply #32 on: May 21, 2008, 12:48:39 PM »

Thanks Mina

I will get this corrected
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Cár'ámn Glasajcín
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« Reply #33 on: May 21, 2008, 01:03:55 PM »

and corrected.  I simply removed the "s".  It seems to sound even better!

Thanks again :)
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Cár'ámn Glasajcín
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« Reply #34 on: Yesterday at 03:36:44 AM »

Although the history is not quite complete I believe you can see I believe I have taken into account all the concerns about the CD

Please feel free to comment if you would like. :)
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« Reply #35 on: Yesterday at 11:17:34 PM »

Looking good, Glasaj!   :D

I'd like to see a tad more on the personality. I still don't have a feel for how he interacts with others and generally behaves. Personality will generally spell out how you plan to RP him in a story.
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Cár'ámn Glasajcín
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« Reply #36 on: Yesterday at 11:41:14 PM »

Thanks Azhira

I will address his personality more as you have suggested and finish out the history.

Personally I like him a lot better now than I did in the beginning.  I didn't need all the Shendar garb except as a disguise, actually that was the main reason on bringing him to the desert, but now there are more logical reasons that can easily be explained and don't trap him there forever.
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