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Title: "55 Words" Writing Contest - Technology - VOTING!
Post by: Tak on June 16, 2012, 12:12:19 AM
This is the 55-word writing contest VOTING!  If you need a reminder, the entries are below:



Ishmaelion
He switched the Trans-Dimensional-Loophole-Machine off with a sigh. It didn’t work. It never works!

Outside, unseen, Pteranodons glide through the sky.

He switched the Trans-Dimensional-Loophole-Machine off with a sigh. It didn’t work. It never works!

Outside, unseen, Martians patrol empty streets.

He switched the Trans-Dimensional-Loophole-Machine off with a sigh. It didn’t work. It never works…



Tak

They say there is a heart,
Inside the machine.
Way down in depths unseen
                                                           (deeper and deeper)
It beats eternal as it sleeps
I hear the beating that it keeps
A drum for war, a beacon for peace
                                                           (deeper and deeper)
Soon we will reach and soon we will see
What the machine will release



Auran Medal

New inventions change the world. We all know that. The human race makes so many advancements that it would be hard for us not to realize eventually. But are all of our changes really for the better? I think as I look upon the wreckage of our society and wonder how we went so wrong.



Nox Belle
A birthing begun with a switch-flick,
Trouncing, thrashing, twisting...
Sharp sounds of metal against metal,
Clanging, clashing, clanking...
Red orbs ablaze like an inferno,
Leering, looking, locating...
Jump-starting into a consciousness,
Ripping, ravaging, rending...
Wreaking havoc on a thumping pump,
Sent agony ringing through conductors;
First emotion born to life mechanical-
WARNING! Corrupted File: Soul.exe


Title: Re: "55 Words" Writing Contest - Technology - VOTING!
Post by: Tak on June 23, 2012, 11:37:43 PM
And the winner is Ishmaelion! 

(http://i1245.photobucket.com/albums/gg586/Santharia/OOC/55WordsDraft1.png)

Congratulations! 


Title: Re: "55 Words" Writing Contest - Technology - VOTING!
Post by: Ishmaelion on June 24, 2012, 07:00:40 PM
Wow, thanks! *runs around with his award held high*  :grin:


Title: Re: "55 Words" Writing Contest - Technology - VOTING!
Post by: Altario Shialt-eck-Gorrin on June 24, 2012, 11:37:33 PM
 :D Congrats, Ishy.