Zonda'ar Corno

[Zondaar]

Thanks for all the reply's.
I don't mind taking it easy on the magic side, it gives me something to look forward to!

Question: would it be really unfair of me to age Zonda'ar one year (26 to 27) that would make him a fourth level wizard and a much more logical time for him to leave Ximax and start adventuring? No biggy though

In Magico, Potentis Est.

[Alýr (Rayne)]

Your profile will need to be editted to reflect the changes brought up in the discussion that followed its posting.

Um, lets see. Yes, I think fire is a good place to start out. Keep in mind the figures for ages only really apply if you entered the Academy at age 12. Of course, anyone can be admitted into the Academy at any age. 12 is just the minimum; however, if you're entering at 14, the change should be relative to that age.

I'll try to take a more critical look at this when the original profile is editted appropriately.

...Ripples in the Dream Pool...

[Zondaar]

Well I did some editing...
Tried to stay close to the backbone of the character, but accomodating for the necesary changes.

In Magico, Potentis Est.

[Alýr (Rayne)]

TRIBE: Former Kyranian, Thromgolin line

You character wasn't alive to have been a former Kyranian.

...Ripples in the Dream Pool...

[Zondaar]

True, very true... but he has the bloodline of the thromgolin line (red hair and green eyes).
So in fact he is a Helcrani, but he and all his family is completely convinced the are still part of the old Kyranian royal bloodline. I hope this is OK with you guys.
Zonda'ar doesn't feel as a Helcrani and convi,ces himslef to be totally superior.

In Magico, Potentis Est.

[Alýr (Rayne)]

Make your age 27.

Also, if he's a mage, he isn't going to be strong. We can agree on that, can't we? Phsycially, he will be rather weak because his time has been dedicated to his studies in magic and not to the persuit of grand swordsmanship. So, I ask, why is your character bulky?

Hopefully we'll have some other people to come comment.

...Ripples in the Dream Pool...

[Zondaar]

I'm sorry I had you confused. By bulky, I meant fat. I tried to use a less direct word for it, but of course, Zonda'ar is not very sportive. He's lazy and very fond of luxury.

In Magico, Potentis Est.

[Coren FrozenZephyr]

True that I did not read the history yet, but aside from a few language errors, I see nothing else to correct.

Apart from staff fighting, he is physically untrained. Zonda'ar has always found it much more interesting to do intellectual work and thus has built little strenght and agility.
He has low personal motivation and endurance to do anything that he doesn't really want, except for studying and practicing magic. He has low stamina and chooses the easy way when he can.
He is a strong follower of caste system, with nobles being superior to peasants. He has great difficulty accepting insults and bathmouthing from infiriors. Peasants with authority need to have this backed up by someone proper (aka a noble)

[Zondaar]

Done some editing...
NE1 catch the pun on star wars?

In Magico, Potentis Est.

[Mina]

Quote:but they found his lack of faith disturbing

Well, it looks pretty good to me.  Does anyone else have any comments?  

There is no emotion; there is peace.
There is no ignorance; there is knowledge.
There is no passion; there is serenity.
There is no death; there is the Force.

[Chronusian]

Nice Char! Very original I think. He has personality... I like. But in your history, you have called Ximax a Wizard acadamy. Its not, its a magic academy. Thats not really a big deal though, unless you are me of course.

When you look past all the evil
The scorn and hate of the world
You see a hero, the light
Only in the end will that light shine

Edited by: Chronusian at: 9/23/03 15:25

[Radaroc]

Indeed I will enjoy seeing this guy RP.  I say plant a title on him!  

Which brings me to one of my inane ramblings...I should work on that bumbling monk, but while trained in martial arts he adapts them to his larger frame and using more brawling type tactics...only with finesse.

In the begining I was weak.  Now I have purpose.  Stay me from my path and the Gods themselves cannot save you.

[Fox]

Looks good to me. Although, please don't list your spells, as the list on the site is definately not complete.

Once Rayne gets back from Japan, we'll see what she thinks and mayhaps get you a title.

Santharian Master of Magic. Contact at dasson@santharia.com
The Santharian Dream - Create the Dream. Live the Dream.

[Alýr (Rayne)]

Wouldn't you believe it? Not even the entirety of the Pacific Ocean could keep me away.

The character looks good to me. He's a nice, round character.. in more ways than one. As Dasson mentioned, you don't need to list your spells. You shouldn't be limited to them when more appear up on the site. That won't keep you from a title, though.

Yes. One of the other admins can title him. I'm not logged in and I'm in a bit of a rush.

And just in the spirit of Japan: Ii desu ne!

[Mina]

Okay, he's titled.  

There is no emotion; there is peace.
There is no ignorance; there is knowledge.
There is no passion; there is serenity.
There is no death; there is the Force.

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