OOC 2 (Out of Character)

[SeverineHalo]

This is the new ooc thread.

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous

[Phiona Whitefire]

Guess you didn't see my post about altering your page-length.  Thirteen pages for you is only 3 pages for me.  

Heh!

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

[Phiona Whitefire]

Well I'm stuck, Severine.   We are probably close enough to Blackwine's office for him to see us, but I'm not sure how you wanted to play this out so I stuck to dialog.

By the way, Phiona just made a suggestion that could be either incredibly brave or incredibly stupid.       I am thinking it is the latter, and that's without considering who the leader is...

Phiona

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

[SeverineHalo]

 

On the next Sarvonia 90210 Phiona Wildfire...uh I mean Whitefire makes out with Severine Hello! uh I mean Halo!









Can't you feel the love in the air? lol  


Didn't expect that one till later on honey.lol As for Marlus Balckwine, He'll walk past us...but you'll have your back turned to him. Inquistius will feel Severine's dark beserker curse...something that Marlus now has inside of him, btu will not feel Halo coming from him. Since the man is on urgent business at the fort that is being made (and is almost done), he continues on his way but tells his soldiers to keep their eyes on us at all times. After leaving the barracks, we go back to the inn. By then, everyone else will be there. then the whole episode with the blind girl saying something that she shouldn't say will occur and sevy, phiona, and eryk gets kicked out of the inn for defending her. Sev tells Tierria to stay at the inn, and tells Penrith to watch her. The blind girl will be picked up by her brother and by her request our three homless heroes will stay at their house. later on that night, Severine will have a private conversation with Luca, and tells her to explore the fort that is being made (ripp and luca will hear about this from a group of women talking while working the fields. sev and phiona might hear about a fort being made). Tierria will go out in the night to see Severine (who'll be acting rather strangely after Phiona's last post.lol) and the two will have a talk. Luca meanwhile manages to sneak into the fort and take a look around (details on it in another post or i just might e-mail luca about it). well she manages to make it...but the fault that got her in trouble with sev and the others ends up getting her into trouble again. Marlus (who is at the fort) has her imprisioned, and believes that my group sent her there. But he wants proof so he sends his soldiers sneaking around. we fight them off and the ones whop are not being watched stay at the tavern while the others hide out. When we finally realize that luca was captured (with some help from pick) I take Phiona and Elra with me to go through the forest and arrive into an opening where the fort is. We sneak inside to rescue Luca and probably end it all. (well for this chapter...)
The rest will for a fake party at the tavern where you'll gather many of the soldiers...get them drunk...and lock them a large hidden room that is used for storage. You'll also try to get some of the other soldiers drunk...and if they fight or resist...then you elinimate them. After freeing Luca we try to escape to get the others, but end up being surrounding by Marlus and his men. That's when Marlus sees Phiona. well four of us against possibly twenty...more are outside guarding...

Heh. The others head to the fort and try to check from the trees what is going on. Pick gives a sign that there is trouble inside, and the others (with the help of the caravan guards, the rebels,Ren, and Deren) attack the outside and work your way inside. Severine and Phiona take on Marlus. Phiona gets beaten by Marlus over and over...making Sev goes nuts...loses his mind...and becomes the incredible hulk. He starts attacking Marlusd who in the heat of battle goes hulk too and the two start battling. Marlus seems like he has the upper hand but gets shot in the arm by Elra. and when he sees his soldiers losing...he escpaes. sev then turns on those he love and care about, anbd ends up losing consciousness.

Meanwhile...the Ivory Fox kills Crestus.

anyways...that's what i have for now. i'll speak more about the encounter with the rebels later.

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous

[Luca the Thief]

Aaaaw, thats so cute.

Love it all! So yah, feel free to e-mail me Sev or just post here or such and such and so forth. Yep.

"I would rather die on my feet than live on my knees"

[Ripp Dide]

Just out of curiousity are you going to be scripting us the entire story.  

"I am prepared to meet my maker, but, is my maker prepared to meet me?"

[Phiona Whitefire]

Severine: Woah... that plotting is pretty tight, as in restricting.  You know you must allow for some flexability and unexpected plot twists, because there will be some in this type of creative writing.  But on the other hand, I really appreciate that you have the story planned so well out... it gives us something to look forward to and we know you won't leave us hanging.    

Ripp: Its not carved in stone.  Severine is just letting us know the direction he expects the story to go, at least I am pretty sure that's it.  With at 9 separate people writing about 10 very different characters, I trust there will be a lot of deviation from the main "script", so we need a little herding or the flock won't stay together. (Did I just compare us all to sheep? Baa-aa-aa! )  Anyway, I believe there are certain parts in the story where we need to adhere to the scripting, mainly to give each PC a chance in the spotlight... for instance, the Marlus/Sevy showdown (first round) should not be interupted by any well-meant heroics... not even by Phiona (and he's my villain!).  

Everyone: I think that Severine is going by the CDs we all posted.  My suggestion is that if he scripts something that is against your PC's grain, or even just seems strange enough to bug you, please bring it to his attention with a suggestion for an alternate twist. (No fair just saying, "Hey that sucks!"  Let's keep it constructive.)    

Phiona
- Second in command... er, plotting that is.    

Regarding the kiss:  Duh... we planned this to happen sooner, you know, the thank you kiss?  it was put off to now, actually.   Sheesh...    

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

Edited by: Phiona Whitefire at: 10/1/03 3:02

[Phiona Whitefire]

"Sev then turns on those he love and care about, and ends up losing consciousness" -Seveine

Please, please, please don't have him faint!  Gah!  I can't stand it when people do that.  Better to have someone from our side knock him out... maybe after being distracted?
Perhaps one of our mages can do the honor?  Hit him with a sleep spell or freeze him or something.... anything other than a cheezy fainting spell.  That's all I am asking!

Phiona
-thinks the only reason anyone should loose consciousness is from massive loss of blood or a huge lump on the head.

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

[Phiona Whitefire]

Ripp & Luca: I wonder if you guys realize that all the "outlying farms" are inside the wall's perameters?  These people built the wall around the village, more to keep them in and to keep strangers out.

But feel free to hunt around in the surrounding woods, any cabins or other dwelling farther out would be deserted.  All the villagers are either inside the walls or... elsewhere (which is what we need to find out).

Edit:  In fact, one or more of you could add a recent memory to your post about coming across one of the deserted(and looted) dwellings.  Maybe a hunter or trapper's cabin?  Just a thought.


Severine:  I just occurred to me that if there whould be any kind of fighting (yeah right, IF) that these people would rather capture us than kill us... we are all young and strong, and would make great slave labor, don't ya think?  I do.    
I'm thinking that what better way to find out what's happening that to find out the HARD WAY!  Whoot!

Edit: Another idea- that a few of us allow ourselves to be captured... ooh the possibilities!  

Phiona

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

Edited by: Phiona Whitefire at: 10/1/03 3:21

[Phiona Whitefire]

I apologize for my wordy IC posts.  Phiona was meant to be an extremely introspective person who writes a lot and has very low social skills.  I hope that my writing has brought this concept across clearly enough.  It's just something new I am trying for a change, I mean with Phiona.  I have other PCs in other games who aren't like this at all.

It's damn-hard writing an anti-social character.  


Phiona

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

[Elraralia Horfiwiel]

I wanted to apologise so so so so so so so much for my not posting, life has been more than hectic, what with midterms and sadistic teachers, I should be able to post more this weekend thought.

[SeverineHalo]

Hehehe sorry if i sounded to restricting. Like Phiona said, I'm just telling what I have in mind. The real action's coming up soon, and I need to come up with a general idea of what's going to happen and share it with the rest of you. One of the main points of this story is to put everyone in hard situations and have them get out of it.

Phiona: Actually, I was thinking about him being knocked out last night. I was thinking when he's about to be distracted by Tierria something inside of him stops him, and that gives one of u the chance to knock me out.

Elra: Don't worry about it sweets. I'm caught between school, work, and seeing my girlfriend out of state every so often (whose middle name is Tierria...). As long as you post, it's all good.

Regarding the kiss: Heh, I was just playing around. I don't know I felt like it was some teen drama for a moment...and yes...i wanted an excuse to use the smileys! so sue me!!! lol


Well...back to posting...

Right fluffy one?  

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous

[SeverineHalo]

Just to tell you Phiona, Blackwine doesn't see you. You may ntocie himif you want to, be he only sees me not you.

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous

[Phiona Whitefire]

How can she possibly miss the shout out to "Commander Blackwine"?
(sigh)  This'll be a tough reaction.  I'm going to give it some thought before posting.

"Fear not that thy life shall come to an end, but rather fear that it shall never have a beginning."    -John Henry Cardinal Newman (1801 - 1890)

[SeverineHalo]

Just to tell everyone. If you're having problems with what to do, just ask me or Phiona and we'll take care of it for you. I'm willing to give everyone the chance to be creative with your findings, so you'll have plenty freedom instead of doing exactly what the moderator says. I'll be giving more chances like this in the future as well.

"Once again, the lone soldier walks off into the sunset..." -Anonymous

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