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Author Topic: Ered Edhel, Meladrhim Elf, Ranger  (Read 20404 times)
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Drasil Razorfang
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« Reply #15 on: January 07, 2007, 06:54:02 AM »

Apparently you missed the point of my first post.  Meladrhim=nomads very skilled with spears and such.  By simply living within his tribe for 100 years, you have a plausible reason for him to have that many years of weapon skills.
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Ered edhel
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« Reply #16 on: January 07, 2007, 09:44:54 AM »

Oh, okay. then I will have to rewrite the history a little bit to ame that possible and I will also lower my age just a bit.
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« Reply #17 on: January 07, 2007, 09:51:56 AM »

I made the adjustments to the CD so just over look them and see what you think.
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Niccoli Faust
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« Reply #18 on: January 07, 2007, 12:18:34 PM »

You've gone one strength that is way unbalenced. Not even a master tracker using technology and skills could tell if an animal had been in a place a year previously UNLESS the place had been completly undisturbed from that point onward.
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Ered edhel
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« Reply #19 on: January 07, 2007, 05:27:01 PM »

that was a skill taken directly from the entry of the Melad'rhim Elves.  That is not something I made up.  It states

"The craftmanship of their weapons, hunting and skinning tools is exacting. They can tan a hide in no time at all using simply materials they find around them. Melád can track animal, beast or being if it passed a places up to a year previously. They can walk in stealth in the forest and never make a sound."

This is taken straight from the people section of the entry.
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Niccoli Faust
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« Reply #20 on: January 07, 2007, 10:04:05 PM »

I believe it is what most people would call an exaggeration. You should probably ask or something. (that makes them sound like a cross between mcguyver wolveriene and legolas)
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Ered edhel
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« Reply #21 on: January 07, 2007, 10:55:08 PM »

They had chewing gum and paper clips back then?  Kidding.  I will do that but so far no one else has said anything about it.
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« Reply #22 on: January 08, 2007, 05:32:45 AM »

I asked the mods & admins and they said that it was an oversight so I needed to change it as done.
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« Reply #23 on: January 09, 2007, 11:09:26 AM »

I am not sure if this is what ya'll want be here it is anyway.  pointers...fixes....give me the worksi.  I want this profile to be a base to start out on then through the stories he plays in I want him to grow older, wiser, and more skilled.
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« Reply #24 on: January 10, 2007, 10:35:30 AM »

I am ready to hear comments and hopfully get approved very soon.
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« Reply #25 on: January 10, 2007, 02:46:24 PM »

Now i am to the point where I don't care when I get a comment just send me a private message to llet  me know.  to be honest i know I won't get approved for another month or soo because that is how long it took me the last two times for me to get it right but I would like so feedback....yeck I will settle for being scolded. just somethin
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« Reply #26 on: January 11, 2007, 05:09:37 AM »

You need to elaborate on his personality, i think. Trust issues can't completely describe a person. Is he philosophical? Stubborn? Talkative? Simplistic? Sadistic? Pessimistic? Optimistic? Paranoid?

Just saying you need to go more in depth and describe him completely.
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Ered edhel
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« Reply #27 on: January 13, 2007, 10:15:56 AM »

I updated his personality so could some one check and see what else I need to do please.
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« Reply #28 on: January 13, 2007, 10:48:30 AM »

The Cd looks very good in my opinion.  Reading through the CD, I am unsure of the uses of circles in his tattooing, though I suppose circles are just lines with no ends.  This is the only thing that stuck out at me.  Although, I am curious about his parents.  You have no mention of them at all.  Try to include them in some of the events of his past, especially he's banishment from his tribe.
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« Reply #29 on: January 13, 2007, 10:51:50 AM »

The tattoos are a tribe thing and as far as his parents I ain't sure what to do...since the tribe raises the children as a whole
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