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« on: January 16, 2007, 04:00:26 AM »


Gender: Male

Age: 31

Race: Human

Tribe: Kasumarii

Occupation: Assassin

Physical appearance: John is a smaller human only about 1.8 peds high weighing only 1 pygge. He has white hair a bit past his ears and light blue eyes. he has a white yellow skin tent and a small scar behind his left ear. he also has a large dragon tatoo going up his right arm.

Clothes: John wears a pure white tunic with white boots, gloves, and an interchangerbel clock that can be white or black.

Personality: John is on the side of good.  He is silent except when it comes to money. he can be farily easy to get along with  and work with. John rarely has a bad atitude towards life. he does sometimes have trouble fitting in with crowes. but he is always looking for a good adventure.
Grant Rothman
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« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2007, 04:04:22 AM »

I am pretty sure your forum account has to be the same as your char name. As for the CD ( Character description) it's okay but it needs some work. Check the format of CDS on the front page.
Leida Kereborn
Wandering Opportunist
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« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2007, 04:35:42 AM »

Welcome to Santharia!  I know your pencil icon is still up, but do take a look at the menu on the lefthand side of the page to get some ideas for your CD--the format, what's required and restricted, as well as links to the main page where you can get some ideas.  You've already done some research though, so that's good.  Good luck!

"They'll build a statue of us, then later say it's all our fault."

"Wherever you go, you have your rump behind you."
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2007, 04:57:25 AM »

Instead of saying that he is good, you should probably call him chaotic good, and describe how he wants to do the right thing, but he doesn't have much regard for the law. Why is he a GOOD assasin? Not saying it's wrong, but you defenitely need to explain in the history.
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« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2007, 05:00:07 AM »

We don't use D&D alignments here. 

Mad Davy Flint
Brigand of the High Seas
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« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2007, 05:00:43 AM »

We dont work on a DnD alignment system for several reasons, main of which is we dont want to sound naive and cliched, as if morality could be broken down into 9 world viewpoints.
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2007, 05:11:00 AM »

That wasn't the point to add a dnd alignment, it was a good description of him to put chaotic good, i thought.
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Elf, Melad'rhim

« Reply #7 on: January 16, 2007, 05:21:46 AM »

Gondroc'nushoc (Azshuck Berserk), what he means by being a good guy and yet a assassin is that he only kills his enimies of people on his side. Basically put, he won't kill anyone that seems good unless there is a very good reason why.

May this bless all who read it with what it holds:

Sé ilian thelduin onr líf un mor'ranr thelduin onr freohr.
Kain Cristar
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« Reply #8 on: January 16, 2007, 07:33:37 AM »

I think that good assassins are fairly strong dualities, which is why you get alot of them in Anime. They love the anti-hero.

Anyways, I agree with the Orc, anyone who is either deviod of emotion, or enjoys killing to the point were they can simply learn to be an assassin has some problems. there is no pure hearted man who would go out and begin stabbing people in the throat while they weren't looking. Something has to drive you to the point where you train to become a killer. This is a profession of death, death in a very sinister way. There is little honor or chivalry in comming up behind someone and slicing their head off, its bloody, gruesome, and wicked.

You have lived a life of cruelty and atrocity, you have bathed in the blood of the innocent, you have considered every act of depravity and your corruption knows no bounds. I am the angel of justice, I am the accumulation of all of your sins. Prepare for your redemption.

-Kain Cristar, Divine Aspect
Kelancey the Green
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« Reply #9 on: January 16, 2007, 10:18:07 AM »

Can I add a "Yes, and..." to Kain's comment?  Assassins are contract killers, making it kind of hard to imagine them defending anyone while on assignment.  Could I suggest a compromise, maybe a bounty hunter?  A manhunter?  Someone who still can work with compatriots, kills when compelled to, and still upholds some moral code?

"Luminous beings are we, not this crude matter."  --Master Yoda
Kelancey the Green
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