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Alassiel Telrúnya
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« Reply #60 on: March 07, 2007, 06:58:11 AM »

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D LOL LOL Rolling Rolling cool cool azn azn grin grin :) :) ;) ;) Pet Pet :P :P heart heart
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« Reply #61 on: March 08, 2007, 05:54:31 AM »

To any other Mods or Admins out there, your approvals would be very much appreciated. :D Pet
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« Reply #62 on: March 08, 2007, 07:00:08 AM »

I'm sorry, I'm not allowed to give a second approval as a mini-mod. You could PM Kar to ask her very nicely to give this a look-through and hopefully give that second approval :)
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« Reply #63 on: March 09, 2007, 12:57:18 AM »

Nah, I'm not that urgent. I can wait quietly. :)
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« Reply #64 on: March 09, 2007, 03:21:46 AM »

I just happened to see this:
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Title: Telrúnya the Temperamental
Erm, I don't think that is the sort of title we are looking for. 
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« Reply #65 on: March 09, 2007, 05:09:04 AM »

Ok, I've changed it to Temperamental Bard.
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« Reply #66 on: March 09, 2007, 03:38:03 PM »

Hey, sis! Just wanted to congratulate you on your approval. Hope you get your second one soon, yeah? :D
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« Reply #67 on: March 09, 2007, 03:42:44 PM »

Yeah! ^.^ By the time I can actually come online without my mum yelling at me to practice my piano until I'm so perfect I have a high distinction in my exam buck....yeah, I'll probs have my 2nd approval by then (i.e. 30 March).
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« Reply #68 on: March 10, 2007, 03:45:53 AM »

That is it. Just now, I was exactly halfway down the CD board. And in a few hours, my CD has gone down to being the 8th most recent CD post. I am this close to getting my 2nd approval, and I don't want to get bumped to the next page so everyone can forget my CD (however selfish that may sound).

*Calling all Admins and Mods to look at my CD so I can get my 2nd approval and stop sounding like a snob who's so full of herself* Pet
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« Reply #69 on: March 10, 2007, 03:58:32 PM »

Well, it looks like you're almost ready.  Just a few minor things to fix. 

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Height: 1 ped, 2 fores, 1 palmspan
That's 1.7 peds if I'm not mistaken, which is a little short for an elf, who average about 2 peds.  Perfectly fine if your character is intended to be short, but you probably should mention it somewhere. 

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Tribe: Ak’váth’rhím/Injerín
We normally write it this way only if the character is a 'crossbreed'.  You might want to put a note here that she's only adopted into the Injerin tribe, and doesn't actually have Injerin blood. 

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She knows many languages(Styrásh, Thergerim, Kuglimz'Seitre, Kh'omchr'om, Mermish, Brownin and a few cat languages)
Erm, cat languages?   Very confused

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Alassiel was originally born into the Ak’váth’rhím tribe, but then was transported to Northern Sarvonia and then carelessly placed in a few bushes in the Shaded Forest and left to die.

I think you probably made a mistake here.  The Ak'vath'rhim are located in Northern Sarvonia, though quite far from the Injerin. 

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Alassiel's foster-father, Luthien
Nothing wrong with this, I just found it amusing. :D  Have you read the Silmarillion, by the way? 
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« Reply #70 on: March 10, 2007, 09:18:39 PM »

Done corrections! :D Is 1 ped, 3 fores and 2 palmspans sound better?

And no, I haven't read the Silmarillion. What is it about?
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« Reply #71 on: March 10, 2007, 10:10:12 PM »

About the height, now you have it as 2 peds and 1 palmspan. 1 ped = 3 fores(i think) and 3 palmspans = 1 fore(i think).
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« Reply #72 on: March 11, 2007, 05:33:32 AM »

Yeah, I think of a palmspan as a third of a fore, which is a third of a ped. I've changed it to 1 ped, 8 palmspans, which would be just below 2 peds, but above 1 ped, 2 fores.
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« Reply #73 on: March 11, 2007, 12:45:31 PM »

1 ped = 1 metre
1 fore = 1 foot (approx. 30cm)
1 palmspan = 10cm

That's how I understand it anyway.  A fore is somewhat smaller than a third of a ped. 

I'll check the CD in a while. 
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« Reply #74 on: March 11, 2007, 02:05:56 PM »

Hmm...I didn't realise this the last time I looked at the CD, but it doesn't look like you made any mention of how your character learned all those languages.  Something about her proficiency in those langauges would be good too.  With so many languages, I'd assume that she wasn't really fluent in most of them. 

As for the height, 1ped 8palmspans is about 1.8 peds.  Still a little short for an elf, though not as much as before.  I'm not sure if it's what you wanted. 

I also just realised that they've apparently changed the measurements (when did that happen anyway?).  So, it seems you're right about a fore being a third of a ped, though a palmspan is still 10cm, and thus somewhat smaller than a third of a fore. 
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