Thank you Simmonne. I can't think of anything else you can do for me. Unless of course you know how to transform yourself into Mina or Kar and give the second approval.

I en't that elabotate. I jus know a word or two.

But that is a very good question. To be honest, I would prefer to role play that aspect of his history out rather than just add another paragraph to the history. At the point that the history ends now, Ras hasn't yet faced the consequences of his rash actions, and I would like to play out his reaction to those. He's not going to be happy...

Thanks Mina!

I guess there's no need to test the title anymore, but it looks lovely all the same.

And I've made my edits.

I admittedly did more than change one word. Sentences were rewritten here and there without changing their underlying meaning. I did make one change to the CD that's worth noting. The word "frail" to describe Ras felt like too strong of a word. So, Ras has been tweaked to still be skinny and weak but without using "frail" to describe him.