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« on: October 13, 2007, 11:44:56 AM »

NAME - Emmiline Atricus
GENDER - Female
AGE - One hundred and Sixteen
RACE - Coór'hém Elves
TRIBE - The Bloodletter Clan
OCCUPATION - Assassin 
TITLE - Atricus Assassin

APPERANCE
Height - One Ped, One Fore, One Nailsbreath.
Weight - 105 Od
Hair Colour - Blueish-black
Eye Colour - Violet/Blue

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Body - Pale and slender, with a tiny waist, small bosom, and long slender legs and arms, thin long fingers, and a thin wrist. With a high metabolism, her tummy stays flat, and fit, her hipbones jut out a bit, but not so much that it looks unhealthy. She has a scar going from her shoulder blade to the middle of her back, and one that wraps around her ribcage, from one of her numerous fights. She has a tattoo on the back of her neck under her hair, in the shape of a falcon, and another of corseting going down her back.

Face - Silk wispy black bangs laying across, and slightly above her right eye to hide a finger length scar from view, and to show full view of the two tattoos under her left eye just above her high cheekbones, a teardrop and star. Two symmetrical thin eye brows lay above her starking violet eyes. A small slightly pointed nose, twice pierced, leads down to full, painted red heart shaped lips that seem to always be pouting. Her complexion is pale but, healthy pale, instead of sickly pale. A small stud lays under her lip to the left. Her pointed ears show though a curtain of black tresses, showing her heritage, is pierced multiple times.

Hair - Emmiline's blueish-black hair is about two peds and one fore in length. She keeps it in a half wrapped-up bun on the side of her head with red ribbon wrapping around the bun, and the ped length hanging down from the bun. When she isn't fighting, or practicing it is free flowing and laying down her back in straight tresses. Her bangs are parted at her left eye, jaggedly cut, laying on, and above her right eye.

Eyes – Her Violet, covered with Sadness and wrath, which hides her more fragile thoughts, memories, and emotions. With thick, long black lashes framing them, they stand out most of all against her pale face.

Clothing – When she is practicing, or fighting Emmiline wears body hugging leather clothing, that is yet flexible enough to move swiftly. A sturdy leather belt at her waist holds her daggers, and a few poisons viles. A pair of light weight black boots keep her moving swiftly. When she isn't fighting, she relaxes in a soft violet low v-cut hooded floor length robe and a fore above the knee length skirt or slacks. A thin leather belt holds one dagger, just in case. With below the knee black high-heeled boots complete her ensemble.

Personality – Emmiline is a shy, thoughtful, and unsociable. She loves the adrenaline of a fight, but yet the calmness of reading a good book. She loves to get what she wants, but also loves the challenge of getting what she wants. After her Mother's death, Emmiline became withdrawn, and even more unsociable, rarely talking to anyone. Always seen with Draco, Vixiana, and Syphira, she loves all creatures, evil, or good, Dark or Light, it's just people she doesn't like. She is always wary of her own kind, keeping enough distance that is polite.


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
StrengthsSwiftness - for quick attacks and to keep herself out of harm.
Intelligent -with a  quick mind, to make easy or hard decision on the spot.
Unsociable – It helps her not being seen by others, or noticed.
Manipulative -  to get what she wants, when she wants it, and her way.

WeaknessesHard to control, to her it's her way, or no way.
Unsociable – Although it is also a Strength it is a weaknesses as it's hard for her to make friends, and to get new assignments
Light – Although she doesn't hate it, she' rather avoid it if she can, and stick to the shadow and darkness, and when she does go into the light, she pulls the hood of her robe over her head.


HISTORY - Born into a middle ranking family in the Bloodletter clan, Emmiline was raised to be a mercenary since she could walk, and hold a blade. She was taught by her mother till the age of 16 when her mother was murdered, the second parent she had lost fro her father died when she was little. After that Emmiline stopped being the happy joyous elf she was when her moth was alive. After her mother died she made a vow to kill the murderer who had taken her mother from her. So now she has her Mother's brother teaching her to fight and kill. He is the one who gives her the assignments, the poisons, is the one who she looks up to, who she depends on, she doesn't know what she would do if he was murdered as well.


WEAPONS - One Long Bow and Arrows  - Use mostly to kill for food, or to kill quickly with our notice. Two R'unorian Commoners Daggers - Her most used weapon, usually used mostly at close range, she'll either throw one and use quick sharp jabs at the victim's body with the other.
One Blood Thirst - Her newest weapon, she's mostly still training with it, but will use it for practice, in easy fights, that require time.


BELONGINGS – She keeps on her person at all time, a light bag holding a few of her mothers loved possessions, some healing herbs, poisons, a map, and Ranlesh Venom.


FAMILIARS - Arshir (Red Fox) - Vixiana who is Emmiline's first ever friend, Emmiline would die with out Vixiana at her side. Emmiline and Vixiana first met after Emmiline's mothers death, Emmiline, dispairing, ran to the closest forest and met a stranger, the stranger had an Arshir with him. The stranger kept his hood covering his face. Emmiline stricken with grief did not even notice him and sat down on an old log. The Arshir saw her and ran toward her, laid her head on Emmiline's lap, startling her. Emmiline surprised jerked away. But the Arshir kept her head on Emmiline's lap. Emmiline, a bit wary, slowly laid her head of the Arshir's head, and began to pet her. Slowly gaining confidence she slid of the rock and sat on the ground, her back to the log. The Arshir climbed into Emmiline's lap and fell asleep, and Emmiline, comforted, shortly followed. The stranger smiled, whispered “Vixiana” and walked away. Ever since that day, Emmiline and the Arshir, later named “Vixiana” became inseparable.

White Common Ferret - Draco was a birthday gift from her uncle on her first kill. The White Ferret, later named “Draco” was first wary of Emmiline and Vixiana, but after seeing the Vixiana wasn't going to eat him, and Emmiline wasn't going to fed him to Vixiana, warmed up to them both. He became close with Emmiline, always either on her shoulders, wrapped around her neck, or in a pocket. He also became close with Vixiana, when he wasn't with Emmiline you can see him on Vixiana's back, or off chasing her tail and playing games.

Centoraurian horse - Syphira, the black Centoraurian horse who belonged to her mother, was very close to Emmiline. but not as close at Vixiana. Emmiline, a few days after her mothers death, approached the skittish horse, and attempted to ride her, (Emmiline's mother bought her for hobby only) and after being bucked of a few times, Emmiline succeeded. Now Syphira is always either following her, or carrying Emmiline to her assignments. She knows enough to stay far enough away from the danger, but close enough for Emmiline to get way.
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« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2007, 11:55:04 AM »

Firstly - Styrásh is the name of the elvish language in our world.

Secondly, your character lacks...detail. Please read through the archives to get an idea of our expectations of detail on this board.

Thirdly, Welcome to Santharia
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Emmiline
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« Reply #2 on: October 13, 2007, 12:02:49 PM »

Sorry, I didn't know that, I am new here.
And What do you mean by lacks detail?
What else should I put in there?
I'm making a game Character, not a real person, or someone for a novel.
No offence. I don't see why it should be so difficult. That's all. Sorry.
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« Reply #3 on: October 13, 2007, 12:05:18 PM »

This is a post by post RPG forum. If you have read the world has been created and in the process of being created, it is expansive and thorough. We only wish to attempt to mirror what the creators of this site have given to us in act of respect.

We want to know about your character, as a lot is needed to be known in this style of RPing.
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Emmiline
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« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2007, 12:15:15 PM »

Yeah, I know. I'm not stupid. I may be new on this site, but not to RPGing, It's just different then all the other ones I've been on.

It's just I wrote down all the information I can think of and it's not enough?
I just don't get it? What more is there to know? Like what more detail can I get into?
Can you please help me, tell me what needs more detail, instead of telling me the same thing over in different words? :D Please?
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« Reply #5 on: October 13, 2007, 12:18:28 PM »

I was not meaning to say you were new to RPing in the least, merely explaining the standpoint of our views here on the board.

Again, I pointed you in the direction of our Character Description Archives where the approved characters are moved to. Not only are they a terrific read but give insight to newcomers of expectations for approval.
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Emmiline
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« Reply #6 on: October 14, 2007, 04:57:27 AM »

Updates are in pink, Still in progress though.
Tell me what else might be needed to be added. :)
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« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2007, 05:11:34 AM »

You should look at all I wrote!
When I started I thought the same thing, but I guess they need to know alot about each character. Hmmmm............ Looks to me like Dameon has some competition.
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« Reply #8 on: October 14, 2007, 05:21:45 AM »

Haha,  LOL
No, Your's is SO much longer then mine.
T_T cry
Mine sucks.  Thumb down
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"Dementia insanity... blood frenzy....all is lost"


« Reply #9 on: October 14, 2007, 05:24:23 AM »

Yeah but I am still not even approved.
LOL, Kinda sucks u know.
But just keep at it Dameon will be lookin forward to a savvy assassin like himself.
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« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2007, 05:26:38 AM »

Haha.
Me either! And I most likely have a long way to go yet.
Haha, I plan on it, Haha.
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« Reply #11 on: October 14, 2007, 06:15:31 AM »

Updates are in PINK, Still in adding stuff though.
Tell me what else might be needed.  grin Thumb up
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« Reply #12 on: October 14, 2007, 06:29:53 AM »

Any comments?
Any at all?
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« Reply #13 on: October 15, 2007, 03:12:25 PM »

Emmiline, be patient. The weekend is a very slow time for the CD forum. (even mods and admins supposedly need R&R) I'll run a check when I can.
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« Reply #14 on: October 15, 2007, 05:47:03 PM »

I noticed. Haha!
I will be!  grin
Haha. Thanks.
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