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Dhari Vareem
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« on: December 16, 2007, 10:19:59 AM »

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Overview

Name: Dharesh (Dher-resh) Vareem (Va-hreem)
Nickname: Dhari (Dah-rhee), Dharsi (Dhar-see)
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Race: Human
Tribe: 1/2 Eyelian, 1/4 Aerpheronian, 1/4 Shen'Siuu. Now a Black Butterfly Rover.
Occupation: Student, vagabond, pickpocket, & scoundrel.
Title: Freespirit
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Appearance
   

Height: 1 ped, 1 fore, 2 palmspans, 6 nailsbreadths (1.62 peds)
Weight: 8 hebs, 3 ods
Skin Tone: A rich sandy brown Eophran\Viperene color with a Cinnabark luster. These grains were probably inherited from his Shendar and Eyelian heritage, however his palms and the bottom of his feet are lighter than the rest of his body.
Hair Style: A mix between Aeruillin red and Eophran brown in color, his hair is naturally straight and a little more than a palmspan in length. A wide spectrum of highlights and midtones in his hair ebb and flow during the transitioning seasons, which is one of his more unusual physical features. Usually a dark reddish caramel shimmer, it often exchanges various shades of browns and deep reds for blondes, light browns, and oranges. It feels soft and silky to the touch, as he despises grimy hair and rarely forgets to wash each day.
Eye Color: Dark Santhros violet, with a Charcoal colored exterior ring around the cornea, and a Korwyn golden band around the pupil. At first distant glance, the Charcoal and Santhros colors blend together and appear to be Obsidian or Waterberry in color. Upon closer inspection, however, the two colors are obviously distinct, and the golden band around his pupil is enhanced. His eyes hold a penetrating property of power and truth which seem to radiate warmth in times of need.
Body Type: An athletic and naturally trim body, inheriting the bold muscular features of the Eyelians, combined with the firm thin features of the Erpheronians. His body is surprisingly well developed for a boy his age. His shoulders are well pronounced, his back and chest muscles have visibly emerged, his stomach is flat and distinct, his arm muscles are thicker than other boys his age, his firm thighs lead up into firm buttocks and tanned lower back, and his calves are strong and bold.
Miscellaneous Attributes: A very tiny black butterfly tattoo perches several grains above the outer edge of his left eyebrow, which is the mark of his loyalty to the Black Butterfly Rovers. He bears this mark proudly and stoically, especially when those whom he meets recognize this tattoo and rebukes him for being apart of the rough and rowdy nomadic group. He has four piercing holes on each ear, towards the upper part of the back, but he rarely wears anything in them, as any spare jewelry he finds go towards food and crafting.
Clothing:
  • Daytime: While traveling in cold, chilly, or even brisk conditions, he wears a deep purple long sleeved shirt which is far too big for his small frame, as well as very bagging navy blue shorts (that could classify as pants due to their size) which he must hike up from time to time to keep them from slipping off his body. Whenever the sun is shining and the air is warm, he wears no shirt, but instead prefers to tie it around his hips to keep his baggy blue shorts on. He also has a light brown raggedy sleeveless shirt which he wears near civilization. He wears a tight thin necklace at all times that is made up of Obsidian colored beads, which is of no real value to anyone else, but instead reminds him of his deceased parents. He lacks both a belt as well as proper sandals, because of his affiliation with the Butterfly Rovers. Sometimes he shares the clothes of his best friend, Jishnuu.
  • Nighttime: If he is fortunate enough to sleep in an inn, tavern, or caravan, he will usually wear nothing, or occasionally his navy blue shorts (if girls are present, in other words). If he is sleeping outside in the elements or in the streets, he will wear his deep purple baggy shirt. When he goes to bed he takes off anything extra except for his beaded necklace which he never removes.
  • Accessories: He wears a black beaded necklace which is close fitting around his neck. It fastens with two tiny hooks in the back. He wears this, because it was given to him by the woman whom invited him into the Black Butterfly Rovers in the first place. It also reminds him of his lost parents, whom the woman allegedly knew.


Belongings

Clothes:
  • 1 Waterberry purple colored long-sleeve extra baggy shirt.
  • 1 Xazure blue colored extra baggy shorts.
  • 1 Viperene sand colored sleeveless shirt.
  • 1 Obsidian colored tight beaded necklace.
Weapons:
  • 1 arched multi-metal handblade with a leather hilt and a butterfly melded into the folded steel. It has a rough 45 degree arch, and a 2 palmspans, 2 nailsbreadths length blade.
Equipment:
  • 1 small coinpurse.
Items Of Consumption:
  • N/A
Miscellaneous:
  • 25 sans
  • 2 ods of sulphur
  • 5 muts of ashes
  • 3 muts of iron
  • 2 muts of charcoal
  • 2 muts of copper salts
  • 2 muts of fyrite flakes
  • 2 muts of magather stone dust
  • 1 mut of saltpeter
  • 1 mut of greenflash
  • 1 mut of Xazuran powder
  • 1 mut of calcium


Personality

Intellect: Dhari is a very sharp kid, and an equally fast thinker. Everything about him is about action; about going fast, and about beating the other person to the prize. He is good with quick calculations and estimations, able to size up an environment, predict the most valuable ways to go, and execute without much strategy or pre-planning. He seems to compliment his friend Jaya, as Jaya is the exact opposite way to Dhari. He's a fast learner, although he does not like to apply himself in subjects that are not fascinating or entertaining to him.
Attitude: Dhari is a very optimistic and extroverted person. He has no problem with being poor his whole life, although secretly he has burning ambitions which he is too afraid to uncover. He can pick up a conversation with anyone, anywhere, anytime. One of his many gifts is his ability to communicate maturely with individuals far above his age level. He is also able to relate to kids on his level and below. This makes Dhari an extremely balanced and worldly individual. His good looks and ability to persuade, however, does not go to his head, as it would other people his age. He is able to maintain a sense of humility and responsibility to balance his quick-to-act and carefree nature.

Strengths:
  • Young and healthy. Able to move with agility, and also able to wield a dagger effectively, due to standard Black Butterfly Rover combat training. Good at acrobatics as well.
  • Intelligent. As he travels with the Black Butterfly Rovers, he is being taught by other members, a mage, and older children, although he is rather far behind in comparison to official schools. Quick thinking and common sense help him out wherever his knowledge may be lacking.
  • Good people skills. His ability to talk to, befriend, persuade, taunt, or manipulate many different people aid him considerably in getting what he wants or needs. His only attachments lie to his friends, and to no one else. These he holds at the highest regard. No amount of bribery or threat could force him into betraying the only people he's ever had to love.
  • Magic. His affinity for fire magic is only hindered by his lack of experience and proper training. He is rarely capable of using it in combat.
Weaknesses:
  • The deaths of his parents were taken very hard, and some psychologic issues such as depression have emerged from it. Some days he feels so sad that he can't get out of bed, but the next day he'll be back to his happy self again.
  • Risk taking behavior and lack of thorough thought processes for complicated endeavors often lead him into sticky situations that are often life threatening.
  • Life on the street has left him in poverty and discomfort. He is more exposed to illness, battering, and dangerous situations than the average Santharian. He worries from day to day where his next meal is coming from, and he often goes for days without sustenance leaving him thin and gaunt.
  • Naive and Gullible. Although his travels have brought him to many places and locations, he almost never knows what's going on from town to town, and especially on a national level. He tends to pick arguments which he can't support. Also, he is extremely wary of shady looking figures, but trusts all other sorts of people. If someone looks like an alright person, than he has no problem opening up to them, even if they don't have his best interests at heart.
  • Adolescence. The advent of adolescence has had numerous mental, physical, and emotional changes on Dhari. His feelings towards the opposite gender confuse him, and his feelings towards his own gender confuse him even more. He is finding himself more and more self conscious about things he never worried about before. This often distracts him from his already difficult life as a traveling street urchin.


Magic


As young child, wisps of stories about mages and fantastic visions of grandeur swam about in his imagination. Myth and magic always peaked his interest whenever he overheard them being discussed in snippets of conversation. His only request to his parents was that upon his twelfth birthday, he would be sent to the academy at Ximax. Unfortunately, both money and location were problems that his parents had to look forward to. Keeping an open mind and an open heart, Dhari realized that his long term goal of becoming a wind mage was just that... long term.

After the death of his parents and his departure into the Kairian Teeth, he realized that the last chance of him entering the Ximaxiian Academy had slipped away. Mentally distraught for his parents and for his shattered life, Dhari desperately tried to teach himself magic. He explored many places within himself, and attempted to make sense of all the magic knowledge he had accumulated over the past ten years. He would try to start a camp fire with his mind, or spend hours trying to lure animals into his cave, but no matter what, nothing seemed to work.

When the rovers found him and took him into their ranks, Dhari was both relieved and disappointed. He had found a family, but had not succeeded in learning magic on his own. Fortunately on his eleventh birthday, he was blessed by Ava. An elderly man by the name of Hernao agreed to teach Dhari in the ways of fire magic. Dhari jumped at the chance to learn some magic... any magic... and so his training began.

Sessions were long and gruelling. They took up several hours of the day, and often overlapped with his other studies. Hernao was a very firm and incompassionate teacher. He took great delight in Dhari's quick prowess, but went to great lengths in order to not show it. Also, he would dodge questions about where he learned magic in the first place and how come he came to be so good at it. Every day, Hernao had a new excercise for Dhari. He usually gave him easy tasks, like catching small flammable items on fire, and reducing the influence of fire ounia in the air.

Dhari was quick to learn about magic concepts, and his mind seemed to be pre-formatted for learning magic. It only took him about a week of constant practice to learn how to cause his hands to glow. It wasn't long after that he was able to make other body parts glow, much to the laughs and giggles of his friends to whom he was entertaining. The first spell he learned was to light things on fire, and soon after learned how to reverse the effect. Learning how to link his own interior fire ounia and exterior fire ounia around him made this much easier.

Dhari even surprised Hernao with his surprising creativity towards magic, especially at such a young age. He discovered all on his own how to wrap a metal cauldron in strongly influenced fire ounia in order to increase the temperature of its contents. Also, another shocking talent that Dhari discovered on his own was that he was able to influence the fire ounia in others, increasing or decreasing the emotions they were already experiencing.

By the time Dhari was 14, he could create dazzling displays with his mind and boil one's blood to purge it of evil and disease. He could also color his flame and sustain it without fuel. Hernao was so impressed with Dhari's abilities that he agree to include him in his travelling magic show. Whenever the two travelled into the city, they would put on a good old Macanti magic show for passersby to watch and enjoy.

Dhari's abilities so far, although they are always developing, aren't capable enough to be used in combat. Unfortunately, being tutored by Hernao has robbed Dhari of all of the resources of a magic school, although it has given him more experience using it and applying it in the real world. Over all, Dhari is a brilliant fire mage still in the basic formitive years of his developement. Hopefully he will rise into his full potential in the future.



Fighting Style

What fighting style?

This is the opinion of many towards the fighting style of the Black Butterfly Rovers, however their techniques in the hands of the right people can be deadly. Dhari does not have considerable training in this area. Due to the lack of confrontational situations that he has been involved in, his fighting style focuses more around self defense and removing one'self from the situation. As a result, he specializes in hand to hand self defense.

The dagger in his possession is used primarily to intimidate and to cut purses. He has no significant training in how to use it other than what is directly applicable to hand to hand combat. Regardless, he still takes great pride in the appearance and adornments of the blade, as it is a powerful symbol to him of belonging to a family; the Black Butterfly Rovers.

Acrobatics and speed play a significant part in his fighting style. Possibly due to growing up in an inconsistant environment, Dhari has become a resourceful and inventive person, using his changing surroundings to his advantage. He is able to jump from tree to tree at astounding heights without being overwhelmed by vertigo. He can dodge nimbly, flip, roll, cartwheel, and exert his body in ingenious ways. A master of momentum and agile as a cat, he always lands on his feet and has a heightened sense of time and position.

Years of running amok in the jungle, scavenging through the mountains, and playing with the equally agile Rover youth has toned and trained his body to be as sharp and athletic as possible. However, due to a lack of experience, Dhari rarely uses magic in combat or in stressful situations which require intense focus.

Overall, his abilities in fighting, while limited, are greatly enhanced by his advanced acrobatic capabilities.



Familiar(s)

Name: Jishnuu ('Hish-noo) Sawara (Suh-'war-uh)
Nickname: Jaya ('Hai-yah)
Gender: Male
Age: 13
Race: Human
Tribe: 100% Shen'Siuu
Appearance:
  • Height: 1 ped, 1 fore, 2 palmspans, 8 nailsbreadths
  • Weight: 8 hebs, 4 ods
  • Skin Tone: An Eophran brown slightly darker than Dhari's.
  • Hair Style: Obsidian in color, it rarely changes tones. He keeps it 1 palmspan, a few nailsbreadths, and due to less washing, it contains oils which cause it to shimmer.
  • Eye Color: A light wholesome Cinnabrown.
  • Body Type: Slim and athletic, just like Dhari, but has a more wiry\sinewy muscle build than he does.
  • Miscellaneous: Has a small Black Butterfly Rovers tattoo just above his left shoulder blade.
Personality: Not very extroverted, Jishnuu often looks up to and respects Dharesh as the leader of their two-man team. He has a kind and caring disposition, often thoughtful not only about other people, but about decisions that Dhari would otherwise rashly charge into.
Brief History: Born of a nomadic Shendar couple, Jishnuu was sadly the product of prostitution. His mother wished to take care of him, but in anger, the father took him far away to the city of Uderza where he dumped Jaya in an orphanage and left him. Jaya never knew the names of his parents, let alone who they were. He began acting out as a rather disruptive child, and one day ran away from the orphanage altogether. Fortunately, he ran into a kind woman who happened to be part of the Black Butterfly Rovers. Filled with compassion she brought him into the family and took him under her wing.

When he was eleven, the kind woman who had taken him in and raised him took in another young man. His name was Dharesh, and he was of the same age as Jaya. He was immediately stricken with jealousy at this. To make matters worse, the woman who he had come to look upon as his mother up and left one day with no more than a goodbye and a pair of black beaded necklaces as parting gifts to the both of them.

Jaya treated Dhari rottenly. Whenever Dhari was struggling with his chores, or his lessons, Jaya blatantly attempted to make it harder on him. Dhari often responded with hostility in retaliation. The tension culminated in an all out brawl between the two on a hot summer day while they were fetching water from a spring in the forest. Both got in some good hits, (or at least as good of hits that eleven year old's are capable of), and it ended it the collapse of both boys. Without the ability to move, the two were forced to lie there in the middle of the forest and talk until they regained mobility of their limbs. They ended up working everything out, and developed a neutral peace.

Because of both boys lack of friends their age, they gravitated together and clicked. Soon, the two of them became the best of friends. You wouldn't see either of them alone; they were always a pair, and an inseparable one at that.
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Name/Nickname: Goobi
Gender: Unknown (Male?)
Age: 2
Race: Bouncer
Appearance:
  • Height: 1 palmspan 2 nailsbreadths
  • Weight: 1 od
  • Diameter: 1 palmspan, 3 nailsbreadths
  • Hair Style: Goobi has light brown fur, rather soft and tufty, which sheds to white during the winter.
  • Eye Color: Black little dots in a mass of fur.
  • Body Type:Tiny and globular.
  • Miscellaneous: Has a bit of an underbite, and its two fangs poke out slightly.
Personality: Goobi has a personality that could fill a room. Unless someone is really sad, Goobi will disregard everybody else but itself. It loves to bounce around like it owns the place, and nip your toe if you aren't holding him or giving him the desired amount of attention.
Brief History: Dhari found the young bouncer when he and Jaya were travelling with the Butterflies around the Shaded Forest. Goobi was a young, adventurous, and ornery bouncer who ventured into the midst of Dhari and Jaya by sheer curiosity. Ecstatic, the two boys took in the young bouncer and named it Goobi, after the squeaky sound it makes when it's being particularly annoyed.


History


The Parents: Khali and Mercatori Vareem were wealthy Shendar merchants. Although they travelled with other nomadic Shen'Siuu tribes, they had all of their assets tied up in banks and wealthy nobles in Uderza. Contrary to the norm, Khali and Mercatori were secretly apart of the Black Butterfly Rovers.

Dhari's mother, Khali Vareem, was a Shen'Siuu/Aerpheronian mix. Her mother was Shendar and her father was a wealthy Aerpheronian noble who had moved to Uderza in his youth. On the other hand, Dhari's father, Mercatori Vareem, was the son of two Eyelian Black Butterfly Rovers. When their travels brought Mercatori to Uderza, he met Khali and they fell in love. He took an apprenticeship in Khali's father's merchant business and soon became a skilled businessman. In their later years, Mercatori and Khali married. Khali secretly joined the Black Butterfly Rovers, and Khali's father handed over his business to Mercatori.

Khali and Mercatori were great businessmen. On top of a lucrative trade, they also managed to con money out of rich nobles to support the local Black Butterfly Rovers. Not long after, Khali became pregnant. It was at this inconvenient time that the authorities of Uderza began to crack down on fraudulent merchants. Khali and Mercatori invested all of their savings into the banks of a close personal friend, and then went into hiding with the Black Butterfly Rovers.

Khali gave birth to a baby boy, and named him Dharesh, meaning "Proud Star". They dutifully raised him according to the Butterfly Rovers code. When he turned 5, however, they decided to settle down in Elsreth to raise him in a more stable environment. For five more years they raised him there in Elsreth, sending him off to school to get a head start on his education. All this time they kept in constant contact with the Rovers. However, one unfortunate day, both parents were attacked by highwaymen and murdered.

Dhari: Griefstricken and alone, Dhari fled from Elsreth and into the Kairian Teeth. For a year, he survived in the mountains, living off small animals and plant roots, until the Black Butterfly Rovers found him. A woman named Clarisse who claimed to be a close friend of his parents had agreed to take him in. He grudgingly agreed, although the other kid whom she took care of; Jishnuu, seemed to hate Dhari with a fiery passion.

Everything fell apart when Clarisse urgently left a month later with nothing but a farewell. She left behind tears on both sides, as well as two black beaded necklaces; one for Dhari, and one for Jaya. After she had gone, Dhari felt as if the hole in his heart had been enlarged. To make matters more unpleasant, Jishnuu was acting very hostile to Dhari during chores, lessons, and periods of relaxation. One day, one of the adults asked Jishnuu and Dhari to fetch water together from the Shaded Forest. En route to the spring, they broke out in a fist fight which resulted in the two working out their differences. Once all the old meaningless tension had subsided, the two discovered that they could be the best of friends. Little did they know that on their way back to the caravan that an unexpected guest was following them...

Goobi's Arrival: While the boys were hanging around the campfire near their caravan, talking about their parents, a small curious bouncer bounced up to them. It began squeaking very loudly until it got their attention. Once they stopped talking to find that the small, strange creature was in their presence, the bouncer stopped squeaking and stared at them with a blank expression.

Dhari approached it, and the bouncer hopped into his hands. Jaya suggested that they keep it, and the bouncer seemed to agree. Dhari decided to name it Goobi after the strange squeaky sound it made when it wanted attention. And so, the third member of the team came to join them.

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जीवनमस्ति क्रीडैव शक्ति कर्म.
"Life is just a game of strength and karma."
::~Dhari Vareem~::
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« Reply #1 on: December 16, 2007, 01:19:05 PM »

Hey guys... I wouldn't mind a look-over whenever you guys get that chance.  Pet
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« Reply #2 on: December 16, 2007, 04:03:26 PM »

Wow. This is... really long ^.^ I don't really have time right at this moment, but I'll try to take a look tomorrow. In the meantime, please correct your title so that it tells us Name/Tribe/Occupation (nothing more, nothing less). 'Black Butterfly Rovers' is a troup of people, not an occupation. That would be like telling us your occupation is gypsie ;)
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« Reply #3 on: December 16, 2007, 06:11:20 PM »

Haha, I'm sorry but I have to apologize in advance. This thing *motions abstractly to the CD* is probably very error-ridden, considering I did this very late last night. Hopefully it is coherent.

And the font changes the size a bit, so it's not as long as it looks.
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« Reply #4 on: December 17, 2007, 12:53:32 AM »

I would also recommend removing some of the massive spacing you have between sections. This covers alot of unused space and would bring everything more cohesiveness. The rule of thumb is to use only single spacing between sections and paragraphs. I must also state ..... using real pictures seems somewhat, wrong. If these are indeed pictures of yourself then I see nothing excessively wrong, but if they aren't I would consider using others.

There is no need to go beyond nailsbreadths to measure height or length. There is noway for the average person to measure this accurately. Please do not use % to define his heritage. Going down to the mut is also unneeded to define weight.
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P.S.: Using large font sizes for colored section headings is also unneeded.
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« Reply #5 on: December 17, 2007, 05:11:57 AM »

Corrected to those specifications. Your time is much appreciated.

The pictures, however, stay;
The first picture is public domain, and the second is my little half-brother. And yes, I have the permission of all parties involved.

Strange though, I've never had any trouble with real pictures in the past... What troubles you about them?

I always found that borrowing art or cartoons you haven't drawn yourself is far more troubling than a simple photograph that you haven't taken yourself, but that's just me. As a musician I suppose I saw more creative exertion in painting a picture yourself than in taking the picture (with the exception of photography in art form), but who am I to decide...


Anyways, in your opinion, (anyone's opinion), does Dhari need more depth to his personality and/or history??
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« Reply #6 on: December 17, 2007, 05:20:43 AM »

Pictures: There is nothing that troubles me about them .... but would you like to wander over a porn site using your personal picture for advertisement? Same principal applies here.

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Wonderful statement of fact .... glad you think so. ~Wanders off to do some of her own writing~
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« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2007, 08:19:37 AM »

Oh, I'm sorry, hehe, no offense to your personal opinion.  grin
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« Reply #8 on: December 31, 2007, 09:57:54 PM »

Bump
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« Reply #9 on: Today at 08:24:42 AM »

First of all, I would think that calling a human a familiar is insulting, won't you? ;)

As for Dhari, please split up your first strength. Altogether, it actually is three strengths: dagger skill, acrobatics and agility. May I point out as well that you cannot have fighting skills with magic, although I'm not a magic expert so you'll have to wait for someone else to comment on that section.

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or at least as good of hits that eleven year old's are (eleven year olds were) capable of

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