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Author Topic: Arintheos Gavalas / Helcrani / Sellsword-Brigand  (Read 5288 times)
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Simonne Miller
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« Reply #15 on: February 04, 2008, 04:50:03 PM »
Ok, I talked it over with some of the other CD mods and the admin, and we agreed that the price on his head would be 10 silverbards to 1 goldbard at most. 2000 silverbards really is too much, no place has that kind of money to hand out :)

I think, when you changed that, that you're ready for an approval ^.^
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« Reply #16 on: February 04, 2008, 05:18:41 PM »
We had actually been talking, and there are so many circumstances which go into setting a price on one's head. 1 Goldbard is almost the max I would really have any particular town below royalty, I was more thinking like 10-20 Nunes more likely
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« Reply #17 on: February 06, 2008, 01:14:16 AM »
I've edited it to 10 silverbards, as per your suggestions.
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« Reply #18 on: February 06, 2008, 03:06:12 AM »
This is WAAAAY nitpicky..but...

I noticed that the word opportunity is misspelled a few times in your history as well as a few other words.

And, in your appearance, wouldn't it be quite rare for a red haired person to have brown eyes? Green or blue eyes would be more likely for someone with a red-headed gene. It just kind of threw me so I thought I'd mention it.

I have too much time on my hands

And, I still don't understand the whole sleepwalking/fighting thing...but oh well.  Huh?

Otherwise, nice CD and congrats on a creating a very intimidating character.
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« Reply #19 on: February 06, 2008, 06:08:12 AM »
~First Approval~ Exceptionally written character! Enjoy your time on the boards hun.
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« Reply #20 on: February 06, 2008, 10:24:35 AM »
Thanks Twén!

Azhira, I went ahead and ran it through spellcheck again - the only mispelled word it picked up was "bodyguard" - though I did find one example of opportunity that was wrong and not detected and fixed it. Strange.

As for the hair and eye color, I myself have red hair and brown eyes, so thanks for making me feel special :)

So close ...
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« Reply #21 on: February 06, 2008, 02:09:07 PM »
Second approval and title ^.^
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