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Author Topic: Synder Nytefall ~ Jhehellrhim-Ahrhim ~ Pirate/Rogue  (Read 9483 times)
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Azhira Styralias
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« Reply #15 on: November 20, 2009, 12:01:20 PM »
The CD still doesn't seem balanced well enough for me. I can't in all honesty approve this CD unless there is some kind of compromise here.

And...we're kinda short on CD mods nowadays, so get your negotiation caps on.

I feel that a strength or two has to go or be reduced in scope. Adding more weaknesses is not going to balance those strengths. The knee injury just seems counterproductive. The whole point of this concept is stealthy pirate. But I see stealthy pirate AND stealthy fighter AND stealthy rogue. Those strengths really stand out. The weaknesses I seem to forget as soon as I am done reading them.

Unless the admins overrule me, I will insist that those strengths be given another look over before I approve.
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« Reply #16 on: November 20, 2009, 02:51:28 PM »
Adjustments made to Azhira's and Valan's comments. Lovely Purple was used.
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« Reply #17 on: November 22, 2009, 11:42:04 AM »
I know this sounds extremely nitpicky, but could you please change the colour of your changes to something lighter? That colour is really giving me a headache to look at. It's pretty hard on the eyes. Sorry to be a bother for something so trivial, but it's just something that may be a bit of a courtesy.
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« Reply #18 on: November 23, 2009, 02:50:39 PM »
Adjustments altered to teal.

Helpful hint: If you ever have trouble reading a colour tone on-site ... just highlight the text Sylvia. heart
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« Reply #19 on: November 23, 2009, 03:06:48 PM »
But it is also considerate of the CDs Author to pick a colour easily read by those trying to make comments.
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« Reply #20 on: November 23, 2009, 03:22:53 PM »
Then there was no need for the comment to Sylvia, Twen.
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« Reply #21 on: November 23, 2009, 03:27:58 PM »
You make it sound as if it is only him.
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« Reply #22 on: November 28, 2009, 06:50:18 AM »
Ok Synder...

Yes, readable colors are appreciated as my monitor is not in the best of shape nowadays. It gets too dark sometimes.  :P

The longsword skill still has me wondering. You rarely use it so it makes me wonder why its there. I think it should be a shamshir or shortsword, personally. The weaknesses are ok I guess. I'm not sure why I am hesitant, but maybe I'm trying to nitpick.  I'm not sure how much of ßluddε's comments are valid, so I leave that up to you.

I'll go ahead and give this a First Approval.  Thumb up
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« Reply #23 on: November 30, 2009, 04:05:25 AM »
The only issue (minor - and certainly nothing to keep me from giving you my approval, as it is more a question of individual taste than anything) I have is your use of 'Black Butterfly Rover' as a Tribe ... in the case of Dek I used Erpheronian as his tribe and brought the fact he was Black Butterfly Rover in somewhere else is. However, to me, that is neither here nor there. In any case, here's my 2nd approval for you. Sorry for it taking so long.

PS I too found your original selection of edit colour (the purple) difficult to read. I solved the problem of it straining my eyes to be solved by wearing my sunglasses ... but that was a weird look. :D
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« Reply #24 on: November 30, 2009, 04:13:55 AM »
I will back Dek on this, as the Rovers aren't actually a Tribe, but more of a group of different tribes, more of a guild or sect, etc.

I would say find a tribe which would work and add it in. Once that is done, go ahead and remove the excess color and I can title.
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« Reply #25 on: December 01, 2009, 03:37:48 PM »
Titled and Archived.
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« Reply #26 on: March 06, 2011, 03:26:40 PM »
Brought up as requested. :)
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« Reply #27 on: March 06, 2011, 04:37:04 PM »
Fixered up my typops and coding errors. Ready for the abyss once again. Thanks Alt! hug
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