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Author Topic: So Orril Miés'efér (Ready for title!!!l)  (Read 27569 times)
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« Reply #45 on: February 19, 2006, 03:36:23 AM »

Ok, If I had seen that before, I wouldn't put graduation.
This leaves me with a question, someone in this post say that you can graduate at every level, that's true or false?

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« Reply #46 on: February 19, 2006, 03:54:23 AM »

It's false.  And that entry is very outdated.  However, you are right that level 6 is when a mage graduates from Ximax.  If they leave before then, they are not considered to have graduated.  


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« Reply #47 on: February 19, 2006, 05:21:23 AM »

So i'm graduated or not?

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« Reply #48 on: February 19, 2006, 06:46:23 AM »

Seems so :)

Orril, why don't you just make a trip out in the woods, or accompany somebody and there you find a wolf pup? Maybe the party you were with killed the other wolves of the pack and you took care of the little one? Then it might work...it will accept you as its "alpha male"

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« Reply #49 on: February 19, 2006, 09:36:23 AM »

Wow, what a great idea, yes I will put that
Thanks Talia :hug  

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« Reply #50 on: February 23, 2006, 09:27:23 AM »

As for graduation: compare it to a real life doctor. Each year you'll graduate from the year you are following, but only after the seventh or so you'll be a fully-fledged doctor. Still, that doesn't mean you'll be able to do more complicated things as surgery. => As a mage, you can graduate from level 1-5, but at level 6 you'll be considered as a fully-fledged mage. That doesn't mean you'll be to do complicated things as sphere III spells though. If you want to do those, you'll need extra studying. Just more experience won't help you out with that.

Magic looks fine now. A bit short, but accepteble I think.

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« Reply #51 on: February 23, 2006, 01:38:23 PM »

HOOO, thanks for the explanation Marvin, it is easier to understand that.
So I'm ready for a title?:number1  

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« Reply #52 on: February 24, 2006, 01:59:23 AM »

What about going through it again and trying to eliminate the grammar mistakes the spellchecker can't find or the double words :
latter later
leaved=left
etc
Shaded forest=Shaded Forest
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rephrase your "alpha" (leading animal)

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Edited by: Talia Sturmwind  at: 2/23/06 18:03
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« Reply #53 on: February 24, 2006, 12:07:23 PM »

Ok, thanks Talia, I'm going to check it now

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« Reply #54 on: February 26, 2006, 06:08:23 AM »

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well, let’s see if you don’t tan after almost 300 years doing fieldwork

When did you do fieldwork? Magery is studying and I don't see you doing it in your spare time in your history.

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because I stay awake almost all the afternoon and night and sleep almost all morning, so for say it fast I love the night, and this is reflected on my familiars, a wolf and an owl.

Aren't wolves creature of the day?

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Others says that I'm exceedingly patient, that I must show my strength, when I was studying I was a target for affronts, but I never put a stop (Well, actually once, but now I think it wasn't enough).

Being patient doesn't make you a target for insults as far as I know.

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My family sent me letters too, and usually a bit of money to buy more reagents.

And food, and clothes, and books, and... Unless you have some kind of job you'll need that too :)

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In my years of study I got two familiars, a horned owl named "Strom" and a wolf named "Shadow" this two were a birthday since Storm was it, and Shadow...

This sentence is confusing. What do you mean with it? And Strom or Storm?

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While I was in a trip with some hunters in the woods I found a wolf pup, casualty? don't think so, I couldn't leave him there, I thought that my party killed his pack, so I felt bad, I picked the cub and keep it. I named him Shadow, for it’s gray color, Shadow grow, thinking that I was and am the Alpha of the pack, so it don't attacks me.

Again, you're writing is very confusing. Break it up in some more sentences and don't be afraid to explain things a little more.
I think you mean 'Coincidence?'. you won't be able to do much with a wolf pup casualty.
You mean he has a shadow grey colour?

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I think that I like her, she hears me and does almost all that I ask her to do, I say almost, because sometimes she won’t obey.

You think? So you're not sure about it? And how can she understand you? You mean you learned things (like sit, lie down, attack, stay,...)? She's just an owl after all.

I noticed you're using a lot of commas, even when it isn't needed. Sometimes it's better to break things up in two (or more) sentences, especially when two parts of a sentence have little to do with one another. Also, you don't need a comma in front of 'and' or 'or' unless you want to stress that there's a pause in between the two parts of the sentences.

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« Reply #55 on: February 26, 2006, 11:37:23 AM »

Thanks for comenting Marv.
I will add about fieldwork, yes the idea was in the spare time and I think in Ximax academy they give you hollydays, Right?

Well, about wolves, they usually sleep in day and afternoon, but they can stay awake at day too. And is common to see the wolves as creatures of the night and darkness (at least in Latinamerica that is the idea about wolves).

Being patient makes you a good person indeed, but usually others abuse of that patiens, and provoke you, that is my personal expirence.

Good point, I never thinked about that... I will add it now.

Typing error in the sentence, I mean Storm. And I mean that while I studyed someone gave me Storm and I got Shadow pup from the forest.

Yes, I mean Shadow have a shadow grey color. And yes, the word I was searching for was coincidence.

I used I think because I can't proof if I like her (This is a bit confusing, I mean if she have a "feling" about me). Then, owls are very inteligent birds, if you have them from very young, then they learn about meanings, if you say "X sit", and X "sits", you give something as price, then X will learn that if he/she does that when you ask it, he/she will get food. That is the most common training method.

If you can understand that, means that I'm not so bad to express, if you can't understand that, ask again, and I will search for a better explanation.  

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« Reply #56 on: February 26, 2006, 07:44:23 PM »

You mean you can't prove she likes you?

Oh, and just a hint, but I found that spellchecking every post you make improves your spelling a lot. It's what I used to do when I started out playing. I used to have spelling mistakes about every two sentences. Now I don't do so anymore as there's only typos left and I'm too lazy to fire up word for that :)  

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« Reply #57 on: February 27, 2006, 05:21:23 AM »

No, I mean that I can't proof if I like her, the inverse that you said... It's kinda hard that part:explode  

Edit: I think I got it, is she likes me, or at least that's what says many traducers online.

Reedit: I think there's nothing more to add, so here comes the question:
I'm ready for a title???:number1  

Edited by: so orril miesefer at: 3/2/06 21:48
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« Reply #58 on: March 06, 2006, 04:43:23 AM »

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During my spare time I did some fieldwork and research around Ximax city

Fieldwork and research for...? Magery is more a thing that is learned behind desks. Practice can happen pretty much anywhere where there's sufficient space for the spell you're practicing (and perhaps another (better) mage to keep an eye on things.

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In my years of study I got two familiars, a horned owl named "Storm" and a wolf named "Shadow" this two were a birthday since a friend gave me Storm as a present and Shadow...

This is still as confusing as before. Try and make it a bit more clear. For example: "In my years of study I got two familiars, a horned owl named "Storm" and a wolf named "Shadow". Storm was a birthday present from a friend and Shadow...".

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With other people he gets nervous. () He doesn’t attack the others, but doesn’t let them to touch him. With kids he is playful as with me. Why? A good question. I think that’s because he associates the older people to the hunters, and the kids as anything more.

And the kids as anything more... and then? Anything more what?

Well, there’s still a lot of improvement to be done in your grammar, but I guess you'll get better at that as you use your English more. Also, as I said before, you tend to try and put everything in one sentence, sometimes even if things are not related to each other. Generally, if I'm using three or more commas in one sentence I'll see if I can split it up. For example like I did with in the last quote.

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« Reply #59 on: March 06, 2006, 04:53:23 AM »

Orril, I can only stress what Marvin has said. Your char description is your entrance in a story. The story mods will read it and decide on your performance here, if they want to take you or not.  

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