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Author Topic: OOC (3) -- ONNYA returns!  (Read 29421 times)
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Tzilon Ikara
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« Reply #15 on: June 03, 2005, 12:28:22 AM »

OH, and just to let you know, I gave you the wrong last name on purpose.

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« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2005, 12:41:22 AM »

Yeah, i figured as much Tzi :)

And @Morc:

Here's the audition post to respond to in bold below. Have fun! :)

While scanning over the crowd, another person caught her eye. A little girl, with the biggest sky blue eyes Luca had ever seen and a messy, somewhat familiar, mop of unkempt blonde hair, was making through the crowd and begging for whatever she could get.

Several other waifs were innocently working the early departing crowd; but being a former street child herself, Luca knew better. The half-elf's eyes grazed the scene quickly, taking account of each of the children's positions.

The poor sucker Luca thought, figuring the plan of action and pinpointing the target. A rather pompous looking merchant with a gaudy purple robe and a ring or two on each finger. Watching all the children, only a half dozen of them with a few more probably watching nearby, Luca caught the subtal signals and waited for the show to start.

The other's moved into position, surrounding the merchant in a semicircle behind and around him, while the little girl ran through the crowd towards him. She bumped into the man, lifting one of his coin pouches. But she made an error, and he noticed.

Grabbing the frightened little girl by the wrist, the merchant yanked her back and started yelling. "You disgusting little waif! Give that back this instant! You're parents must be proud," he said continued sarcastically, once he had his coin purse back in hand, "Oh wait, you don't have any"



(Special message from Luca: "I can CP like NOBODY'S business".)  



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« Reply #17 on: June 03, 2005, 02:02:22 AM »

Jeharaid's attention had also been focused on the children, but for a different reason. His recently aquired coin purse from his last job was feeling suddenly vulnerable with all these little street urchins dancing around the crowd, and he kept a light hand on the bulge just beneath his belt.

The shout of the bullying merchant suddenly drew his attention and for a moment he forgot about his money - a mistake he would soon regret.

"You disgusting little waif! Give that back this instant! You're parents must be proud," he said continued sarcastically, once he had his coin purse back in hand, "Oh wait, you don't have any"

Morcaanan stepped up behind the man and put a hand on his shoulder. "And I'm sure you make your family proud by insulting hungry little girls" he said, his voice thick with warning; "That is, if they can stand you in the first place."

He wrenched the man's hand from the girls wrist and turned to her. "Stealing is never a right young miss" he said reproachfully. "Even in the hardest times, no wrong is justifiable. You understand?"

The little girl nodded and suddenly hugged him, catching him off guard. "Thank you" she said, and then scampered off into the crowd.

Morcaanan, still  alittle surprised, took his leave and headed for a nearby tavern. He reached for the bag of coins beneath his belt - and suddenly felt very, very foolish as he felt...absolutely nothing.

He sighed and shook his head. When was he ever going to learn? He walked down the street, his empty belt heavier than the coins that had hung there only a short while ago...

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« Reply #18 on: June 03, 2005, 09:55:22 AM »

Okie bah, it's your queue to make the post with the discovery and reading of the ransom note in Group B. :)   Go!

And Morcanaan, give us a couple of days to discuss your post ... it's looking good! :)  



Edited by: Khiera at: 6/3/05 1:55
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« Reply #19 on: June 03, 2005, 11:17:22 AM »

Did Morcannan mean to change his name in middle of the post?

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« Reply #20 on: June 03, 2005, 02:06:22 PM »

You might need to read my CD. I am called Jeharaid Morcaanan. Savvy?;)  

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« Reply #21 on: June 04, 2005, 09:23:22 AM »

Sorry, I was a wee bit confused...

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« Reply #22 on: June 07, 2005, 05:27:22 AM »

Sooo, my new post is up, but I wasn't quite sure about some things.  So tell me if I need to edit it, i.e. the content of the letter, how much money should it be, and so on.

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« Reply #23 on: June 07, 2005, 04:59:22 AM »

Sorry to group A. I havent been able to post because i cant see the thread. I will see what i can do about getting a post in there soon, so we can get RPing.

EDIT: Ok nevermind, i got it fixed, basically my problem summed up to my being an idiot.

Edited by: Manik Targin at: 6/6/05 21:13
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« Reply #24 on: June 07, 2005, 05:59:22 AM »

Excellent post Tzi! :thumbup

The content of the letter is generally fine, but if i can be a wee bit nit-picky for the sake of continuity later on in the plotline: perhaps you could change the part about "if you want to see your smelly ... friends again" to something more general to the tune of just "friends" in general. This is because the people that are missing are Kiushapo and Kishara (we're going to consider her missing for now until we have more news about her posting schedule etc), and neither are smelly nor ugly ... hehehe :wink2

Otherwise, everything looks peachy and i'll try to make a post tonight :)  



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« Reply #25 on: June 07, 2005, 06:04:22 AM »

And, speaking of Group A (Thanks Manik/Brodin), Luca, you need to be a-postying so we can get a move-on, ahem ahem. :hammer

Or, alternatively, Jee, you should move in and be a-postying as well!  



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« Reply #26 on: June 07, 2005, 07:31:22 AM »

ok, i made my joining post. Its not a great entrance, or a great post, but i was impatient on getting in the story. Lets start this RPing thingy ive heard people speak of.:hammer  

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« Reply #27 on: June 08, 2005, 09:45:22 AM »

Yeah yeah I'm ON IT


Contact me: faye_004@yahoo.ca or all us admins: rpg@santharia.com

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« Reply #28 on: June 08, 2005, 12:39:22 PM »

Morc, sorry, but after much discussion we've decided that your charcter doesn't fit into the current cast of chacters for either of the groups. Your roleplaying skill is great, but your character doesn't seem to fit with the current casts.

However, we will keep you on our "list" and if we get two more prospects for ONNYA we will give you a ring so that the three of you can start a side plot.

So, continue keeping up with the story!

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« Reply #29 on: June 08, 2005, 01:37:22 PM »

Thank you for the consideration. I am greatly disappointed, but still, if there is hope, patient, I will be...:)  

Edited by: Morcaanan at: 6/8/05 5:39
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