Santharian Development

Organization and General Discussions => Newbie Information, Joining Requests and Recruitment => Topic started by: irate velociraptor on 30 September 2005, 16:29:00



Title: Am I doing this plant entry right?
Post by: irate velociraptor on 30 September 2005, 16:29:00
This is my first entry in this board p223.ezboard.com/fsanthar...=184.topic
Am I doing this right? Please comment on my entery.



Title: Re: Am I doing this plant entry right?
Post by: Lucius Helvil on 30 September 2005, 16:56:00
It is a good outline. But first make sure to introduce your self to the rest of us here. Tell us about your self. Take a look at other entries already on the site, to get an idea of what to write. But welcome to the Dream.

Edited by: Lucius Helvil at: 9/30/05 0:56


Title: Re: Am I doing this plant entry right?
Post by: Erian Melor on 01 October 2005, 06:53:00
Welcome to the Dream. I would suggest choosing another name, one that fits in with the atmosphere of Santharia. Also, are you logged in? I ask because the board is showing you as a visitor, and you won't be able to edit your posts unless you log in.

As far as your entry is concerned, it is a good start, but it lacks details. Every section should at least be a paragraph, whenever possible.  


The sun falls from the evening sky,
this life I cannot abide.
The eternal night draws nigh,
I seek the loving embrace of my lost bride.



Title: Re: Am I doing this plant entry right?
Post by: dala styras on 05 October 2005, 19:00:00
I've chnaged the name I post from irate velociraptor and I've done som more on my plant entry please comment.
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