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Title: The Zirghurim Clan
Post by: Bard Judith on 13 April 2006, 22:30:00
Overview

The Zirghurim Dwarves, “of the Bright Heights Clan”, are also known as the Clan of Unghur, after that famous dwarven Archmage.  Residing in the Zirkumire Mountains of Ximax, they are mainly renowned for having been the primary builders of the magical city of Ximax, and for their famously-spectacular ‘lava cities’, epitomized by the great volcanic cavern of Hlahujit.   They are also one of the most accepting, open, and eclectic of the dwarven clans: friends of the Volkek-Oshra orcs, worshippers of the Twelve, and appreciative of Injera’s blessings as few Thergerim would be.

Appearance:

The Zirghurim are a ruddy race who do not have the pale skin of their deeper brethren.  The ripe-peach complexion is strongly flushed on the typical full cheeks and large nose.  This rich flushing is also evident on the palms of the hands and, less noticeably but equally vivid, on the heels of the feet.  Despite the ‘overheated’ appearance this often gives them, the Clan of Unghur is far more heat and light-tolerant than the average dwarf.  In fact, they are, as noted below, rather fond of indirect sunlight and will even refer cheerfully to ‘fresh air’ without sarcasm…

Their eyes are of various striking light colours:  leaf-green is common, bright blue also, and a mithril-grey. Golden is more rare, as is an odd yrom-blossom hue, a grey with a hint of purple in it. Brown, black, and other dark colours are almost never seen among the Zirghurim; however, a  rich 'burnt-sugar' colour has been noted, as has an unusual reddish-tan 'cinnabark' hue.

Hair is often light or bright as well, and quite straight but with a lot of natural body. Both head and beard hair may be bleached or dyed if they do not match each other, or simply for cosmetic reasons. Males braid, tie back sections, use stiffening clays and creams, and even trim individual locks to create very idiosyncratic, almost sculptural effects in beard and head hair. She-dwarves will do the same, and take it one step further by rolling and fastening their locks to dainty metal frames resembling coronets, which are totally covered and hidden from view when the hairdressing is complete. Remarkable effects can be achieved with a combination of hair stiffeners, near-invisible fasteners, pins and ties, and these supportive frames. We quote from a contemporary description of a Ximaxian “Four Races Ball”:

“Though the elven maidens could not but bear away the crowns of beauty, still the beautiful coiffures of the dwarf lasses did not fail to attract their share of attention. Not only the shining colours, bright as the sparks of Thergerim forges or glossy as molten metal, but also the magical shapes and designs into which their hair was formed… While our human ladies had to content themselves with albeit-complex braids and weaves and buns that primarily rested upon their heads in two dimensions, their dwarven counterparts boasted leaping curls, towering frameworks, springing fantasies of hair that seemed impossibly to defy the pressure of Wind, or indeed of any weight of itself… some were fountains studded with miniature gemstones…. some rivers of golden locks wrapped with aurium wires… one silvery birdcage shaped seemingly only of sparkling tresses held a tiny live songbird! One could only stare in delight at the vying motifs, as architecturally marvellous as any work in stone which the male Zirghurim could have constructed…”

A side note on feminine beards: Zirghurim females, like other liberal tribes who have a lot of contact with extra-dwarven races, depilate their facial hair, and in fact were among the first historically to do so, according to their records. However, a few independent-minded Yehurrarons (unwed females, dwarfmaidens) have recently begun a protest against depilation, arguing that their beard hair is both ‘natural’ and a long-standing tradition of the Thergerim, and that it is their privilege to decide whether or not they wish to groom without being influenced by ‘abovegrounder’ attitudes and human culture.

Dwarf males have an inverted triangular build. The typical wide shoulders and heavy arms of the dwarven race are set above a barrel chest. The waist narrows to sturdy but not widely-spaced hips, with only a hint of the ‘traditional’ dwarven belly.  They have solid muscular thighs, shorter than the thick calves and broad, splayed feet. Beard and headhair should blend one into the other, and colours must match as closely as to make the blend nigh invisible. The hairs are also sculpted, pomaded, and cut in such a way as to create a homogenous, bulky mass over the male dwarf’s head – the more elaborate and massy the better!

Dwarven women are built along the same general lines, save that the body is far more curvaceous, and the overall shape resembles that of a gnomish minuteglass. The hips are generous, thighs are heavy but the calves much slimmer, and the feet positively delicate in comparison to those of the males. Similarly, their shoulders are broad but not as muscular, and their forearms and wrists, while still competing with most human males for strength, seem quite slim in proportion. Head hair is grown and worn as long as possible while the female is wed (it must be worn in a simple pulled-back style before marriage, and she cuts it almost to her scalp if her husband predeceases her.)

Oremark / Forgemarks:

Though dwarves do not have coats of arms as the human races do, they are equally proud of the quality and unique craftsmanship which their oremarks represent. Usually these simple symbols are stamped, carved, embossed, or stencilled on various products that emerge from the Thergerim caves, such as weaponry, forged articles, oresacks, and so on. However, the Zirghurim uniquely among Sarvonian dwarves produce very little in this line, preferring to concentrate their skills on spellwork, communication techniques, alchemical research, and architectural design.

Appropriately enough, since many common folk associate the bat with sorcery, the striking 'oremark' of the Zirghurim is an open-winged black Morjual (common cavern bat) against a inverted fire-orange triangle with splayed concave sides.  This has been adapted in stamp, brand, and seal format to mark various wares coming from the craftdwarves and mages of the Ximaxian peninsula.


Territory

The Zirkumire Mountains cover the peninsula of Cha'dómm in Xaramon, with the Magic Sickle Range along the south and east side, the Wanderer Mountains along the north side, the Westrons along the west side and the Anghorth Alsae Mountains extending northward along the Cyon Sola Bay. 

‘Zirkumire Mountains’ in the dwarven tongue are translated as “Y’zekormor”, Bright Heights of Sky - from Yse(sky)Ze(of)Ko(opposing, not)Mor (mine, darkness). The original name, however, was “K’zir’ki’mir” - taken from a now-dead language, and literally meant “one should go around” – also apparently a reference to their imposing loftiness and sharp peaks!

The most spectacular peak of the Zirkumires, in the Magic Sickle Range to the south, is the “Face of Khaelvan”, which the Zekormorim call “BarolRotrum” (Father Rock / Lord Mountain). However, equally famous though not as outwardly imposing is the volcanic Hlahujit (Flame-wombed) in the northern range of the Wanderers, which holds the dramatic “Hosting Cavern” of the Zirghurim (see below).


People:

The Clan of Unghur is much more open and friendly to strangers than the majority of dwarves, without the mistrust and rigid secrecy of many clans (although in all fairness the longlived and lawabiding Thergerim have had reason to keep themselves apart from the toils and upheavals of human history and culture…)  The locations and entrances of their caverns, rather than being jealously guarded as a racial secret, are known – actually, promoted!  Indeed, their openness towards sentient beings of other cultures, races, and beliefs might well be emulated by all such sentients who desire to attain enlightenment and harmony among their own kind and elsewhere… but we digress.  They are likewise religiously diverse and tolerant – perhaps the only such dwarven clan in all of Caelereth. See Holidays and Religious Observances, below.

Again we must use comparisons to make it clear how far the Zirghurim differ from the average Thergerim as we have come to know them on Sarvonia.  They are not only less exophobic, and less claustrophiliac than the average dwarf - most actually enjoy the blue of the sky, and find Injera’s heat ‘pleasant’. They claim that as they have the favour of the Firelord in the molten rock beneath, they have it in the fires of that above (the Zirghurim believe that Injera, rather than being the flat round mirror or polished shield that other dwarves say Trum-Barol forged and set in the sky, is actually a sphere of molten rock, similar to their lava bubbles. They do not explain how such a sphere could remain aloft, or rather, their explanations are incomprehensible and seem to have more to do with gnomish fantasy than with either fact or belief…)

This dwarven clan is renowned for producing stunningly effective and creative architects, able to design for both their own race’s preferences and for humans. They have worked with gnomes, halflings, orcs and elves on specific projects without major dissidence. Their designs can be found in major cities from one end of the Santharian kingdom to another, and some even without the kingdom.   See Great Achievements, below.

The dwarves of the peninsula have evolved a particularly close relationship with both the city of Ximax and the local clan of orcs known as the Volkek-Oshra.   Zirghurim and Volkek-Oshra worked closely together on the building of the city itself, from design to actual construction.  The great towers and walls were reared by joint dwarven and orcen labour under the supervision of dwarf architects and orc designers,  while the catacombs beneath the city were hewn out by dwarven picks to orcen specifications.  Volkek- and Zirghurmages in combination wove some of the most powerful spells into the wards of protection and the lifting incantations that were required during construction, and to this day the relations continue cordially in both trade and social interaction.  Wind spells were contributed by elven mages, and human spellmasters of Water also gave of their energies.  In fact, every race which was under treaty at the time was contacted to assist in this great project of binding and guarding the Orb.

Housing

Their caverns are far more shallowly-set than most, many with airshafts and lightwells, if not actual ‘windows’ to the surface. Humans find them some of the most tolerable dwarven environments, with expressions like ‘homely’, ‘comfortable’, ‘secure’ occurring often in their descriptions.  As is typical in dwarven craftsmanship, most furniture is built-in, or rather carved-out, so that bedledges, benches, and ‘Yr-tables’ are formed from the living rock.  However, the sheltered volcanic warmth of the Zirghurim caverns does not foster the lush moss growth that other dwarven clans enjoy, so they must substitute other products such as combed wool, taenish feathers, and even humble straw to form their necessary pallets and cushions which sit atop the stone.  Again, this results in a more familiar environment for humans and other races, despite the exoticism of living below ground and the ever-present danger of cracking one’s forehead. (Note: most of the ‘public’ areas have been expanded with a view to human comfort, but if one is invited into the sub-caves or home cavelets, one should be wary of the ceilings and lintels!)

* ‘Yr’, pronounced ‘year’,  is a transliteration of YR  (needs the Thergerim font here) in Thergerim runes, which forms the shape (in cross-section) of a typical dwarven table.  In the same way, literate Tharians might speak of ‘a T-table’ or ‘an X-chair’ to describe a particular form.

The six most famous caverns are BarolRotrum, Hlahujit, TheuAeph, Hoa Rusun, Rizkul Hund, and Kaeryetenyim.   Should you be fortunate enough to travel to the Ximaxian peninsula, and have the leisure and moneys to expend upon sightseeing, a visit to one or more will surely repay your expenditure.  And should you have the even better fortune to have made a dwarven friend and received a personal invitation, the full glories of these spectacular mountains and their attendant underground cities will be yours for the viewing – a time to treasure!

BarolRotrum (Face of Khaelvan) - The largest peak of the Xirkumire range, and always snowtopped. Formed by volcanic activity but long since declared extinct, the vast bubble in its center has been built up, excavated out, and generally turned into one of the most convoluted labyrinths one could imagine. Primarily a mages’ hall, with plenty of cavelets and storage tunnels for their ‘supporting staff’ and their families. There are spacious workrooms, physically and magically shielded – there are individual and communal dining quarters – there are cosy bedcavelets with their lavishly-lined niches cut directly into the stone walls – there are huge public mootplaces and small secret meeting-caves – and of course, hearths and fireplaces and (mostly decorative) forges everywhere.


Hlahujit (Fire-Wombed) - This is the site of the spectacular Meeting Hall which is ringed by a lake of lava. Though the clan residence cavelets are well-removed from any volcanic danger, there is always a chance that the frequently-grumbling Hlahujit may lose her temper and erupt – in which case the architectural genius of three generations of dwarves would be destroyed in her lava – but as she has been snoring for centuries without waking, the Zirghurim are rather complacent about it.

Here one walks through zig-zagging black obsidian tunnels, steadily downwards till calves complain and thighs rebel. Slowly one feels the increasing heat, the murmur of sound. And then, incredibly emerging into the great belly of the volcano herself… a sea of lava filling the vast circumference. Flanges of black rock circle the fiery lake, their ribs picked out by the glow which it emanates, going upwards into unimaginable height and vanishing into darkness, presumably at the filled-in apex of the volcano. Each flange is pierced through at the height of the pathway which runs round the outer edge, about fifty peds above the bubbling, molten rock.

Seven bridges are equally spaced around the lava sea; black against the incandescent oranges and yellows of the livid stuff, they arch steeply upward, spring towards a central plateau and merge. One’s face feels drying, cracking, in the searing heat that rises from beneath as one climbs up towards the plateau. Stepping onto the rock gives, magically, some surcease from the constant dull seething of noise, and from the sullen fires.

The flat top of the upthrust of rock has been hollowed slightly, so that the center is lower than the outside ring. Two ledges spiral down into that center, about two fores in height apart – thus forming a continuous line of bench-style seating, and a parallel footspace which serves as a path. The ledges halt abruptly before the very middle is reached, leaving a clear space about five peds square – enough for a single dwarf to stand and dominate, for a prisoner and two guards to occupy, for a small circle of justicekeepers to pace, for a Gornegron to consult in relative room with his Denirim. The length of the bench for the first two spirals from the centre, obviously the smallest in diameter, are carved with individual seats, recessed to hold massive black leather cushions. Here are the spots for the Trutharoon, the council that will assist and guide the Gornegron in his decisions.

Around the very outside of the plateau, equidistant from the base of each bridge, seven spikes of rock arch almost as many peds into the air above our heads. They flare out slightly at the top, and are scorched and streaked with black-stained runnels. At their apexes a constant fire leaps and hisses – a molten resentment of flame.  The Hlahujim say that the original builders 'tapped' a bubble of gasses which they then allowed to emerge through pipes and channels running to the very top of the rock spikes, and ignited so that the seven fires burn perpetually.

The entire Meeting Hall is a spectacular merge of natural power and dwarven-made architecture; from one of the many observation slots carved into the dome’s sides, it resembles a black iron crown tipped with garnets which itself rises on a black pedestal from a sea of shimmering orange silk.

TheuAeph (Our Flint) -  Near Horth, this Thergerim cave system is old and shallow. Its main entrance is a vast, natural shelf of flinty rock which juts from the gentler slopes of the Anghorth Alsae mountains, overlooking the ridged expanse of fields and vineyards below. Here the variety of grape known as the Tali Night Vine flourishes in the volcanic soil, described as “adult, defined…earthen tone, richly spiced”. TheuAeph holds its own vineyards and dwarven vintners, though the amount of alcohol they produce is small and is accurately described as ‘bitters’. A unique drink brewed with Tali grapes, herbal infusions, root extracts, and a secret ingredient which many suspect is extracted from fungi, the Aephian Bitters sell steadily to inns and taverns across Santharia. One bottle lasts for a goodly time, as it is considered a flavoring rather than a potable.

Hoa Rusun (the Coalbellied) - The name might suggest that Hoa Rusun controls coal deposits, but the translation of ‘Hoa’ is actually closer to ‘ember’. Rather, this small but tidy enclave holds sway over an extensive complex of tunnels dug through the slag and vitrified rock of past volcanic eruptions. The HoaRusim have worked with the natural curves, flows, and bubbles of rock to create some fantastically-shaped spaces with a very exotic feel. Mage-shaping has been used in conjunction with skilled masonry and dwarven stone-craft, so some of the tunnels and subcaverns which appear physically impossible probably are, at least to humans.

Hoa Rusun is noted for its seafood dishes and daring fisherdwarves (Thergerim who actually venture near, if not directly out upon, the water!)  The Hoa Rusan folk have developed a system of interlocking wharves and jetties which extend outwards from their coves at the tip of the Bay of the Sky, all supported upon deep-sunk pilings and bulwarks.  Strung between the far-flung ends of these piers are great nets, lines with hooks, hatchling pens, or tryster-seeding flats, depending upon the fisherdwarf’s preference.  The nets can be dragged from far out at sea back along the tracks set into the parallel wharves, and directly up over wide, grid-bottomed troughs into which the haul for the day can be tumbled, glinting and flapping.  Small fish slide through the grid along with the seawater and fall back into the bay, while the rest of the catch can be sorted safely from the stepped edge of the trough.  Note that the dwarves do not actually venture out upon the water, as, like all Thergerim, they become queasy if too far from the solace of solid ground beneath and above them!  However, there is also a small fleet of fishing boats crewed by ‘mercsailors’, hired seamen from other races, who go out daily for kraken and deepsea fish to serve Ximaxian appetites.

Rizkul Hund (Fire’s House) - an open caldera pitted with workshops, ‘storerooms’ and other individual stone buildings which rise tipsily from the floor of the shallow crater. One of the most accessible dwarven ‘caverns’ on Caelereth, and a major attraction for humans and other travelers, who are welcome to visit, watch, and even stay for a bed and meal – at a slight cost, of course.  The private Rizkulim dwelling cavelets are located off shafts sunk into the side of the caldera, their enjoyment of the surface notwithstanding: even this broad-minded clan cannot overcome their need for the security of stone completely around them when they take their bread or lie down to sleep.  Small inns and taverns catering to humans are set here and there on the walled plain, like all the other buildings hardly distinguishable from the rubble piles and stepped ancient lava flows.  Have we failed to mention that a dwarven guide, usually an adolescent or ‘shorr’,  must be assigned to every non-Thergerim visitor, and that the fee for their services must not be dispensed with lest one find oneself hopelessly lost in the rocky maze?

Kaeryetenyim (the Watcher) - Poised on the slopes of Mount Watcher (the Ximaxian humans borrowed the translation of the ThergerimTaal name), this beautiful and unique cavern overlooks the Bay of the Sky. It is as if the entire peak of the mountain has been hollowed out and then pierced through with windows, tunnels, lookouts, balconies, and other features – an impossible feat of engineering and a stunning landmark. The workspaces are all found here at the apex of the mountain, airy and well-lit, while the sleepingcaves are set safely deep below, accessed by liftshafts with brownie-designed liftboxes. By day from inside the peak, the mountain top seems to float with a few piers and pillars of living rock still supporting it above lines of udezeran-blue sky and turquoise water – all is light and air and cloudscapes drifting by. By night, observing the Watcher from afar, one sees an entire mountain top radiant as a lighthouse, bright with dwarven fires, magical illuminations, and individual lanterns and glowglobes.


Clothing:

As you might imagine, in the warm underground environs of many of the Zirghurim caverns clothing is more decorative than necessary for most of the year’s seasons.   In the colder months coats and cloaks must be donned to work aboveground (at Rizkul Hund and some places in Kaeryetenyim and TheuAeph) but at Hoa Rusun and Hlahujit the average temperatures range from as warm as a sunlit day to the heat of a charcoal-burner’s kiln clearing.  Obviously, the thick leathers and traditional rockwools of the other clans are not practical here, despite a skin tolerance level of a much wider range than human.

Smiths and forgewrights work in a light loincloth ( the traditional dwarven under-wear ‘Nupalzi’ - which wraps the buttocks as well as the genitals and loins), stout sandals, and an impervious leather apron over their chest and thighs to guard against burns.  Childtenders and cooks wear flimsy (by dwarven standards) wraps of light linen or mossweave, easily washed or even discarded when severely stained by the travails of their occupation.   For most others, a simple sleeveless tunic – scarcely more than a long rectangle with an oval neck-hole cut in it, left open along the sides and belted for comfort – over the Nupalzi is sufficient.

Nursing mothers or otherwise amply-breasted females usually add an ‘Ardoon’ or chest-wrap beneath the tunic.  And it is only here that we can verify the existence of the dwarven undergarment known as a ‘Rusdoon’ or bellywrap!  Obviously those great with child would seem to benefit from the support, but we may also see a stout dwarf, his magnificent beard nearly concealing his equally impressive belly, with the tell-tale lines of a Rusdoon beneath his tunic; his innate ‘Olnaas’ (dignity) and ‘EchHaed’ (honour) debarring even the insensitive human or light-hearted halfling from mirth at his expense.

Earth Toccon, made from the useful Silkstone (link to entry) is popular despite its expense.  Its lightweight, sturdy fibers make it ideal for hard usage in a warm climate, and the cost is no factor for those who labour at making it, nor for the Earth mage who wishes to robe himself in garments matching his Ximaxian peers of the other elements.

However simple the dress, though, it is invariably embroidered with striking geometric designs and the miniature patchwork technique unique to the Zirghurim.  Developed in the spacious halls and caverns of Kaeryetenyim and known as ‘Watchwork’ throughout the kingdom, this style of decoration consists of vividly dyed scraps of cloth which have been folded into sharp squares, triangles, or diamants, then sewn together with points loose and overlapping.  The result is both colourful and dramatic, resembling a type of exotic scaling.  When used as trim or border on even a plain-styled tunic, it brings sparkle and texture; when done in larger panels on the breast and back of more elaborate garments, it is spectacular.  Watchwork may be found everywhere in Ximax, from the hems of a dwarfbabe’s swaddling blanket, to the full sweep of an archmage’s robe, and it is one of the better-known exports (see below) of the Zirghurim.

Food

The dwarves of the Cha’domm peninsula enjoy a far more varied and exotic diet than their brothers on the rest of the continent, due both to their warmer environment and to their eclectic trade relationships.

Of course the favorite mushrooms, tubers (potatoes, carroots, turnips and blood-fists), rootweep and mezpuu are often on the table, along with the well-charred roasts and mixed grills that are popular with the dwarves.  Numbles and organ meats are used (horse-n-kidney pie, tuber-stuffed heart, 'Boudeen' or gut sausages, etc.) in thrifty fashion. As Ximax is a peninsula, all kinds of seafood and fish are available, much from the Bay of the Sky coast.  For the human visitor we can recommend the ‘Garlick Prawns with Wild Riz’, the ‘Trysters in Moorgul’, or the ‘Grilled Baby Kraken’ which Hoa Rusun often sets on its table!
 
Condiments are many but not particularly subtle, and are usually laid on with a heavy hand.  Fortunately for the visitors of other races, they are almost always served as sides so that the diner may season to taste.  Ummadon chutney, Moorgul oya-pea distillate, rocksalt and Kraggi sauce are the main flavours available.  Black peppercorns, herb-leaf powders, and spiced applesauce are also popular. The pickled vegetable medley, Ak-ak, in all its varieties (including HlabliAk made with spicy Kraggi sap and red Thugrum) is a side-dish which features often.

The moss-based bread Borwul is rarely eaten as its main ingredient, dried moss-flour, must be imported, so it is seen on the table mostly at festivals or for other sentimental occasions.  Golden Rain is traded for instead; the dwarven Foodtenders have taken to its lighter consistency and the Zirghurim breadbaskets contain a great many creative options.

This clan is probably the only one in Sarvonia which uses any dairy products.  “Milch and cheese are not a natural part of (the dwarven) diet, as they keep no large domestic animals. As a result, most dwarves dislike the smell of any dairy product, describing it as 'sour' and 'decayed'...” (from Dwarven Food, Manners and Tableware – a Compendium Folio by Judith of Bardavos)  However, by long association with humans and orcs the clan has come to incorporate milch and cream into their cooking and even tolerate some of the milder cheeses, such as Cottcheese with its thick white curds or Hava Cream (a spreadable fresh cheese with a gently nutty scent).

Dwarven ale from the Mithrals, local cider, mineral waters, and Horth-made Chéniar wine are the most common drinks.  And despite their reputed love for alcoholic beverages, dwarves are surprisingly temperate, rarely affected by amounts of liquor that would have a human toper reeling or under the table.  This may have something to do with their more massy bodies, as scholars have often observed that the heavier man holds his ale better than the lightweight – or it may simply be a function of their race which we do not understand.  At any rate, if asked for his favorite beverage a dwarf of any clan will always claim his home cavern’s water, with its strong unique taste, to be the sweetest and most refreshing of any drink...

Government

As in all dwarven clans, they are led by a Gornegron clan chieftain and his or her council, the Trutharoon.  Among the Zirghurim the Trutharoon is made up of what we would call Guild Leaders – masters of their trade or craft, chosen by their peers in the craft.  The Trutharoon meets regularly and deliberates amongst themselves to make decisions for the good of the clan.  Individuals with concerns, ideas, or disputes may arrange with the Gorkavon (second-in-command) to come before the Trutharoon’s moot and present their case.  See the Mitharim clan entry for further details on how dwarves govern themselves.


Occupations:

The Zirghurim, uniquely among Sarvonian dwarves, prefer to concentrate their skills on spellwork, communication techniques, alchemical research, and architectural design, rather than mining and forgework.  They do keep to the traditional gender-based division of labour, though there is no distinction between 'higher status' and 'lower status' work - tending dwarven children is as prestigious as performing ambassadorial service, and skilled Foodtenders are honoured as highly as any inventor or mage.

Their seamstresses are known for their Watchwork, and there are a great deal of tinkerers among them who come up with either technical or magical improvements for common household needs (the spell to keep milk fresh longer was a Zirghurim design, for example).  They breed more than their fair share of Earth Mages, not surprisingly, and of course their architects are always in demand.


Tools, Weapons, and Utensils:

The utensils common to most humans are also used here: the two or three-tined fork, the belt knife and eating knife, the cooking ladles and pots and cauldrons, and so on.  A dwarven kitchen, ranged in a circular pattern around its huge round hearth, is a fully-stocked marvel of brass, copper, tin, and other metallic surfaces, catching and sparking back the flames from every direction.   (In fact, we must digress here to mention that most human nobles aspire to at least the first part of the ideal household as supposedly laid out by Gebl the Brownie so long ago:  “A hobbit cook in a dwarven kitchen, a gnomish sutler, human groom / an elven chatelaine for your hallway, but give me a brownielass in the bedroom!”)

The classic orehammers, warhammers, picks and shovels which are so characteristic of most dwarven clans will not be in evidence here.  In fact, there are few tools of the usual sort among the Zirghurim, except for the families at Rizkul Hund, the craftsmen of the clan.  They tend to be artists, jewelers, architects and alchemists, so they have small and specialized tools of the trade. 

 The RizkulZirg claim to have invented the ‘square and triangle’ system of draftsmanship, a way to sketch architectural designs neatly and realistically, and there seems to be good evidence in their historical records that this is indeed the case.  These tools are formed of slim plates of polished brass combined with rare hardwoods.  The main one is shaped like the ?? rune - coincidentally also the ‘L’ shape which represents that sound in the Tharian tongue – and called ‘The Lrian’.  It is laid along the edge of a squared-off drafting board and used to represent the horizontal.  The coordinating tools are all various triangles, some right-angled and some in other preset shapes, jointly known as “Berdruwi” (“Three-drafters”).   They can be used in combination from the horizontal line of the Lrian to create various lines of perspective and extrapolation, making quite realistic and sharp drawings.   

As to weapons, the Zirghurim are not by nature one of the more warlike clans, and tend to rely upon magical means of defence when necessary.  However, ‘a dwarf without a hammer is not a dwarf’, as they say, and they are very fond of hammer-like representations, whether as huge T-shaped pendant necklaces, tiny belt hammers used mostly for cracking nutshells, or staves topped with stylized hammer heads.  It has been noted that technically all of these could be used for personal defence as well; the necklaces would make rather dangerous flails, for example…

Production/Trade

The various caverns have their own specialties; in general they are less self-sufficient than clans elsewhere on the continent and have far more trade relationships.

Embroidery and Watchwork designs (intricate geometric patches, sewn decoratively) are exported.  Fish are exported.  Spells, enchantments, magical items, and mages are a main product of Ximax, and the Zirghurim control almost forty percent of such exports. They are also competent alchemists, if not on the scale or level of the gnomish experts, and produce a variety of pigments, bright dyes, and glues.  For example, their ‘Master Flint’s Carpentry Glue’ is sold exclusively out of Horth across the Santharian kingdom, and as a number of shipwrights have discovered the stuff recently we may expect their trade environs to expand…

 Their Singspeakers have apparently made great strides in batspeak and have improved Morjual memory through breeding, but the resulting beasts are only traded internally (that is, within the dwarven clans) and are not available to other races.  However, Zirghurmages are working with the batmasters and with Brownie engineers to develop a type of long-distance communication process not based on animals but on vibrating membranes.  As this process could have great significance to Compendium researchers and scholars, we await further developments with interest.

Silk Stone is harvested from the Zirkumire mountains and the cloth made from it is highly popular with Ximaxian Earth mages, both as garment fabric and a reagent for spells.

The clan trades with Horth for the delicate white Chéniar wine, which they drink as liberally as water, washing down the various spicy delicacies that grace the Zirghurim tables.

Foodstuffs such as wheat, mutton, riz, and apples are imported to the peninsula as a whole.  There are good relations with the local Volrek-Oshra orcs and with the major coastal cities.  Kor Donion, Milkengrad, and Thylsan all have well-developed trade links, and ships out of Voldar may be seen in the Cyon Sola Bay ports frequently.    Wood is not as common in this volcanic area, so lumber from more forested regions is an import, as is well-crafted furniture.

Natural Resources:

The peninsula is rich in a variety of flora, though the periodic volcanic activity has not encouraged long-growth forests.   There are many stands of young pine and spruce, but far more common are the softwood trees such as the malus, urban tree, and wolf willow. Low, spreading juniper lends its spicy scent to many hillsides.   Eur'oak has been transplanted but so far is uncommon.   Heavy scrub and many bushes cover the mountain flanks, along with alpine grasses, prairie grasses, various wildflowers, some mosses and lichens.  The miyuestiac bush, the sulcho mushroom, wild grape, wild hops, and dochnut all do well here.  Small plants like the fragrans, the candlebush and rosemint, or the arv and hanging horn can be found throughout the peninsula.

The fauna is somewhat more exotic: as the entry on Ximax claims, there are “rumors of dark beasts of magic roaming freely and areas of wild corrupted magic throughout them”.  We can report spottings of the lovely Milari Cat and the grotesque Giant Spider, at the very least...

More ordinary beasts such as the bushy-tailed Sarni, the striped Mimsy, and the silvery fox known as the Raoshir inhabit the forested ravines, while the feline Herin and wild boar prefer the higher flanks of the hills.  The Corbie crow and its larger brother, the Hravn, nest in the young pines.   Rubits and other lizards may be found along the coast where volcanic activity warms the climate.  Rodents are frequent, both the common rats and vilerats, and hedgemice. Some wild mustangs, probably Centoraurian culls or escapees, roam the foothills, enjoying the rich prairie grasses.  And finally, there are plenty of fish and sea creatures along the coasts and in the Bay of the Sea.

In terms of mineral resources, besides Silkstone deposits, there are some silver veins and some copper.  Diamonds may be found in old volcanic vents, but on the whole the area is not one of Sarvonia's richer mining regions - perhaps the reason the Zirghurim are so little interested in the typical dwarven occupation!

Overall, the province's main resources are Wizardleaf, Golden Rain grain, and grapes, all of which flourish in the climate and on the tufa soil.

Holidays, Festivals and Religious Observances:

Whether because of their long familiarity with magic-users of all stripes, their long feud with the demon-worshipping True Vision cult, their tolerance for the surface and ‘above-ground culture’, or simply their liberal, open-minded nature, the Zirghurim are one of the very few dwarven clans known to even tolerate the concept of multiple deities – or indeed any deity beyond their Forgelord, Trum-Barol (similar to our Urtengor, which see…) A good third of the Zirghurim follow the way of the Twelve, choosing a favorite or appealing aspect in a god or goddess, and worshipping him or her with a shrine, prayers, and other acts of devotion just as the humans of Santharia do.

A few follow the Brownie belief in nature spirits, a very few in the One (a Brownie minority belief), while perhaps one in a hundred holds to the ‘Love of Ava’ – an elven belief about which humans have little information. There are even those who have faith in the northern mother goddess Lier’tyan, and who celebrate her rites as best they are able. Though all - dwarves deep to the stone of their bones, as they say -  still hold to their faith in Trum-Barol, or Urtengor as some choose to call him in untroubled ecumenicalism, one will find a great deal of diversity of faith among the Zirghurim, and of peaceful acceptance of that diversity.

The only difficulty this causes is in the multiplicity of celebratory days and observances which must all be incorporated into the dwarven work routine. Generally the looser structure of a Zirghurim day, which does not require time at the pitface and communal meal attendance, allows for this naturally, and as long as the work is done and the gods are pleased, the clan is content.

Some Specific Zirghurim Festive Days:

- Zouum Ze Kertrumerons- ‘Feast of Towers’ – yearly commemoration of the completion of the famed towers of Old Ximax.  Oversized ‘follies’ and ‘subtleties’ of Borwul bread are built as table centerpieces, then consumed with a marvellous variety of spreads, dips, sauces, and condiments.  Roast piglets are usually served, and medlar-apple-butter in tubs is a necessary accompaniment…not to mention the barrels of ale!

- Ind Kanupeh -  ‘Seaspans Day’ – mostly observed by Hoa Rusun but becoming more popular in other caverns - a monthly day on which nothing but sea products are consumed: fish, oysters and trysters, seaweed bread, prawns, kraken, etc. as a way of proclaiming dwarven ‘conquest’ of a feared element.

- Indze Denuprakulahan (Inden for short) ‘Day of Rest and Worship’:  Actually a recent decision by the various Gornegrons and Trutharoons of the peninsula in an attempt to ‘standardize’ the many holy days observed by their ecumenical Thergerim.   The devout but practical dwarves argue that as long as one’s particular god is paid regular and sincere attention, it doesn’t much matter to Him/Her upon which day it occurs.  The first day of the human week, Restday/Prayday in the Cournian calendar, was chosen both as a nod to inter-racial relations and a pragmatic way of synchronizing work projects.  Of course Lithden, the last day of the dwarven week, remains a day free from regular labour, so that Zirghurim actually have two days in a row on which work is voluntary or home-based… and special feasts and celebrations are not included in this decree, probably yet another reason for its relative ease of acceptance!   Surprisingly enough, productivity does not seem to have been affected….

Important Achievements:
   
Construction of Ximax, which needs little detailing here.  If you require more information, see the scrolls on Ximax history and on Dwarven Archmage Ungur Firehands (properly, Unghur Thuugolzerons, in the dwarven tongue), who was responsible for its overseeing.

The Inner City. The Inner City is often referred to as "Old Ximax", as the vast majority of the buildings here date to the first millennium of the School (also referred to as the Ximaxian Academy). This portion of the city is more ornate, ancient, and more laden with the dust of the ages. The architecture here, in sharp contrast to the Outer City, is mostly similar, lending itself to the monolithic, big, and fortresslike, as the original master architect of the city, Ungur Firehands, was more concerned with the defensibility of the fledgling Magical Academy than aesthetic pursuits.

Staff of Earth
We quote from the Archmage Xarl Bluestride :  “The masterwork of the dwarven Archmage Ungur Firehands, the Staff of Earth was forged in the fires in the heart of BarolRotrum. It was made from pure Mithril, shaped into a scintillating rod of power. Then Ungur, in all his power, turned the lava that had heated the staff's core into a multicolored weave of stone cloth, and placed it over the Staff's heart. Thus, the Staff fits its wielders perfectly, rough and coarse on the outside, shining with amazing power within. The Staff controls the very earth around it, and also can twist physical strength to its owner's whims. It is considered one of the lesser staffs, but you would find few in the history of Ximax willing to challenge the Archmagi who have controlled the Brown Staff….”

The Tower of the Guard
This tower is the only entry into the School. It also contains the Great Library of Ximax, repository of all the knowledge the magi have accumulated (and are willing to disclose). This tower is the only "classic" tower, with the battlements and structure made so famous by the dwarven Archmage Ungur Firehands.

History

2015 b.S.
- 2009 b.S. Construction of the Eleven Wards - “The Circle of Magic, the Orcish Society of Enlightenment, and a small clan of dwarven exiles work on constructing the Eleven Wards and the rudiments of a settlement. Over a much longer span of time, the Inner City begins to evolve.”

(Note: ‘exiles’ is a poor translation of “Kavoninn Yabarrah”, which should literally be “Travelling Bachelor – a title given to an unwed male dwarf who leaves his cavern to sublimate unmet sexual energy in his craftsmanship, sending most of his profits back to his clan)

Age of Awakening (1655 b.S.-822 b.S.)
ca. 1650 b.S. The Dragonstorm
Unlike many northern cities, Ximax and its people simply hide from the dragons (or the dragons shunned this high concentration of magic on purpose). They are immensely grateful for the aid of the Volkek-Oshra and dwarven Clan of Unghur, who aid them in the construction of a set of catacombs beneath the city. Afterwards, the catacombs are filled in to avoid any future problems.

Age of the Blood (822 b.S.-50 b.S.)

737-733 b.S. The Siege of Ximax
Ximax is laid siege by dark elven forces, who are aided by the betrayal of the Archmage of Ecuá, Moh'nul, who takes the Black and High Staffs to the sieging forces. After four years of the siege, the Ximaxian forces daringly force the dark elves back to the floodplains. They plan on retreating and leaving the dark elves to be crushed by the coming floodwaters. Sadly, Moh'nul thought of the strategy first, and the first notes of retreat have barely sounded from Ximaxian trumpets when the floodwaters flowed in, crushing the Ximaxian army. Without the aid of its best magi, Ximax soon falls to the dark elven forces, who set fire to the great city.

733-621 b.S. Decay of Ximax
Ximax, abandoned by all but the Volkek-Oshra, rots. The Orb of Ximax slowly begins to break free of most of its magical bonds.


621 b.S. Reopening of the Magical Academy
The human mage Xarl Bluestride, his student Khaelvan I, the Volkek-Oshra elder Narmatuk, and the descendants of the dwarven clan Unghur officially reopen the Magical Academy after a century of ruin. Also born at this time is the future stance of Ximax towards wars; total neutrality. Too much knowledge and life was lost in the Fall of 733 to risk such a thing happening again.

622: The Refounding continues; of note is the major ceremony where six of the seven remaining Staffs are once more claimed by the de facto Archmagi; Xarl claims the title of Xeuá, Khaelvan Wind, Narmatuk Fire, the elder of the Diamond Lake village, Jerim, claims Water, Nyur Farsight, who had been living in an isolated hut near the aforementioned village, claims the staff of his forebear; the Staff of Mind. The leader of the dwarves, Dhelmak Firehands, claims Earth... and the Staff of Ximax, the gift of the elven denomination to the Refounding, is left unclaimed at Xarl's insistance.

628: The Oshra elder Narmatuk attempts to convince Xarl that his (now admitted) cause, that of rebuilding the city, is hopeless.

619 b.S  Kaluron Hunolmettoth (“Booksdaughter”), a dwarven Earth mage from Ximax,  intervenes in a clash between forces of Centoraurian and Caltherians that have come to buy horses.  She sets up a treaty making Horth a free city where any may come to purchase horses.

610 b.S. Dhelmak Firehands, descendant of Ungur / Unghur, becomes the Gornegron (chieftain, leader) of the Zirghurim Dwarves.

ca. 550 b.S. Division of the City
The city overflows its walls, and the division between Inner and Outer city begins.

ca. 549-501 b.S. The Second Sarvonian War

The Magical Academy remains neutral throughout the Second Sarvonian War. While wizards of both sides come to Ximax to relearn war-spells, very little violence ever occurs within city walls.

542 b.S.   The Naval Battle for Parda
Elves, coming from their hidden hideout at the Vontron Forest, secure the crossing at the Land of the Withdrawing Waves. They attack Ximax to keep the magi occupied so their ships can cross unopposed.

482 b.S. Forming of the Tharanian Kingdom

Ximax's Centoraurian population joins the newly-formed kingdom of Tharania, expecting to quickly gain advantage over the rest of the tribes thanks to Ximax's relatively unspoiled state. Sadly for the city, under Thar's rule reconstruction is quick, and it is not long before Ximax is once more only foremost in knowledge.  Catacombs are redug, some orcen mages make their homes there again.

225-218 b.S. The Lengthening of the Shadow
Ximaxian historians note that there were more of the foul omens of the Mélor'Terquán in the Magic City than any other specific place.

217 b.S. The Lengthening of the Shadow
Ximax abandons neutrality and is forced to battle for its very existence, as ten of the Archmagi die of magical exhaustion battling the sudden explosion of magical power from the Orb of Ximax. The last, Quagoth Tunta, is thought dead, but is later found after the battle of Osthemangar.

60 b.S. The Fight against the Móch'rónn
The greatest warriors of Ximax are sent to Hegedorn to try to defeat the Móch'rónn. Three, one Magus and two Archmagi, survive the devastating counterattack of the Demon Lord Khalkoroth.

1560 - 1574 The War against the True Vision Cult
Zirghurim mages assist a human spellweaver, Zeck Giffir, to create a deadly plague and to infiltrate the demon-worshipping True Vision Cult with it.

1603 – Stonemasons and architects from the Zirghurim assist in finishing various public buildings in Strata, most notably the Temple and the Harbour.



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With thanks to Marvin, Erian, Coren, Mina, Talia, Smee, Thuja, Drasil, and Art, for their many helpful comments and suggestions!


Title: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Bard Judith on 13 April 2006, 22:39:00
A Note on Watchwork

The concept for the dwarven patchwork was inspired by the patchwork done by the Lisu, a hill tribe in Northern Thailand, with whom I was privileged to visit for a short time some years ago.  I own several marvelously intricate and detailed pieces by them, and can only wish that I had bought more at the time.   Giving my Zirghurim the  craft allows me to honour it and keep its vision alive in my head.  An illustration of my own will probably follow, but for now: two life-size graphics which illustrate this marvelous style of patchwork:


Edited by: Bard Judith  at: 4/13/06 6:57


Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 14 April 2006, 06:33:00
I started reading the entry again (I had read the previous version a few months ago I think), and I must say this work never stops to astonish me Judith! I am not feeling too well today, so it will probably take about a week to plow through the whole text and assemble a commentary - but I am very sure it will be worth the effort!

OH BEFORE I FORGET! Whenever I read this, Schubert's Wanderer Fantasy goes through my head! That piece for some reason just perfectly depicts the Zirghurim for me. I think you will understand why when you hear it...

If you have a chance to listen to the piece I would recommend the one (Sviatoslav) Richter is playing. I know Emi Classics has a record under their "Great Recordings of the Century".

In case you need to search for the music: Franz SCHUBERT; Fantasy, D.760 'Wanderer'



Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Bard Judith on 14 April 2006, 09:36:00
A midi of 'Wanderer' may be found here - click to listen!

Edited by: Artimidor Federkiel at: 4/13/06 19:58


Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 14 April 2006, 09:58:00
Midis usually don't do justice to the music - especially piano pieces... The midi doesn't play for me btw, page error.

EDIT: I tried searching for it on Schubert's midi page, but can't see Wanderer there... Hmm... I wonder what that says about my eyes...

Edited by: Coren FrozenZephyr at: 4/13/06 18:20


Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 14 April 2006, 12:02:00
It tells me that you're blind, Coren - no wonder when I look at your character portrait... :lol

Anway, found it and fixed the link:)  - Should be a direct link, so save to hard drive immediately, otherwise the site won't let you download it again that easy.


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Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 14 April 2006, 12:44:00
No no no no; that's not the Wanderer Fantasy :(  



PS: And for the record, I'm only resting my eyes there...

Edited by: Coren FrozenZephyr at: 4/13/06 20:47


Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Bard Judith on 14 April 2006, 18:19:00
:b lush  I wonder what I did wrong?  I've been inserting links, images, etc. for a while now. You'd think I could get it right... thanks for the fix, Artimidor.

But I can't be held responsible if it's the wrong MUSIC,  as I've never heard the piece before.  Sigh.... And I was so happy to finally find a midi labeled 'wanderer' on one of the many Schubert midi pages... :(  

Edit:   Wait, what is this?  Did you actually fix the link and change it to the right midi as well, dear Sage?  Cos it doesn't sound like the tune I heard before I went off to work.... :veryconfused  

Eh, Coren, is this the 'Wanderer' tune now?   I like it better, I must say...

Edited by: Bard Judith  at: 4/14/06 2:23


Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 15 April 2006, 04:03:00
No, sorry... (I was already referring to Art's link) Hmm... I'll come up with a way...



Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 15 April 2006, 14:10:00
*gasps*

This is pretty long! No I know, what you have done in the last weeks!
No time to read it immediately.... I just hope, that the next char on the dev-board will be one of these dwarves! :lol  

***Astropic of the day***
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Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 19 April 2006, 13:05:00
Just wanted to let Judy know that I am still burrowing through the entry (what an appropriate verb for a dwarf-entry!) at my snailpace. I hope to do a uri-check on this one btw. Will take quite some time to finish the whole thing so maybe I'll just do the commenting in sections, would that be okay?



Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Mina on 19 April 2006, 14:39:00
Gah, why did it take me so long to notice this entry?  Maybe I should visit this forum more...

Well, it looks great for now.  If you intend to have it integrated as soon as possible though, I'd request that the Important Achievements and History sections to be left out for now.  Quite a bit of stuff there will take some time to be decided.  Don't have time to comment in detail, but here's a couple of things I noticed.  You might want to get Silfer and Rayne here too, BTW.  I'm not sure they've noticed this yet.  

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Volkek- and Zirghurmages in combination wove some of the most powerful spells into the wards of protection and the lifting incantations that were required during construction

Well, defensive spells will most likely involve more than Fire and Earth magic (which I assume are what most Volkek-oshra and Zirghurim practice), and lifting (as in the telekinetic stuff) is definitely a Wind thing, an unlikely element for these tribes, I think.  

Use of magic on the peninsula itself before Ximax's founding might not be safe, I think.  Perhaps they originally resided in the Anghorth Alsae mountains and only expanded into the peninsula itself after Ximax was founded and the Orb's effects contained?  I see that you've already mentioned that TheuAeph is relatively old, so perhaps it'd not be too great a change.  They'd still have about 3 thousand years to create all the other stuff anyway.  

Also, any chance they might have been involved in the construction of New-Santhala?  Sounds like another suitably important project for them.  




Title: Re: Watchwork - Credit where it is due
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 24 April 2006, 00:49:00
Okies! I've now finished uri-checking until Natural Resources on paper. I'll be posting the commentary/critiques in several sections.

Overview - Appearance - Oremark - Territory for today:


Comments directly related to the entry
Side-dishes - erhm, that is side-comments (asides? :P)

The Zirghurim Dwarves


Overview
The Zirghurim Dwarves, “of the Bright Heights Clan”, are also known as the Clan of Unghur, after that famous dwarven Archmage. Residing in the Zirkumire Mountains of Ximax, they are mainly renowned for having been the primary builders of the magical city of Ximax, and for their famously-spectacular ‘lava cities’, epitomized by the great volcanic cavern of Hlahujit. They are also one of the most accepting, open, and eclectic of the dwarven clans: friends of the Volkek-Oshra orcs, worshippers of the Twelve, and appreciative of Injera’s blessings as few Thergerim would be.

Once again an overview just as it should be!

Appearance:
The Zirghurim are a ruddy race (I know what you mean, but in Caelereth can we use race in this Terran concept as well?) who do not have the pale skin of their deeper brethren. The ripe-peach complexion is strongly flushed on the typical full cheeks and large nose. This rich flushing is also evident on the palms of the hands and, less noticeably (noticeable?) but equally vivid, on the heels of the feet. Despite the ‘overheated’ appearance :lol   this often gives them, the Clan of Unghur is far more heat and light-tolerant than the average dwarf. In fact, they are, as noted below, rather fond of indirect sunlight and will even refer cheerfully to ‘fresh air’ without sarcasm… Lovely paragraph!

Their eyes are of various striking light colours: leaf-green is common, bright blue also, and a mithril-grey. Golden is more rare, as is an odd yrom-blossom hue, a grey with a hint of purple in it (how about also reddish orange and caramel?). Brown, black, and other dark colours are almost never seen among the Zirghurim.

Hair is often light or bright as well, and quite straight but with a lot of natural body. Both head and beard hair may be bleached or dyed if they do not match each other, or simply for cosmetic reasons. Males braid, tie back sections, use stiffening clays and creams, and even trim individual locks to create very idiosyncratic, almost sculptural effects in beard and head hair. ! And next time you post something about the Krean being, hmm what was it exactly, “'more effete'.... 'vainer'... 'heads-in-the-clouds dreamers'...'indolent folk who overuse the power of magic for petty purposes'… She-dwarves will do the same, and take it one step further by rolling and fastening their locks to dainty metal frames resembling coronets, which are totally covered and hidden from view when the hairdressing is complete. Remarkable effects can be achieved with a combination of hair stiffeners, near-invisible fasteners, pins and ties, and these supportive frames. We quote from a contemporary description of a Ximaxian “Four Races Ball”:
Heh, the Krean would have hired them as hairdressers!

“Though the elven maidens could not but bear away the crowns of beauty, still the beautiful coiffures of the dwarf lasses did not fail to attract their share of attention. Not only the shining colours, bright as the sparks of Thergerim forges or glossy as molten metal, but also the magical shapes and designs into which their hair was formed… While our human ladies had to content themselves with albeit-complex braids and weaves and buns that primarily rested upon their heads in two dimensions, their dwarven counterparts boasted leaping curls, towering frameworks, springing fantasies of hair that seemed impossibly to defy the pressure of Wind, or indeed of any weight of itself… some were fountains studded with miniature gemstones…. some rivers of golden locks wrapped with aurium wires… one silvery birdcage shaped seemingly only of sparkling tresses held a tiny live songbird! Ha ha! One could only stare in delight at the vying motifs, as architecturally marvelous as any work in stone which the male Zirghurim could have constructed…” I remember this part! Found it just as much amusing this time as I had when I last read it!

A side note on feminine beards: Zirghurim females, like other liberal tribes who have a lot of contact with extra-dwarven races, depilate their facial hair, and in fact were among the first historically to do so, according to their records. Lol self-conscious dwarves… However, a few independent-minded Yehurrarons (unwed females, dwarfmaidens) have recently begun a protest against depilation, arguing that their beard hair is both ‘natural’ and a long-standing tradition of the Thergerim, and that it is their privilege to decide whether or not they wish to groom without being influenced by ‘abovegrounder’ attitudes and human culture.

Dwarf males have a tapering (so they’re larger at the bottom? ;)  ) , triangular (upside down?) build. The typical wide shoulders and heavy arms of the dwarven race are set above a barrel chest. The waist narrows to sturdy but not widely-spaced hips, with only a hint of the ‘traditional’ dwarven belly. They have solid muscular thighs, shorter than the thick calves and broad, splayed feet. Beard and headhair should blend one into the other, and colours must match as closely as to make the blend nigh invisible. The hairs are also sculpted, pomaded, and cut in such a way as to create a homogenous, bulky mass over the male dwarf’s head – the more elaborate and massy the better!

Dwarven women are built along the same general lines, save that the body is far more curvaceous, and the overall shape resembles that of a gnomish minuteglass I LOVE this! The hips are generous, thighs are heavy but the calves much slimmer, and the feet positively delicate in comparison to those of the males (Everything is relative I suppose…) Similarly, their shoulders are broad but not as muscular, and their forearms and wrists, while still competing with most human males for strength, seem quite slim in proportion. Head hair is grown and worn as long as possible while the female is wed (it must be worn in a simple pulled-back style before marriage, and she cuts it almost to her scalp if her husband predeceases her.)

Lifespan?

Oremark / Forgemarks:

Though dwarves do not have coats of arms as the human races do, they are equally proud of the quality and unique craftsmanship that their oremarks represent. Usually these simple symbols are stamped, carved, embossed, or stenciled on various products that emerge from the Thergerim caves, such as weaponry, forged articles, oresacks, and so on. However, the Zirghurim uniquely among Sarvonian dwarves produce very little in this line, preferring to concentrate their skills on spellwork, communication techniques, alchemical research, and architectural design. At last a dwarven tribe the Krean can tolerate – erhm – get on well with! Now all I have to do is resurrect them…

Appropriately enough, since many common folk associate the bat with sorcery, the striking 'oremark' of the Zirghurim is an open-winged black Morjual (common cavern bat) against a inverted fire-orange triangle with splayed concave sides. Heh Mina’s Batman comment comes to mind… This has been adapted in stamp, brand, and seal format to mark various wares coming from the craftdwarves and mages of the Ximaxian peninsula.


Territory
The Zirkumire Mountains cover the peninsula of Cha'dómm in Xaramon, with the Magic Sickle Range along the south and east side, the Wanderer Mountains along the north side, the Westrons along the west side and the Anghorth Alsae Mountains extending northward along the Cyon Sola Bay.

‘Zirkumire Mountains’ in the dwarven tongue are translated as “Y’zekormor”, Bright Heights of Sky - from Yse(sky)Ze(of)Ko(opposing, not)Mor (mine, darkness). The original name, however, was “K’zir’ki’mir” - taken from a now-dead language, and literally meant “one should go around” Lol! This entry hides so many delightful surprises! Bravo Judith! – also apparently a reference to their imposing loftiness and sharp peaks!

The most spectacular peak of the Zirkumires, in the Magic Sickle Range to the south, is the “Face of Khaelvan”, which the Zekormorim call “BarolRotrum” (Father Rock / Lord Mountain). However, equally famous though not as outwardly imposing is the volcanic Hlahujit (Flame-wombed) in the northern range of the Wanderers, which holds the dramatic “Hosting Cavern” of the Zirghurim (see below).




I promise the commentary gets more sensible after this point! But couldn't resist all the side-comments - I so enjoyed reading this entry!:lol  :lol  :lol  

Edited by: Coren FrozenZephyr at: 4/23/06 8:49


Title: Ximax dwarves
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 03 May 2006, 05:01:00
Oh, how is this long! you wanted to outdo Coren! I read it a week ago already, but I do need always some days to digest it ;)
A great entry as always!




Overview

The Zirghurim Dwarves, “of the Bright Heights Clan”, are also known as the Clan of Unghur, after that famous dwarven Archmage. Residing in the Zirkumire Mountains of Ximax, they are mainly renowned for having been the primary builders of the magical city of Ximax, and for their famously-spectacular ‘lava cities’, epitomized by the great volcanic cavern of Hlahujit. They are also one of the most accepting, open, and eclectic of the dwarven clans: friends of the Volkek-Oshra orcs, worshippers of the Twelve, and appreciative of Injera’s blessings as few Thergerim would be.

The Ximax entry doesn‘t say, that they were the ‚primary builders‘, thought they probably were.

Quote:
Construction of the Eleven Wards
The Circle of Magic, the Orcish Society of Enlightenment, and a small clan of dwarven exiles work on constructing the Eleven Wards and the rudiments of a settlement. Over a much longer span of time, the Inner City begins to evolve.

Reopening of the Magical Academy
The human mage Xarl Bluestride, his student Khaelvan I, the Volkek-Oshra elder Narmatuk, and the descendants of the dwarven clan Unghur officially reopen the Magical Academy after a century of ruin


Maybe you need to think about some corrections, small additions. The last reads, as if the clan of Unghur doesn‘t exist anymore.

Appearance:

The Zirghurim are a ruddy race who do not have the pale skin of their deeper brethren. The ripe-peach complexion is strongly flushed on the typical full cheeks and large nose. This rich flushing is also evident on the palms of the hands and, less noticeably but equally vivid, on the heels of the feet. Despite the ‘overheated’ appearance this often gives them, the Clan of Unghur is far more heat and light-tolerant than the average dwarf. In fact, they are, as noted below, rather fond of indirect sunlight and will even refer cheerfully to ‘fresh air’ without sarcasm…

Their eyes are of various striking light colours: leaf-green is common, bright blue also, and a mithril-grey. Golden is more rare, as is an odd yrom-blossom hue, a grey with a hint of purple in it. Brown, black, and other dark colours are almost never seen among the Zirghurim.

Hair is often light or bright as well, and quite straight but with a lot of natural body. Both head and beard hair may be bleached or dyed if they do not match each other, or simply for cosmetic reasons. Males braid, tie back sections, use stiffening clays and creams, and even trim individual locks to create very idiosyncratic, almost sculptural effects in beard and head hair. She-dwarves will do the same, and take it one step further by rolling and fastening their locks to dainty metal frames resembling coronets, which are totally covered and hidden from view when the hairdressing is complete. Remarkable effects can be achieved with a combination of hair stiffeners, near-invisible fasteners, pins and ties, and these supportive frames. We quote from a contemporary description of a Ximaxian “Four Races Ball”:

Does an entry about this four-races ball follow? ;)  :)  

“Though the elven maidens could not but bear away the crowns of beauty, still the beautiful coiffures of the dwarf lasses did not fail to attract their share of attention. Not only the shining colours, bright as the sparks of Thergerim forges or glossy as molten metal, but also the magical shapes and designs into which their hair was formed… While our human ladies had to content themselves with albeit-complex braids and weaves and buns that primarily rested upon their heads in two dimensions, their dwarven counterparts boasted leaping curls, towering frameworks, springing fantasies of hair that seemed impossibly to defy the pressure of Wind, or indeed of any weight of itself… some were fountains studded with miniature gemstones…. some rivers of golden locks wrapped with aurium wires… one silvery birdcage shaped seemingly only of sparkling tresses held a tiny live songbird! One could only stare in delight at the vying motifs, as architecturally marvelous as any work in stone which the male Zirghurim could have constructed…”

A side note on feminine beards: Zirghurim females, like other liberal tribes who have a lot of contact with extra-dwarven races, depilate their facial hair, and in fact were among the first historically to do so, according to their records. However, a few independent-minded Yehurrarons (unwed females, dwarfmaidens) have recently begun a protest against depilation, arguing that their beard hair is both ‘natural’ and a long-standing tradition of the Thergerim, and that it is their privilege to decide whether or not they wish to groom without being influenced by ‘abovegrounder’ attitudes and human culture.

Dwarf males have a tapering, triangular build. The typical wide shoulders and heavy arms of the dwarven race are set above a barrel chest. The waist narrows to sturdy but not widely-spaced hips, with only a hint of the ‘traditional’ dwarven belly. They have solid muscular thighs, shorter than the thick calves and broad, splayed feet. Beard and headhair should blend one into the other, and colours must match as closely as to make the blend nigh invisible. The hairs are also sculpted, pomaded, and cut in such a way as to create a homogenous, bulky mass over the male dwarf’s head – the more elaborate and massy the better!

Dwarven women are built along the same general lines, save that the body is far more curvaceous, and the overall shape resembles that of a gnomish minuteglass. The hips are generous, thighs are heavy but the calves much slimmer, and the feet positively delicate in comparison to those of the males. Similarly, their shoulders are broad but not as muscular, and their forearms and wrists, while still competing with most human males for strength, seem quite slim in proportion. Head hair is grown and worn as long as possible while the female is wed (it must be worn in a simple pulled-back style before marriage, and she cuts it almost to her scalp if her husband predeceases her.)

Oremark / Forgemarks:

Though dwarves do not have coats of arms as the human races do, they are equally proud of the quality and unique craftsmanship that their oremarks represent. Usually these simple symbols are stamped, carved, embossed, or stenciled on various products that emerge from the Thergerim caves, such as weaponry, forged articles, oresacks, and so on. However, the Zirghurim uniquely among Sarvonian dwarves produce very little in this line, preferring to concentrate their skills on spellwork, communication techniques, alchemical research, and architectural design.

Appropriately enough, since many common folk associate the bat with sorcery, the striking 'oremark' of the Zirghurim is an open-winged black Morjual (common cavern bat) against a inverted fire-orange triangle with splayed concave sides. This has been adapted in stamp, brand, and seal format to mark various wares coming from the craftdwarves and mages of the Ximaxian peninsula.


Territory

The Zirkumire Mountains cover the peninsula of Cha'dómm in Xaramon, with the Magic Sickle Range along the south and east side, the Wanderer Mountains along the north side, the Westrons along the west side and the Anghorth Alsae Mountains extending northward along the Cyon Sola Bay.

I thought- according the map, that the  Zirkumire Mountains are only those on the northern part, and the magic sickle would be an extra mountainstock. (Zirkumire does not necessary mean, that the mountains surround the plateau, see your own explanation, which I like very much! - you should go around, lol). Maybe you just say, that the tribe originated in the north and finally expamded its territory to all mountains on this peninsula?

‘Zirkumire Mountains’ in the dwarven tongue are translated as “Y’zekormor”, Bright Heights of Sky - from Yse(sky)Ze(of)Ko(opposing, not)Mor (mine, darkness). The original name, however, was “K’zir’ki’mir” - taken from a now-dead language, and literally meant “one should go around” – also apparently a reference to their imposing loftiness and sharp peaks!

The most spectacular peak of the Zirkumires, in the Magic Sickle Range to the south, is the “Face of Khaelvan”, which the Zekormorim call “BarolRotrum” (Father Rock / Lord Mountain). However, equally famous though not as outwardly imposing is the volcanic Hlahujit (Flame-wombed) in the northern range of the Wanderers, which holds the dramatic “Hosting Cavern” of the Zirghurim (see below).


People:

The Clan of Unghur is much more open and xenophiliac than the majority of dwarves, without the mistrust and rigid secrecy of many clans (although in all fairness the longlived and lawabiding Thergerim have had reason to keep themselves apart from the toils and upheavals of human history and culture…) The locations and entrances of their caverns, rather than being jealously guarded as a racial secret, are known – actually, promoted! Indeed, their openness towards sentient beings of other cultures, races, and beliefs might well be emulated by all such sentients who desire to attain enlightenment and harmony among their own kind and elsewhere… but we digress. They are likewise religiously diverse and tolerant – perhaps the only such dwarven clan in all of Caelereth. See Holidays and Religious Observances, below.

Great, finally some dwarves for the RPG-board which are a bit more open and easier to play!

Again we must use comparisons to make it clear how far the Zirghurim differ from the average Thergerim as we have come to know them on Sarvonia. They are not only less exophobic, and less claustrophiliac than the average dwarf - most actually enjoy the blue of the sky, and find Injera’s heat ‘pleasant’. They claim that as they have the favour of the Firelord in the molten rock beneath, they have it in the fires of that above (the Zirghurim believe that Injera, rather than being the flat round mirror or polished shield that other dwarves say Trum-Barol forged and set in the sky, is actually a sphere of molten rock, similar to their lava bubbles. They do not explain how such a sphere could remain aloft, or rather, their explanations are incomprehensible and seem to have more to do with gnomish fantasy than with either fact or belief…)

This dwarven clan is renowned for producing stunningly effective and creative architects, able to design for both their own race’s preferences and for humans. They have worked with gnomes, halflings, orcs and elves on specific projects without major dissidence. Their designs can be found in major cities from one end of the Santharian kingdom to another, and some even without the kingdom. See Great Achievements, below.

The dwarves of the peninsula have evolved a particularly close relationship with both the city of Ximax and the local clan of orcs known as the Volkek-Oshra. Zirghurim and Volkek-Oshra worked closely together on the building of the city itself, from design to actual construction. The great towers and walls were reared by joint dwarven and orcen labour under the supervision of dwarf architects and orc designers, while the catacombs beneath the city were hewen out by dwarven picks to orcen specifications. Volkek- and Zirghurmages in combination wove some of the most powerful spells into the wards of protection and the lifting incantations that were required during construction, and to this day the relations continue cordially in both trade and social interaction.

See Mina‘s comment about lifting. you shold consult the mages there, for the promarly reason to build the elven wards was to bind and guard the orb, it should be mentioned here!

Housing

Their caverns are far more shallowly-set than most, many with airshafts and lightwells, if not actual ‘windows’ to the surface. Humans find them some of the most tolerable dwarven environments, with expressions like ‘homely’, ‘comfortable’, ‘secure’ occurring often in their descriptions. As is typical in dwarven craftsmanship, most furniture is built-in, or rather carved-out, so that bedledges, benches, and ‘Yr-tables’ are formed from the living rock. However, the sheltered volcanic warmth of the Zirghurim caverns does not foster the lush moss growth that other dwarven clans enjoy, so they must substitute other products such as combed wool, taenish feathers, and even humble straw to form their necessary pallets and cushions which sit atop the stone. Again, this results in a more familiar environment for humans and other races, despite the exoticism of living below ground and the ever-present danger of cracking one’s forehead. (Note: most of the ‘public’ areas have been expanded with a view to human comfort, but if one is invited into the sub-caves or home cavelets, one should be wary of the ceilings and lintels!)

* ‘Yr’, pronounced ‘year’, is a transliteration of  YR in Thergerim runes, which forms the shape (in cross-section) of a typical dwarven table. In the same way, literate Tharians might speak of ‘a T-table’ or ‘an X-chair’ to describe a particular form.

The six most famous caverns are BarolRotrum, Hlahujit, TheuAeph, Hoa Rusun, Rizkul Hund, Kaeryetenyim. Should you be fortunate enough to travel to the Ximaxian peninsula, and have the leisure and moneys to expend upon sightseeing, a visit to one or more will surely repay your expenditure. And should you have the even better fortune to have made a dwarven friend and received a personal invitation, the full glories of these spectacular mountains and their attendant underground cities will be yours for the viewing – a time to treasure!

I will change my plans for the Heart and visit some of your attractions!

BarolRotrum (Face of Khaelvan) - The largest peak of the Xirkumire range, and always snowtopped. Formed by volcanic activity but long since declared extinct, the vast bubble in its center has been built up, excavated out, and generally turned into one of the most convoluted labyrinths one could imagine. Primarily a mages’ hall, with plenty of cavelets and storage tunnels for their ‘supporting staff’ and their families. There are spacious workrooms, physically and magically shielded – there are individual and communal dining quarters – there are cosy bedcavelets with their lavishly moss-lined niches cut directly into the stone walls – there are huge public mootplaces and small secret meeting-caves – and of course, hearths and fireplaces and (mostly decorative) forges everywhere.


Hlahujit (Fire-Wombed) - This is the site of the spectacular Meeting Hall which is ringed by a lake of lava. Though the clan residence cavelets are well-removed from any volcanic danger, there is always a chance that the frequently-grumbling Hlahujit may lose her temper and erupt – in which case the architectural genius of three generations of dwarves would be destroyed in her lava – but as she has been snoring for centuries without waking, the Zirghurim are rather complacent about it.

I don‘t know, if Pele would stay asleep, if you say, that she is snoring! lol

Here one walks through zig-zagging black obsidian tunnels, steadily downwards till calves complain and thighs rebel. Slowly one feels the increasing heat, the murmur of sound. And then, incredibly emerging into the great belly of the volcano herself… a sea of lava filling the vast circumference. Flanges of black rock circle the fiery lake, their ribs picked out by the glow which it emanates, going upwards into unimaginable height and vanishing into darkness, presumably at the filled-in apex of the volcano. Each flange is pierced through at the height of the pathway which runs round the outer edge, about twenty peds above the bubbling, molten rock.
Twenty peds is rather low, you don‘t wear asbest clothes!

Seven bridges are equally spaced around the lava sea; black against the incandescent oranges and yellows of the livid stuff, they arch steeply upward, spring towards a central plateau and merge. One’s face feels drying, cracking, in the searing heat that rises from beneath as one climbs up towards the plateau. Stepping onto the rock gives, magically, some surcease from the constant dull seething of noise, and from the sullen fires.

When readin this the first time some days ago I already wondered, why you first descend to a lower level if you have to build bridges which arch steeply up? why not build them at a higher level, away from the lava and a bit flatter? Why not can you pass on the same level and there are the arches below which support the bridge? (I just want to get away from that heat)

The flat top of the upthrust of rock has been hollowed slightly, so that the center is lower than the outside ring. Two ledges spiral down into that center, about two fores in height apart – thus forming a continuous line of bench-style seating, and a parallel footspace which serves as a path. The ledges halt abruptly before the very middle is reached, leaving a clear space about five peds square – enough for a single dwarf to stand and dominate, for a prisoner and two guards to occupy, for a small circle of justicekeepers to pace, for a Gornegron to consult in relative room with his Denirim. The length of the bench for the first two spirals from the centre, obviously the smallest in diameter, are carved with individual seats, and hold living moss-cushions. Here are the spots for the Trutharoon, the council that will assist and guide the Gornegron in his decisions.

Around the very outside of the plateau, equidistant from the base of each bridge, seven spikes of rock arch almost as many peds into the air above our heads. They flare out slightly at the top, and are scorched and streaked with black-stained runnels. At their apexes a constant fire leaps and hisses – a molten resentment of flame.
Where does this fire come from?
The entire Meeting Hall is a spectacular merge of natural power and dwarven-made architecture; from one of the many observation slots carved into the dome’s sides, it resembles a black iron crown tipped with garnets which itself rises on a black pedestal from a sea of shimmering orange silk.

a sea of shimmering silk - that is lovely!

TheuAeph (Our Flint) - Near Horth, this Thergerim cave system is old and shallow. Its main entrance is a vast, natural shelf of flinty rock which juts from the gentler slopes of the Anghorth Alsae mountains, overlooking the ridged expanse of fields and vineyards below. Here the variety of grape known as the Tali Night Vine flourishes in the volcanic soil, described as “adult, defined…earthen tone, richly spiced”. TheuAeph holds its own vineyards and dwarven vintners, though the amount of alcohol they produce is small and is accurately described as ‘bitters’. A unique drink brewed with Tali grapes, herbal infusions, root extracts, and a secret ingredient which many suspect is extracted from fungi, the Aephian Bitters sell steadily to inns and taverns across Santharia. One bottle lasts for a goodly time, as it is considered a flavoring rather than a potable.

Hoa Rusun (the Coalbellied) - The name might suggest that Hoa Rusun controls coal deposits, but the translation of ‘Hoa’ is actually closer to ‘ember’. Rather, this small but tidy enclave holds sway over an extensive complex of tunnels dug through the slag and vitrified rock of past volcanic eruptions. The Zirghurim have worked with the natural curves, flows, and bubbles of rock to create some fantastically-shaped spaces with a very exotic feel. Mage-shaping has been used in conjunction with skilled masonry and dwarven stone-craft, so some of the tunnels and subcaverns which appear physically impossible probably are, at least to humans.

Hoa Rusun is noted for its seafood dishes and daring fisherdwarves (Thergerim who actually venture near, if not directly out upon, the water!) The Hoa Rusan folk have developed a system of interlocking wharves and jetties which extend outwards from their coves at the tip of the Bay of the Sky, all supported upon deep-sunk pilings and bulwarks. Strung between the far-flung ends of these piers are great nets, lines with hooks, hatchling pens, or tryster-seeding flats, depending upon the fisherdwarf’s preference. The nets can be dragged from far out at sea back along the tracks set into the parallel wharves, and directly up over wide, grid-bottomed troughs into which the haul for the day can be tumbled, glinting and flapping. Small fish slide through the grid along with the seawater and fall back into the bay, while the rest of the catch can be sorted safely from the stepped edge of the trough. There is also a small fleet of fishing boats crewed by ‘mercsailors’, hired seamen from other races, who go out daily for kraken and deepsea fish to serve Ximaxian appetites.

The name „fisherdwarves had me shudder a bit and thinking about if you are going too far away from your own dwarven concepts. When looking closer I found out they keep themselves to the coastline at least... however, I still wold mention, that they feel slightly unwell, the more peds they get away from a ceiling above them.
While imagine your dwarves going fishing on the open sea, I had another idea.
create a big undergrond lake or stream under the Zirkumire Mountains or any other mountainstock which suits. It could be about 100strals long or even much longer, a lake which you can actually use boats on. In this lake you can put fish or monsters alike.. a tasty monster-fish, what about this? Stalatites hanging from the cave ceiling etc? Stalagmites damaging your boats?


Rizkul Hund (Fire’s House) - an open caldera pitted with workshops, ‘storerooms’ and other individual stone buildings which rise tipsily from the floor of the shallow crater. One of the most accessible dwarven ‘caverns’ on Caelereth, and a major attraction for humans and other travelers, who are welcome to visit, watch, and even stay for a bed and meal – at a slight cost, of course. The private Zirghurim dwelling cavelets are located off shafts sunk into the side of the caldera, their enjoyment of the surface notwithstanding: even this broad-minded clan cannot overcome their need for the security of stone completely around them when they take their bread or lie down to sleep. Small inns and taverns catering to humans are set here and there on the walled plain, like all the other buildings hardly distinguishable from the rubble piles and stepped ancient lava flows. Have we failed to mention that a dwarven guide, usually an adolescent or ‘shorr’, must be assigned to every non-Thergerim visitor, and that the fee for their services must not be dispensed with lest one find oneself hopelessly lost in the rocky maze?

Kaeryetenyim (the Watcher) - Poised on the slopes of Mount Watcher (the Ximaxian humans borrowed the translation of the ThergerimTaal name), this beautiful and unique cavern overlooks the Bay of the Sky. It is as if the entire peak of the mountain has been hollowed out and then pierced through with windows, tunnels, lookouts, balconies, and other features – an impossible feat of engineering and a stunning landmark. By day from inside the peak, the mountain top seems to float with a few piers and pillars of living rock still supporting it above lines of udezeran-blue sky and turquoise water – all is light and air and cloudscapes drifting by. By night, observing the Watcher from afar, one sees an entire mountain top radiant as a lighthouse, bright with dwarven fires, magical illuminations, and individual lanterns and glowglobes.

that is the other place where you go FAR AWAY from your dwarven concept and though it is nice to look at that idea and sounds great - are your dwarves mentally still dwarves, if they can sleep in „exposed“ places and open to the outside, so that travellers can see their fires? I‘m feeling unwell with it. I would have put elves in there, not dwarves!
Why don‘t you say, they sleep still deep in the mountain, but work up there? Maybe they grow something special in this lofty cavers which grows only there, or they do something with fire in the night (to have this mountain appear like you described it), but it is something for which a lot of fresh air is needed (oxygene), but  direct sunlight would harm? Then you can have both


Clothing:

As you might imagine, in the warm underground environs of many of the Zirghurim caverns clothing is more decorative than necessary for most of the year’s seasons. In the colder months coats and cloaks must be donned to work aboveground (at Rizkul Hund and some places in Kaeryetenyim and TheuAeph) but at Hoa Rusun and Hlahujit the average temperatures range from as warm as a sunlit day to the heat of a charcoal-burner’s kiln clearing. Obviously, the thick leathers and traditional rockwools of the other clans are not practical here, despite a skin tolerance level of a much wider range than human.

Smiths and forgewrights work in a light loincloth ( the traditional dwarven under-wear ‘Nupalzi’ - which wraps the buttocks as well as the genitals and loins), stout sandals, and an impervious leather apron over their chest and thighs to guard against burns. Childtenders and cooks wear flimsy (by dwarven standards) wraps of light linen or mossweave, easily washed or even discarded when severely stained by the travails of their occupation. For most others, a simple sleeveless tunic – scarcely more than a long rectangle with an oval neck-hole cut in it, left open along the sides and belted for comfort – over the Nupalzi is sufficient.

Nursing mothers or otherwise amply-breasted females usually add an ‘Ardoon’ or chest-wrap beneath the tunic. And it is only here that we can verify the existence of the dwarven undergarment known as a ‘Rusdoon’ or bellywrap! Obviously those great with child would seem to benefit from the support, but we may also see a stout dwarf, his magnificent beard nearly concealing his equally impressive belly, with the tell-tale lines of a Rusdoon beneath his tunic; his innate ‘Olnaas’ (dignity) and ‘EchHaed’ (honour) debarring even the insensitive human or light-hearted halfling from mirth at his expense.

Earth Toccon, made from the useful Silkstone (link to entry) is popular despite its expense. Its lightweight, sturdy fibers make it ideal for hard usage in a warm climate, and the cost is no factor for those who labour at making it, nor for the Earth mage who wishes to robe himself in garments matching his Ximaxian peers of the other elements.

However simple the dress, though, it is invariably embroidered with striking geometric designs and the miniature patchwork technique unique to the Zirghurim. Developed in the spacious halls and caverns of Kaeryetenyim and known as ‘Watchwork’ throughout the kingdom, this style of decoration consists of vividly dyed scraps of cloth which have been folded into sharp squares, triangles, or diamants, then sewn together with points loose and overlapping. The result is both colourful and dramatic, resembling a type of exotic scaling. When used as trim or border on even a plain-styled tunic, it brings sparkle and texture; when done in larger panels on the breast and back of more elaborate garments, it is spectacular. Watchwork may be found everywhere in Ximax, from the hems of a dwarfbabe’s swaddling blanket, to the full sweep of an archmage’s robe, and it is one of the better-known exports (see below) of the Zirghurim.

Food

The dwarves of the Cha’domm peninsula enjoy a far more varied and exotic diet than their brothers on the rest of the continent, due both to their warmer environment and to their eclectic trade relationships.

Of course the favorite mushrooms, tubers (potatoes, carroots, turnips and blood-fists), rootweep and mezpuu are often on the table, along with the well-charred roasts and mixed grills that are popular with the dwarves. Numbles and organ meats are used (horse-n-kidney pie, tuber-stuffed heart, 'Boudeen' or gut sausages, etc.) in thrifty fashion. As Ximax is a peninsula, all kinds of seafood and fish are available, much from the Bay of the Sky coast. For the human visitor we can recommend the ‘Garlick Prawns with Wild Riz’, the ‘Trysters in Moorgul’, or the ‘Grilled Baby Kraken’ which Hoa Rusun often sets on its table!

Condiments are many but not particularly subtle, and are usually laid on with a heavy hand. Fortunately for the visitors of other races, they are almost always served as sides so that the diner may season to taste. Ummadon chutney, Moorgul oya-pea distillate, rocksalt and Kraggi sauce are the main flavours available. Black peppercorns, herb-leaf powders, and spiced applesauce are also popular. The pickled vegetable medley, Ak-ak, in all its varieties (including HlabliAk made with spicy Kraggi sap and red Thugrum) is a side-dish which features often.

The moss-based bread Borwul is rarely eaten as its main ingredient, dried moss-flour, must be imported, so it is seen on the table mostly at festivals or for other sentimental occasions. Golden Rain is traded for instead; the dwarven Foodtenders have taken to its lighter consistency and the Zirghurim breadbaskets contain a great many creative options.

This clan is probably the only one in Sarvonia which uses any dairy products. “Milch and cheese are not a natural part of (the dwarven) diet, as they keep no large domestic animals. As a result, most dwarves dislike the smell of any dairy product, describing it as 'sour' and 'decayed'...” (from Dwarven Food, Manners and Tableware – a Compendium Folio by Judith of Bardavos) However, by long association with humans and orcs the clan has come to incorporate milch and cream into their cooking and even tolerate some of the milder cheeses, such as Cottcheese with its thick white curds or Hava Cream (a spreadable fresh cheese with a gently nutty scent).

Dwarven ale from the Mithrals, local cider, mineral waters, and Horth-made Chéniar wine are the most common drinks. And despite their reputed love for alcoholic beverages, dwarves are surprisingly temperate, rarely affected by amounts of liquor that would have a human toper reeling or under the table. This may have something to do with their more massy bodies, as scholars have often observed that the heavier man holds his ale better than the lightweight – or it may simply be a function of their race which we do not understand. At any rate, if asked for his favorite beverage a dwarf of any clan will always claim his home cavern’s water, with its strong unique taste, to be the sweetest and most refreshing of any drink...

Government

As in all dwarven clans, they are led by a Gornegron clan chieftain and his or her council, the Trutharoon. Among the Zirghurim the Trutharoon is made up of what we would call Guild Leaders – masters of their trade or craft, chosen by their peers in the craft. The Trutharoon meets regularly and deliberates amongst themselves to make decisions for the good of the clan. Individuals with concerns, ideas, or disputes may arrange with the Gorkavon (second-in-command) to come before the Trutharoon’s moot and present their case. See the Mitharim clan entry for further details on how dwarves govern themselves.

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Bard Judith on 03 May 2006, 10:34:00
Thanks for the commentary, critique and compliments, Coren and Talia!  I'll take your suggestions into account when I do the next revision.  

The main difficulty on my end is the history/magic details.  While I think it's a bit of a 'wimp-out' to ask for already-existing entries to be revised in order to fix problems in a entry 'under construction', in this case I think there are already existing problems with the precedent entries.  

Didn't the magic people object to the whole 'magickal plague' idea and the True Vision cult details?  And of course that is all taken from what's on the site about Ximax and the area...  So that will have to be thrashed out separately in the magic forum before I can finalize the history section.  Sigh....

 The details of the mountain ranges - I talked that over with Thuja, who helped design the area, and we sent a labeled sketch to Art to sort out exactly WHERE on the peninsula each of the ranges were located.  I then set my main peaks within those ranges in a logical fashion, so that map can become 'canon' ... unless anyone has something from existing entries that would contradict how we've arranged it?    As for the construction of Ximax, I think that's an obvious though not-yet-drawn conclusion I can claim for the Zirghurim!  I love the idea of them working with the orcs to design and build it - what a city it would become!  

Again, I appreciate any further comments - heck, I appreciate anyone who takes the time to read all the way through it!  It's a long but hopefully not tedious journey...





Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on 26 May 2006, 19:44:00
Aha! Typo found at least i think.  
Quote:
Beard and headhair
 I believe it should be head hair or head-hair as it is not a natural compound word and you are using one to describe the other instead of slurring them together(if this makes any senes.  If not I'll clarify later).  If so, I claim my picture.  While I am here, I am going to compliment you on this ariticle as I was reading through it to find your typos I think i increased my vocabulary tenfold.

Also, I was wondering what Silkstone was as I could not find an entry in the compendium

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Edited by: Drasil Razorfang at: 5/26/06 4:17


Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 26 May 2006, 22:09:00
Well, pictures for members only ;)

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Marvin Cerambit on 27 May 2006, 03:50:00
Actually, I'm pretty sure it's headhair or head hair (probably head-hair too, but I never liked the '-' inbetween words). From what I remember from my English classes, the second way of writing compound words (sp?) is more prefered for most words to keep them from becoming too long.

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on 27 May 2006, 05:51:00
@ Talia: Ah well...In that case I shall have to save this for later.

@ Marv:  I was under the impression from my english classes that a compound word(as found in this specific instance) is when you add two words together to create a completly new one.  For example butter+fly= butterfly.  I was also told that if you were planning on using a word as emphasis for another it should be seperated into two words or a clause or hyphanated.  *turns to Bard*  Am I mislead here?

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on 27 May 2006, 10:42:00
Compouds are tricky to deal with and often you need to go back to what context the word is specifically put in. This makes *all* the difference when it comes to compounds.

EDIT: After reading the "phrase" in context, I don't think there is a problem with the compound.



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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on 27 May 2006, 12:17:00
hm...I guess I was taught grammar wrong then.

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on 27 May 2006, 12:43:00
It isn't that you were necessarily *taught* wrong, it is how you preceive what the teacher says and how you apply it.

They will say something or teach something, but you misunderstand it.  



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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on 27 May 2006, 12:45:00
I see...so its always the learners fault then.  :D  

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on 27 May 2006, 12:48:00
Not every compound is like that of "Butterfly". Two words creating a completely different word with no relation to the two original. Many compounds simply bring together two ideas like a piece of a puzzle.

But the teachers style of teaching can also be a fault point. My grammar instructors in High School were horrible. Much of what I learned grammatically have been through my composition classes at the local community college and self-taught through continuous writing.

EDIT: My humblest apologizes to Bard Judith for using her thread for grammar instruction. ~bows~



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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Drasil Razorfang on 27 May 2006, 12:50:00
OH...I thought that when you used one to describe another you used a "-", or at least that was what I was taught.

Also, I guess its probably me considering I have gone to very high-class(as far as education goes) private schools(well I guess economically as well) for my entire life.

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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on 27 May 2006, 13:48:00
The hypen should be used with rarity as it is not good in formal writing and much like what Judith is writing here. It makes it look very informal and "cluttered". What you learn in the classroom (good example of what I was explaining earlier) is not always acceptable in fiction writing. What they teach you in English class is how to write formal papers/essays for college. You have to take special classes to get a different side of things as each genre has different expectations when it comes to grammar.

The hypen does not work for all compounds and I do not like to use them except on occasion where it makes sense. Stay away from hypens in formal writing. Keep the words together or separate them if possible/necessary.

Again, compounds can be tricky and subjective at times.  



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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Bard Judith on 27 May 2006, 23:05:00
My, it's a good thing I wandered in here!

@ Drasil - nice try, dear, and for reading through the whole entry (my goodness!) you certainly deserve at least a doodle, if not an illustration.  I should hate to put any further restrictions on my 'challenge' because it does sound unfair, but Talia does have a point.  Pictures take a lot of time and energy, even those as crude as mine, and need to go where they can best be utilized - generally for members' entries.  That said, if you have an idea that tempts me I may very well take it into consideration... :smile   so feel free to post it here.

Kalina, you are a darling!  Thank you for your well-argued and beautifully-written defense / definition.  I didn't have the energy.... so I owe you a favour in return.  Next time you need a CD edited, please feel free to bell-ring or 'in-box' me and I shall be happy to take a metaphorical red pencil to it on your behalf.

(Please note all the messy hyphens in the above paragraph... :p  )

Obviously I shall have to be cautious and restrain my more poetic flights of linguistic fancy, lest I stray into areas of self-expression deemed to be erroneous by those who have appointed themselves chief bard-scrutinizers!  On the plus side, as Coren pointed out to me, I shall expect to have my forthcoming submissions read in exquisite detail... :devilish  



Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 28 May 2006, 00:30:00
Hmm, maybe I should offer to sing&dance...



Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 28 May 2006, 00:32:00
People, I think you have missed something here - a language is a living thing which grows and alters and you can't put it in chains saying, it is like this or like this.
We here in Germany had a spelling revision, which is very much discussed about - and revised and again revised, the whole country is divided (my husband is against it, I'm for it) , the newspapers partly agreed to it and used it, others boycotted (?) it. I'm now sometimes unsure, how something is written, when Helen-Elise is asking me and there was a lot of misinterpreting possible in some case, depending where you cut the words, which is now easier than before - a very interesting time for any linguist, I tell you!

***Astropic of the day***
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Title: Re: Zirghurim under construction
Post by: Kalína Dalá'isyrás on 28 May 2006, 01:39:00
~blushes furiously at Judith's compliments~ Thank you Judith. I know we have had grammatical problems on the RPG board and I am usually the one being called >.< I don't know all but I do know some and where to look it I don't know for sure lol.

But yes, Talia is right. Language is a very hard thing to but restraints on, yet there are basic rules which make sense to follow and almost need to be followed for formal writing. Yes this is difficult for ESL people but even they know how to usually spell decently, capitalize, and the like. I am usually harder on those whose english is their native. They should almost know better in most cases. (I have given up on learning any language but my native...english >.<)



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Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Revised, Lengthy, Comments Welcome
Post by: Bard Judith on 07 February 2007, 10:42:33
 :buck:  BUMP!   (gulp)  This topic ALMOST died and I didn't realize it wasn't up on the site until I tried doing a search for some info I needed....  :huh:


MUST start FINISHING entries, especially important ones....



Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Revised, Lengthy, Comments Welcome
Post by: Nsikigan Ho´Tonanese Yourth on 07 February 2007, 22:25:51
Nice entry! Can't wait to see the Zirghurim up! You may want to throw in  abit on Silkstone though, somwhere in the history? Mabye those blankets of thiers are Silkstone made? Rock Tocon perhaps?


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Revised, Lengthy, Comments Welcome
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 14 February 2007, 04:39:49
I really need an address from you Judith!!!


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Revised, Lengthy, Comments Welcome
Post by: Bard Judith on 14 February 2007, 05:00:56
An email or a snail mail?  Cos if it's the second, you'll have to wait a couple of weeks and I'll give you the Korean one...  :)


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Revised, Lengthy, Comments Welcome
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 15 February 2007, 03:27:40
Yep the Korean one please!


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Revised, Lengthy, Comments Welcome
Post by: Bard Judith on 28 December 2007, 20:58:50
Still on Judith's to-do (to finalize, actually) list - bumping to get it out of the depths.

This can be ref'fed in the master Xaramon Development list as well.





Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 31 December 2007, 20:57:24
Comments on the third revision of the Zirghurim are appreciated!  They have languished long enough...

 Gratitude overall to Thuja, Mina, Erian, and Marvin for their assistance in bringing the Xirg this far. Talia's critique and suggestions were particularly helpful in this most recent revision - thanks!


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 03 January 2008, 01:13:44
Oh, it seems that over time this entry hasn't only grown in size but ripened as well, so that it is now like a delicious wine!

- Is there a translation for the word "Hlahujit"? I read below that it's "Fire-Wombed". That could be added to the Overview as well.

- Exceptional creativity as usual here! Enjoyed that "Four Races Ball" and details like "one silvery birdcage shaped seemingly only of sparkling tresses held a tiny live songbird" :lol: But also that despite about female beards and the practices of depilation and those bad ‘abovegrounder’ influences... Hilarious! :rolling: The way you express things always makes me chuckle:  "the overall shape [of dwarven women] resembles that of a gnomish minuteglass"... *hihi* These are very good pictures that have the fantasy touch we need here, lovely!

- Oremark: Which reminds me I still need to do some more of those! Are the Zirghurim included already in your sketches you made a while ago? Have to investigate and try to work on something in this respect. Having a complete collection of oremarks can't hurt!

- Also a nice idea to deduce from the lava that the Zirghurim have down there the fact that they are "less claustrophiliac" and see the Injèrá as something that is related to them in a way :) As alway - interesting connections you construct here!

- :clap: *applaudes the description of the Hlahujit Fire-Wombed* Great, literally fantastic description, makes a really spectacular sight worth for sight-seeing. The term "Hlahujim" is mentioned, but not explained as such, could be added in brackets.

- "Mount Watcher" - don't know where that name hails from, but we already have a "Great Watcher" mountain in the uttermost NW section of the Manthrian map. Is this name mentioned elsewhere? Otherwise we might try to avoid a double-naming, maybe give it a similar, slightly twisted meaning?

Got as far as the Food section - will try to continue asap. Entry of course is brilliant, not much discussion needed about that. It's just the best from the best!  :thumbup:


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Mina on 04 January 2008, 06:05:58
Um, if Hoa Rusun is connected to the Bay of the Sky, as the entry seems to suggests (coves that open into the Bay), where's the Land of Withdrawing Waves?  Currently I have it as a narrow strip of land between Hoa Rusun and the Bay of the Sky.  That could be changed, of course, but it seems to be the only location that fits the descriptions we have of it (which we could of course also change).  It also seems to necessitate travelling through Zirghurim territory to get into or out of the peninsula, which might be problematic.  Perhaps the Zirghurim's fishing could be conducted further south, at the area between what I labelled 'fortress' and 'small port' on this map (http://www.santharia.com/dev/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=10871.0;attach=450;image)?  That area could be politically part of Hoa Rusun's territory too, only separated (at least on the surface) by a strip of Human-controlled land leading to the Land of Withdrawing Waves. 

Quote
In fact, every race which was under treaty at the time was contacted to assist in this great project of binding and guarding the Orb.
Just wondering, which treaty was being referred to here?  I can't seem to find any other mentions of a treaty in the entry. 

Also, I'm slightly confused about which of the mountains are supposed to be volcanic.  The entry seems to suggest that all four ranges are volcanic, but that map you made some time ago only shows the Wanderers as volcanoes.  Or was it marking only active volcanoes? 

It might also be a good idea to mention somewhere that the Zirghurim claim territory on the surface as well, unlike other Dwarven clans. 


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 05 January 2008, 02:12:54
Ok, more comments:

- In notice that you mention in the Government section that more details can be found in the "Mitharim clan entry". We should consider moving the imformation there in a bit adjusted form to the main Dwarves entry eventually, as what we have there at the Mitharim is pretty much valid for most dwarven tribes, so it's a general thing. There might be some exceptions, but these would be addressed a bit in the main Dwarves entry.

- Upon checking the main Dwarves entry I saw that the Zirghurim aren't mentioned in that list yet. Will be added, steelmark as well as soon as I get to it. I rember that the Morgerim are listed there as well, but Thuja hasn't shown up for quite a while (though he popped in once to say that he'll finish these dwarves). So I'm not sure what will come of that.

- Tool, Weapons, Utensils: Are you planning to add something there? These sections might not always be necessary or one could point to the main dwarven entry. The Zirghurim on the other hand might have some fancy technical devices (see below, the "vibrating membranes" thingy you mention), though, that require some creative thinking. Anyway, could still be added later.

- There seems something missing in the Holidays section in the brackets: "(... similar to our Urtengor, which see…)" ?

- I like that new approach to have dwarves with varying belief here and that this is handled with great tolerance. Such a more open tribe of dwarves in various aspects was indeed necessary for a change I think and adds to the multi-cultural concept of the Santharian kingdom. Especially around Ximax we already have a tolerance for orcs, and the Zirghurim fit in here as well nicely, right until the festival days. A very well realized and important idea.

- *hihi* That's a good one: "proclaiming dwarven ‘conquest’ of a feared element" :lol:

- Here, here: A mistake! It's "Cournanian Calendar", not "Cournian" - at least that's how we used it always on the site. :P - Oh, and some others, this time a misspellings, though these resulted in copying from the Ximax and the Staffs entries: "also referred to as the Ximaxian Academy"! and "multicolored" instead of "multicoloured".

- I notice a slight date inconsistency in the History section. The Fall of Ximax is 773 b.S. (the siege 777-773 b.S.). In the history table on the site the decay of the city is then specified as 733-621 b.S. That should be 773-621. You bring a new version in here with dating the siege 737-733. Don't know where you got it, but I'll adjust that to the other dates.

- Some technical notes on History: If an event is taken directly from the site without alteration (don't know if this is the case here), please mark it e.g. by changing the text to grey. Then I won't have to check and doublecheck an existing entry to determine if it varies.

Also: We need captions for each history event! Only then we can use such events in an entry/history table that is not the Zhirgurim entry/table.

Ok, I'm through and like it very much, Judy :D - Great to see a Bard entry now at the finishing line, it will also be a major dwarven entry to fill our Races section... The details are really great, creative and entertaining! Love it! :number1:


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 05 January 2008, 04:13:48
http://www.kunstderfuge.com/-/midi.asp?file=13/schubert_wanderer_760_1_(c)yogore.mid
Finally found and heard Coren's suggested accompaniment to the Zirghurim!

I think it might be possible to have something very much like this as a Zirg theme - he is quite right in that it suits them - with the pounding dwarven 'hammers' turning into a much more cheerful and rippling melody which rather effectively expresses that outgoing attitude.   It needs more 'fantasy' and magic, though...   hmmm...

Dear sage, thank you for the additional feedback: it will be integrated this week and hopefully the entry will be ready for next update!  :)


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 05 January 2008, 22:01:18
Mina:  thanks for pointing out that oversight!   I'd like to have a small 'patch' coloured 'dwarven' on the coast where you have suggested, with a double dashed line connecting it to the main enclave of Hoa Rusun, to make it clearer that they have underground AND aboveground territory, in this case both....

I'll try to rewrite that paragraph to make that clearer, if you approve.


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Mina on 05 January 2008, 23:24:47
I'll do that, but...what's a double dashed line? 


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 06 January 2008, 01:57:25
     

  HOA RUSUN  ============== Coastal Fisheries   


:)      a dashed line indicates something invisible or below, a double one would show a tunnel


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Mina on 06 January 2008, 03:42:06
Ah.  I think over here we call them dotted lines or something like that (even though they have no dots). 


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Kelancey the Green on 06 January 2008, 16:26:19
  I hate commenters who don't leave any constructive criticism, and yet I have become one of them.  Congratulations, Judy, on an excellent Tribe entry!  The dwarves just got a lot more versatile and interesting with your addition.  I'm selfishly wondering, have the Zirghurim established regular trade with human civilization (there's an oxymoron for you)?

[Kelancey drools, dreaming of dwarven-crafted trephines, scarificators, and lancets]


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 06 January 2008, 22:25:57
Oh, absolutely!  Almost all dwarven clans DO trade with humans, though most have set up a separate trading post to keep their home cavern private.  The Zirg are a lot more open and xenophiliac, and humans (and elves, orcs, brownies, gnomes, etc.) of peaceful intent are welcome to trade, visit, and even tour their premises as paying guests.

However, the Zirg aren't primarily miners and smiths, like most of their brethren.    What I can do for you is look up a clan that WOULD produce fine implements (careless me not to have thought of it!) and add the information into the entry so that you can then cross-reference it in your Medical & Surgical Implements (nice start, btw!)


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Mina on 14 January 2008, 03:52:09
I got distracted for a while, but here (http://www.santharia.com/dev/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=10871.0;attach=457;image)'s the updated version of the map.  I hope I got it right. 


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Coren FrozenZephyr on 27 March 2008, 19:25:43
Hello Judith! :) Do you still need a final read-through here?


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Azhira Styralias on 18 April 2008, 02:34:18
Is this tribe going to be approved any time soon? As a mage lover, this is such a perfect race for a mage...whereas all of the other dwarves are much more combat related, it is nice to see a magically inclined dwarven tribe. It is actually interesting to note that the largest magic school in all Sarvonia actually owes alot of debt to dwarves and orcs than humans, it would seem...

Overall, this is a wonderful and immensely detailed entry and I have to wonder why it was not approved earlier. I would think that a new tribe would be something to be celebrated and talked about! I'd love to see such a tribe as this as a possible source for a mage character on the RP side.   :D :D :D


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 18 April 2008, 03:17:22
Oh, I'd love to get this one up :D There are various Judy entries which are 90% finished but I rarely get a sign that it is done, and there a dozens of those... We should work on that, Judy! ;) - Well, this one took 2 years by now, so that's quite a bit.

From what I can see here the only section missing now is Tools, Weapons, and Utensils, so maybe this can be added soon - and then I'll put it up. Or I put it up already, and we'll let this section be added later. At any rate, the faster we can put it up the better.


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Azhira Styralias on 18 April 2008, 05:48:53
*BUMP* So everyone can catch this VERY important update on the Recent list... :grin: :grin: :grin:


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 18 April 2008, 09:00:15
To be fair, Art, the unfinished ones are generally ones where I've requested other input.  I do want Santharia to stay a team project, and I'd rather something waits for months than push it through with a cocky assumption that I know everything there is to know about the world... :)

Look at the School of Tunes, for example.  I know Talia has not been around, but I did not want to step on her toes by making judgement calls about a city (Bardavos) that she might have had plans for.

 However, it's waited far too long and I need to have that information available for people - the curriculum and ranking, for example.  Entries are not carved in stone and things can always be changed later if absolutely necessary.

I know I have bent over backwards to try to accommodate and rationalize all kinds of strange decisions and entries made in the past, reconciling claims and visions that seemed incompatible.

Hopefully if I am to finish any of these languishing entries people will allow me some grace and freedom to proceed on my own, since there are less and less of us to work together with...

So yes, I'll start pulling up some of the languishers and perhaps our eager newcomers will assist in contributing comments and ideas to finish things off.   It would be delightful to do something as a project together, even with one other person as Kelancy and I have done in the past.

Will put the Zirg back on priority list, and do the tools - hopefully magic people will not be too contradicted...


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 18 April 2008, 14:24:18
Perhaps you should push up these entries more often, Judy, so that the people in question see  them and are reminded that there waits work. It would help however, if you answer calls as Corens above. (openly, if you have sent him a private mail, so that others are informed as well).

To Bardavos: I have a bad conscience every time I think at it (and you waiting). I didn't write anything down yet for you, because I have architectural problems with the Sharadon dividing it into two halfs, especially in spring. But I think I throw out my problems and ideas somewhen soon; I don't see now me finishing it and will probably give it free for development for somebody else - experienced!

The other coming entry was the music submission, right? If I remember right, there are no problems left concerning the written notes (??). Lucirina will have had the idea of printing them (in Varcopas) and so her book will spread farther than any handwritten ones.


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 25 June 2008, 23:46:19
I think the description is better than the picture, but I wanted to try Terragen out.

This mountain scene was generated in Terragen but, as you can see, has been almost completely repainted over.  Still, it really helped me to get a sense for the perspective and shadows of the landscape.   This shows one of the main Zirghurim mountains, Kaeryetenyim the Watcher.

I quote from above:

Poised on the slopes of Mount Watcher (the Ximaxian humans borrowed the translation of the ThergerimTaal name), this beautiful and unique cavern overlooks the Bay of the Sky. It is as if the entire peak of the mountain has been hollowed out and then pierced through with windows, tunnels, lookouts, balconies, and other features – an impossible feat of engineering and a stunning landmark. The workspaces are all found here at the apex of the mountain, airy and well-lit, while the sleepingcaves are set safely deep below, accessed by liftshafts with brownie-designed liftboxes.  By day from inside the peak, the mountain top seems to float with a few piers and pillars of living rock still supporting it above lines of udezeran-blue sky and turquoise water – all is light and air and cloudscapes drifting by. By night, observing the Watcher from afar, one sees an entire mountain top radiant as a lighthouse, bright with dwarven fires, magical illuminations, and individual lanterns and glowglobes.

Yeah, well, the picture doesn't live up to that lyrical description, but perhaps it'll provoke me to get this entry finally ready for the next update.  And who knows, perhaps the illustration will be good enough to go along with it?





Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 26 June 2008, 00:04:17
It is a nice picture, Judy, but don't you think it is a bit too much coloured, especially the sky is too blue (even for a night picture, maybe use a different blue)? This is what makes it different from other submissions on the site, maybe tone the colours down a bit?

When is update, next week, not this one. If you wish I have a last read through next week.


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 26 June 2008, 01:58:03
This is pretty cool, Judy! :)  The idea of first using TerraGen and then draw over on the picture worked very well here I think. There are some typical Terragen distorted parts visible which could be fixed a bit - how about trying to use a real texture on it, and blend it into the picture by making it half transparent, as we do it e.g. at the maps? Worth a try, I'd say. Could be tried at the mountain and at the grass as well.

Regarding the sky and the colour personally I don't object that much - it adds a certain magic/mystery touch to it. Maybe another blue is still better, though.

If you have those windows on an own layer you might also try applying a shadow effect to it. This might result in a more 3d look, so that the windows appear as set into the mountain stone.

Anyway, I think the result is already pretty good. Not entirely perfect yet, but pretty cool so far! :thumbup:


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 26 June 2008, 07:03:28
I had a closer look now, Judy.

You need to do something with the sky, there are the strokes of the brush you used clearly visible (round darker dots, then the path you took). You know better how to avoid that ;)

As Art already said, maybe some shadows at the windows, they look slightly set on the mountain, you still see, that these were an extra layer.


 (You have been tired, but you wanted this pic go up, take more time to illustrate this great entry, it deserves a better quality!)

Edit: Just take out some saturation and you don't need to alter the colour


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 26 June 2008, 09:45:23
Art and Talia, thanks for the comments!   

This is more intended as an experiment with Terragen than an offer of a finished picture, as I thought I'd said in my introduction.   Yes, it was late at night and my eyes were going blurry, but I could still see the streaky sky and patchy windows, honest! :)

I wasn't going to put in any further work UNLESS people thought it was worth it - is the concept good enough, are the lines and shadows and perspectives of the landscape nicely dramatic, and so on?  If we want a completely different mountain shape, for example, or different vegetation, that requires regenerating the landscape in Terragen, with its new lighting, overlay, and so on. 

Same with the colours - the palette is Terragen's, so if it's too saturated that can indeed be easily fixed, but I wanted to see how it would 'feel' and look in the picture.

So - do I start from scratch, or does this have potential?  (As I just said to Tha'eli, no work is wasted, so be honest!)   


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 26 June 2008, 14:52:06
Definitely worth tweaking only the already existing result in my point of view, Judy! It has more than just great potential - and using TerraGen that way might also be a good idea for future projects, especially where landscapes are dominating the picture.


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Mina on 27 June 2008, 02:27:57
The mountain looks like it's grinning at me.   :shocked:


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 27 June 2008, 02:32:35
Yeah, maybe the centrals rows could also be made a bit more uneven, or the windows could be further appart, but the overall impression is still quite fascinating :)


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Third revision, ready for final comment
Post by: Bard Judith on 28 June 2008, 10:17:50
OK, I'm working on it! Further updates as events warrant..


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Fourth revision, hopefully ready for blarrowing!
Post by: Bard Judith on 04 July 2008, 13:07:12
OK, the missing section finally completed, a last read-through for consistency, and the Zirg are hopefully ready for blarrowing!


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Fourth revision, hopefully ready for blarrowing!
Post by: Smee on 04 July 2008, 18:56:20
Woah, Judy. This is quite the astonishing undertaking, and a delightful read. Your typical style showing throughout in a warm flowing manner. I weigh it in at 1.3 of those 10 page size ratio's - I forget the name  :buck:

I have a number of little typos, americanised spellings and small points to mention (which we'll get to in a moment), but really this is a great piece that have bought these dwarves to life for me. Especially so close to Ximax. Perhaps one day I will be using the great detail in this entry for my own entries when Ximax and the province in general is developed further.

Lets get the typos' out the way...

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as has an unusual reddish-tan 'terracotta' hue.

Terracotta seems a little Earth-like... although this may be a documented Santharian version, if so ignore me.

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One could only stare in delight at the vying motifs, as architecturally marvelous as any work in stone which the male Zirghurim could have constructed…”

Marvellous, american variation is with a single l.

And I think the sentence ending is a little awkward compared to your usual. Perhaps make it something like   "... any work in stone carved/constructed by male Zirghurim."

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Though dwarves do not have coats of arms as the human races do, they are equally proud of the quality and unique craftsmanship that their oremarks represent.

'That' is a sneaky little word, skilled in fooling people into believing it is needed in a sentence when actually it isn't. In this case I think you can directly remove it, and let the sentence flow a little easier. (Damn word is so sneaky it appeared in my last sentence three times without me even realising until I corrected it).

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or stenciled on various products
  Possibly another american variation. But by my knowledge stencilled has a double l too.

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The Clan of Unghur is much more open and xenophiliac
I can't find anywhere that confirms xenophiliac is actually a word. Perhaps replace with something simpler like 'sociable', 'trusting' etc.

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less claustrophiliac than the average dwarf
  Claustrophobic.

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city were hewen out by
Hewn.

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The six most famous caverns are BarolRotrum, Hlahujit, TheuAeph, Hoa Rusun, Rizkul Hund, Kaeryetenyim.
Shouldn't the last part of a list have 'and' before it? i.e.  'and Kaeryetenyim'

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there are cosy bedcavelets with their lavishly moss-lined niches cut directly into the stone walls
Didn't you just say the moss doesn't grow here and they rely on more human-traditional materials?

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Seven bridges are equally spaced around the lava sea; black against the incandescent oranges and yellows of the livid stuff, they arch steeply upward, spring towards a central plateau and merge. One’s face feels drying, cracking, in the searing heat that rises from beneath as one climbs up towards the plateau. Stepping onto the rock gives, magically, some surcease from the constant dull seething of noise, and from the sullen fires.

I can't find good screen shots (I might make one later)... but this part really reminds me of a cross between Ironforge and Blackrock Mountain in World of Warcraft.

Here's a couple on the internet already.. not great ones though.

Blackrock 1 (http://www.thebridgekeepers.com/images/Blackrock_mountain_1.jpg)
Blackrock 2 (http://www.thebridgekeepers.com/images/Blackrock_mountain_2.jpg)

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smallest in diameter, are carved with individual seats, and hold living moss-cushions.
   ... another mention of the moss which I thought couldn't grow. If I was simply wrong before, ignore this point.

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magical means of defense when necessary  / It has been noted that technically all of these could be used for personal defense as well

Two american spellings of defence. They are close together, in the same paragraph I think.

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perhaps the reason the Zirghurim are so little interested in the typical dwarven occupation!
   A rather weird sentence. I think it's the middle part that needs to change. Perhaps something like "... are so disinterested in the", or "have such little interest in the".

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then consumed with a marvelous variety of spreads, dips, sauces
  Another american marvellous.

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The Inner City is often referred to as "Old Ximax", as the vast majority of the buildings here date to the first millenium of the School (also refered to as the Ximaxian Academy).


Double n in Millennium, and double r in referred.

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They plann on retreating and leaving the dark elves
Plan has a random extra n.

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isolated hut near the aformentioned village
E missing from aforementioned.

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is left unclaimed at Xarl's insistance.
Insistence.

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I'm glad it's nearly lunchtime as you sure had me licking my lips during the extensive passages detailing food and drinks. I repeat that this is a delightful entry and I look forward to seeing it on site.

Awesome work Judy.

Happy Dreamin'  :grin:


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Fourth revision, hopefully ready for blarrowing!
Post by: Bard Judith on 05 July 2008, 11:08:28
Amazing, Smee - mostly for the fact that there's someone who dares to go over an entry of mine in such painstaking detail.  Your bravery is only matched by your meticulousness!

 I'd say you've earned an illustration as well, if only for 'hewn', which is a legitimate error on my part.  (Not to make excuses - as a Canadian, I am continually tugged between the British and the American spellings of many words, and though I much prefer the British - grey vs gray - I am often led astray by the fact that I must teach American ESL...)

Thank you very much for that careful reading - it will save Art some effort once I make the corrections!

Gratefully,
Judith


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Fourth revision, hopefully ready for blarrowing!
Post by: Azhira Styralias on 05 July 2008, 11:29:12
Woohoo! It's about time this clan get blarrowed.  :D

Great work to the both of you, Judy and Smee. But...the veiled jabs at American English have to stop. Everyone acts like British English is so superior or something...or maybe I'm being too sensitive... :P


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Fourth revision, hopefully ready for blarrowing!
Post by: Smee on 05 July 2008, 12:16:54
Lol Azhira, I think you're being too sensitive. I make no claims of one being the superior to the other, although if forced to choose obviously I'm biased to my British home.  I'm merely following the rules of the site, which I understand to be British spelling is desired  :kiss:

@Judy ... it was my pleasure. And ooh, an illustration. How exciting.  :D


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - Fourth revision, hopefully ready for blarrowing!
Post by: Artimidor Federkiel on 11 July 2008, 00:10:03
Corrections from Smee made, Judy? Cause I'd love to get this one into this week's very special Judy special update. Time constraints don't permit me to check it all over again before I prepare it for the update (and then I'll read it anyway from top to bottom). However, I saw your latest updates and these additions are just fine, as was to be expected :D

So I guess this can indeed be considered as ready to rock and roll - especially in the light that people have commented on various parts of the entry anyway within the last year several times, so it has ripened until now and integration was long overdue. Only the last tiny details were missing, and as they are here, I'd say, get it up!

I'm pretty sure once I read the final entry I'll be thrilled again and again by the creativity that you surely also put in the latest details, but I guess I can safely take it for granted that this entry is ok without a lengthy check before the update, eh? ;)


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - All changes incorporated, take it away, Art!
Post by: Bard Judith on 11 July 2008, 00:55:40
Done, dear sage.  Yup, it's been checked and rechecked.  And that will teach me to copy the history section wholesale without proofreading it verrrrry carefully, because about half those typos were in there... :)  Enjoy when you do read, because yes, you'll appreciate it.  :D


Title: Re: THE ZIRGHURIM CLAN - All changes incorporated, take it away, Art!
Post by: Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels on 11 July 2008, 06:55:57
Yeah, the group in Thalambath's heart is about to go there, so these dwarves have to be there before we arrive ;)

--> That means, several people have to read it ;)