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The numbers of all cities have to be revised - but when and how?

Are you colourblind? Fuchsia.... *shakes head and looks questioning at Altario* You are teasing!
Edit after another hour in bed: Sorry for altering your myth Altario, but I could not resist! Take what you like from you proposals!
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Another legend of the Sunken City is related here.
It is said that immediately after the storms and floods that caused part of the city to sink beneath the waters of Lake Aelignós, that the Clerics of Foiros begged the Duke to make offerings to the Twelve where the city had disappeared and many of the cities inhabitants had perished. The Duke, who's own daughter was one of those who had died, angrily refused and cursed the gods. The clerics were dismayed and ominously predicted dire consequences for the Duke's angry words.
It is said that immediately after the storms and floods that caused part of the city to sink beneath the waters of Lake Aelignós, that the Clerics of Foiros begged the Duke to make offerings to the Twelve where the city had disappeared and many of the cities inhabitants had perished. The Duke, who's own daughter was one of those who had died, angrily refused and cursed the gods. The clerics were dismayed and ominously predicted dire consequences for the Duke's angry words.
As you have mainly clerics of Foiros in your city, this might be ok, otherwise they would be not my first choice for that problem, more clerics of Grothar. (Or the one cleric of Grothar had asked the clerics of foiros to help him, but that's not needed here to be explained). Maybe..*think* you could add: ..as the most influential group of clerics.. or something like this?
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True enough, within a fortnight, those who had died beneath the lake began to rise as zombiis. The evil dead came up onto land each night and killed and fed on the people of Salsair. The city guard was unable to stop them.
Do we have 'zombies'?, The word? Might it not be better to describe them here?
....those who had died beneath the lake began to rise again, changed terribly, with pale, tumid skin, their former bright clothes hanging in worn, bleached rags from their unshaped limps.
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The evil dead came up onto land each night and killed and fed on the people of Salsair.
That's too unimaginative, Alt, what about..The miserable dead came up onto land each night , dripping wet and smelling, and haunted their relatives, trying to get back into their houses and beds, ignoring their former beloved though, killing thouse who tried to get into their way. Nobody managed to chase them away, the guards were helpless. Trying to slash them did not work, they just moved on, not recognising, that an arm or foot was missing.
What do you think?
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The clerics revisited the Duke and pleaded with him to appease the gods.
They stated that the gods were very angry and that the Duke personally had to make a sacrifice to them.
They stated that the gods were very angry and that the Duke personally had to make a sacrifice to them.
I'm a bit out of action... but I think our gods would not care this much to be angry. At least it would not be the belief of the priests, the normal people might do it though. Why should they be angry?
Ok, here we go....
The citizens of Salsair wondered, why such a disaster had smitten their town, first the floods and part of the city sunken into the water, then the dead coming out of the water. What was amiss? Soon they realised, that there was a magnificent temple for Foiros, the god of fire, but only small places where Baveras, the goddess of water and Grothar , the weathergod were worshipped. Should they have been angry and therefore sent those plagues? Money was collected - everybody gave freely, soon the foundation of a temple for Baveras and Grothar were laid and in short time a two story building was raised close by the water - the base level, dedicated to Baveras was susceptible(??) to flooding, the upper dedicated to Grothar open to the winds, a building concept which was copied many times after and widely known as a Salsair temple.
The risen undead though, what about them? Needed Queprur appeaasing also?
As soon as the new temple was finished, the Duke and Duchess, with a retinue of a hundred guards went to the shores of the sunken city, where the new temple was errected. He began to pray to Baveras and Grothar, to Seyella and Eyasha and most of the Twelve , naming them and begging their forgiveness and asking that the curse be lifted from his city.
(Actually, I think it would be better to skip all other gods except Baveras, Grothar - and Queprur)
Against the plaintive cries of his wife, and the earnest advice of his guards, the Duke waded out into the water until it was up around his waist, raised his arms and began to pray to Queprur, calling out for her to end the invasion of the dead and bind them to her realm.
He then offered himself as a sacrifice
Almost at once, dozens of the
Instead, suddenly the sound of laughter could be heard. As everyone stopped and listened the laughing grew louder as did the sounds of splashing. Looking out over the water, the Duchess was able to discern the shapes of rivermaids frolicking merrily. One rivermaid in particular caught her eye, and it swam nearer the shore. This rivermaid had all the features of her dear departed daughter who had drowned when the city sank. The Rivermaid locked eyes with the Duchess for the briefest of moments, appeared to raise a hand in greeting, then dove beneath, its tail slapping the surface with a splash.
The Duchess and the clerics knew then that the gods had been appeased and once more granted life to those who had died in the disaster, allowing them to live as Rivermaids in the waters of the Aelunn river.
Nice story, need that to link to the rivermaid entry!
I dearly hope you are not too distressed...
