Why thank you Hylphán, one does love to receive the occasional compliment.

Thank you, that is tremendous news.
Well I suppose by that I meant, you know the type of like that is a positive feeling towards someone or something. But know I have had a closer look at it, it does seem a bit weird so I have sort of swapped round the lines, so it now goes:

Are you the chosen?
Are you full of hate?
Are you unable to like?
Are you destroyed by love?

So I think and I hope that makes a bit more sense.

Oh yeah, I see what you mean it does not sound right. Well I have changed that now, and thank you very much for all your help. I hope you are right about it being ready for uploading.

Wow, that is really good, I hope you do not mind me using some of your words, I have made some alterations of course. Also thank you again for the kind help. The introduction I hope is now complete after all that hardship.

This is all I have so far:

This piece of writing, now considered as a poem was once believed to have been used as a war cry by none other than Ma'asherom’s the Red from the dark side at The War of the Chosen.

Is that okay, only I would have thought it should be longer and have more detail.

Thank you, I am very happy with the changes and appreciate your help allot. Unfortunately though I am still trying desperately to come up with a decent introduction but each time I start one it just does not seem right.

Okay, I think I have finished this now but it probably needs a bit more work so I am just posting to say, comments are now welcome. Thank you.

I will admit, I had my suspicions about that.

All changes made from are in yellow.

Categorization: Flower

Overview: As the name suggests this is a very foul smelling flower, though beautiful in appearance it lets off the aroma of rotting flesh and blood. It is usally found located around the boarders of the Paelelon forest, home to the Eophyrhim Dark Elves. Any person who is most unfortunate to run into its habitat and horrific smell normally suffers from stomach pains and sickness afterwards.

Description: The Malodours Maiden flowers are have a very beautiful appearance despite their foul smell. They are a bright red, like rubies, the colour of blood like there smell. Each flower is of quite a large size with an average of a one palmspan and seven nailsbreadth diameter when the bottom layer of petals are spread out, and the height of six nailsbreadth for the stem.

There are twelve petals on each flower; six of those petals are all of about two grain in thickness and curl back from the middle of the flower so the tip of each petal is normally found just touching the stem. The other six petals stick up to form a kind of pod shape just with a small opening at the top, these petals reach lengths of up to 10 nailsbreadth. This is believed to be the place in the plant were the smell arises from.

When seen up-close it could almost be said that the petals create the shape of a woman’s clothing. The pod on top quite like the shape of a bodice and the bottom leafs going down creates the shape of a skirt. This shape gives the name of maiden and malodorous is due to the foul smell it produces.

The odour that these flowers produce smells almost of rotten flesh and blood, also due to the bright red colour it can sometimes be mistaken for blood all over the floor like a murder scene.

No leaves or any other parts grow on this plant, it is just the stem and the flower. But on rare occasion a flower is found were the stem has grown in a spiral, like a ringlet. The reason for this phenomenon is as of yet unknown for certain, but one explanation used is that it is to do with the gender of the plant.

Territory: The Malodorous Maiden flowers grow in big groups together, it would be almost unheard of to find one of these flowers surviving on it's own. These flowers only known habitat is located just on the boarders of the Paelelon forest, homeland to the Eophyrhim Dark Elves. Some people say the Elves keep these flowers growing and reproducing to protect their forest and keep out trespassers. There could be other habitats for these plants, though they are as of yet undiscovered.

Usage: It is believed by some people that The Malodorous Maiden flower is used by the Eophyrhim Dark Elves for the purpose of protecting their forest by keeping out trespassers.

Reproduction: People of knowledge about this plant know that is smell they produce is not just a pointless inconvenience, but it is the main reason of their survival for so long. That also explains why they always grow in groups, because the smell prepares the plant for reproduction.

When the seeds are almost ready to move on to the next stage in there existence, which is growing, the flower will die. The seeds are contained inside the pod on the top of the plant so the pod detaches itself from the rest of the flower when it dies. Then the seeds are kept safe inside the pod for on average another couple of months, before they are completely ready to be let free and grow into flowers.

Oh yes my name is green, *does a little celebration dance*. Thank you Artimidor, this is brilliant. Yes and the plaque too, I won’t let you down Sir, Guides honour.

Thank you so much for all your help, I will try to make the best effort I can.

I have tried my best doing some work on the poem so I hope it is a bit better now at least, but I am still trying to sort out the introduction.

I have made some changes, thank you for the help as I did think the wording did sound wrong, but I was not sure how to fix it. So thanks for that.

I think I have just about done the last of the finishing touches and hopefully now it is good enough.

Yes we can definitely make an acception for Santharia.

I do believe in evolution, but I also believe that everything should come in moderation. Yes meat is good if you when you do not have too much, but people who take that to an extreme with eating too much meat, are just kidding themselves if they think it is good.