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61  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 29 June 2007, 04:25:19
Good because I have just finished it, I will post it and see what you think, I am open to making alterations, as I am not really too sure about this one.
62  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 29 June 2007, 03:54:39
Yay, thank you I really appreciate it, and there definitely should be more contributions in the future, what do you think of a poem about the dragonstorm.
63  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 29 June 2007, 01:43:18
Thank you very much, *gives a polite curtsy*.
64  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 29 June 2007, 01:29:52
Yes it is true, I am in the bottom English class, always have been. It is so annoying because another person can write this absolutely rubbish story with no imagination what so ever and they get a big well done it was brilliant, but if I come up with a good imaginative story that includes everything required with lots of original ideas and they say it is not good enough, I need to put more effort in apparently. So what do you think of my poem and introduction.
65  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 29 June 2007, 00:50:38
Okay I have changed the introduction again; I hope that it is now more up to the high standard required.
66  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 29 June 2007, 00:10:20
Oh don't worry no one has annoyed me I like constructive criticism it is just me doubting myself out loud. To be completely truthful I am the one who thinks that I am not good enough in my own mind, I am my own worst critic. I suppose I always doubt myself at English because I have always been in the very bottom English class, in my secondary school they have 6 English classes, I am always put in the bottom class, that makes me always think I am bad at writing, so I doubt myself.
67  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 28 June 2007, 15:51:28
Okay I understand what you mean, I will try and think of a introduction that in your words would make it more important, okay I knew this was not going to be easy but I think you have got me there, maybe I should have just stayed where my writing style works best, which as you say is the RP board, but I will still try to write a good introduction, I am not one to run out so easily on something that has already started and put all these comments to waste, never.
68  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 28 June 2007, 15:15:56
Okay this is just getting quite confusing now, so you are saying that I should not say that Letitia wrote it but someone who never existed.
Or how about this, in the my character CD for Letitia in the role playing forum I have created a whole family tree, so what about if I was to say it was written by her great grandfather and was not found till decades after his death hidden in a small box somewhere within the grounds of their estate by Letitia. Her great grandfather on her father’s side was in the navy so he would have had a few adventures in his time.
Or should I just completely detach it from my character in every way.
69  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 28 June 2007, 05:56:11
I have tried to change the introduction, is that any better. I have probably actually changed the whole direction of the poem now but I thought that could be easier in a way and possibly a bit more believable.
70  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 28 June 2007, 05:20:32
Oh that is wonderful, thank you very much, I love the frame, and it is like my 2 day's early birthday present. So this poem was worth missing half an hour of my French lesson for. grin
I will look into the introduction and try to alter and hopefully improve it to the high standard required. And again thank you, not only for the frame but also for creating this wonderful warm and caring community of which although I am still quite new to I am already absolutly in love with. heart
71  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Curse of Tacunija on: 28 June 2007, 01:25:23
Yes I must agree with Alassiel on this, it is a very well writen poem that just flows really quit well and it sort of rolls off the tong, it is not a mouthful but in a way you could say it is easy, as in easy to read because it is so soft and rhythmic. It does seem to paint a bit of a quite distant picture in your mind which I think is good because for me it still has that little bit of mystery left behind. Over all I like it.

About the "Of peaceful, loving, kind", are you trying to say he is that sort of person who is very peaceful and loving, that is the way it comes across to me, if so that should be as was previously suggested, "Of peaceful, loving kind".
72  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 28 June 2007, 00:37:10
Thank you very much for your comment and I hope you enjoy your holiday, it sounds lovely. Also I will have a look at and try to comment on some other peoples work, thanks again.
73  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 27 June 2007, 15:04:51
Please tell me if there is something I have missed out that I am supposed to do so I can get comments or something. I know my work may not be brilliant but I suppose that is one reason why I am here to practise my writing and I would never know how to improve if no one ever told me, just like any normal human being.
74  Organization and General Discussions / Non-Santharian Stuff: Life, the Universe & Everything / Re: Riddles on: 10 June 2007, 17:41:21
For Alysse question, was the man who married over twenty women a priest?
75  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Wretched Elf on: 07 June 2007, 01:00:53
Okay, thank you for reading through my poem, what do you think, is it any good.
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