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1  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Avéquis Lighthorse on: 08 November 2007, 05:34:00
Oh gosh I love those sites, never heard such a thing existed, but it is interesting, thanks. I will definitely be having a good look at them for some words, though at the moment I am at failure to see how "property right or harvest mite" will fit into this particular poem.  rolleyes
And thanks again for the comments. grin
But at the moment, I had better get on with my essay. buck
2  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Avéquis Lighthorse on: 07 November 2007, 16:29:31
Okay I am now down to only three "light", there is the "delight" which I cannot think of another word for,l but I will still try. The "flight" which seems like an essential word to me, and so does the one "light", as Nakashi is the goddess of light so I have called her "Lady light" to fit into the poem. Overall I hope that is okay now. What do you think?
3  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Avéquis Lighthorse on: 06 November 2007, 05:59:41
Hello Artimidor, thank you for the comments, I appreciate it, and I definitely agree with what you said about the light, I admit I did get a bit carried away with my "ight" words. But I am glad you like it overall, I have not write poetry in a while after all my big exams so I thought it would be good to get back into it, a new begging. Anyway I will try and replace some of those lights, thanks again. :)

So far I have only managed to exchange one light for a right, sorry in this poem I could not help but use all these "ight" words, for some strange reason.
4  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / Re: The Avéquis Lighthorse on: 04 November 2007, 08:23:04
Oh gosh buck, sorry I think I was rushing a bit there, I should pay more attentsion when typing, thanks for pointing that out anyway.  :)
It is meant to be the lighthorse, which is one of the Mythical beast enteries. So anyway what do you think of it, any good, I was not sure personally wanted to make it a bit longer but I do not know what else to say.
5  Santharian World Development / The Santharian Library / The Avéquis Lighthorse on: 04 November 2007, 08:05:16
This poem was written as an account of a rare sighting of the Avéquis Lighthorse. The poet was a devout follower of the Aeoliran religion and the Goddess of light, Nakashi. But unfortunatly this man or women is unknown by name.

The Avéquis Lighthorse

The sparkle of gold,
In the highest heights;
The splendid glow,
In the sky this night.

The gallant wings,
 Of a proud knight;
The greatest wonder,
 Of this amazing sight.

The fighter for good,
Strength and right;
The fire of gold,
Silver and white.

The loyal steed,
Of a proud Lady light;
The luscious feathers,
Of the wings in flight.

The extravagant dress,
To the viewers delight;
The elegant beast,
What a magnificent sight.
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