good job! I thought it was really good and can't wait to see it on the site (I also caught the deviation of "cirrus") I thought that was great too especially as it is called cloud moss
Spinning, spinning, turning Whirling across the sand Turning, turning, spinning Moving around the land Spinning, spinning, turning Churning up the dust Turning, turning, spinning Howling with a gust Of Grothar’s breath,
All the leaves fall off the trees Only to join the wind Twirling around In flashes of orange and red They are a blur Spiraling with the intensity Of Grothar’s breath,
Now it calms It’s slowing down Spinning…spinning…turning All the leaves drift Down to the ground Turning, turning, spinning The dust settles Leaving nothing but the wind Called Grothar’s Breath
Sounds like smart advice. I've been on enough to know that I would likely not survive entering his greenhouse. mutters something about cows and the seperation of their flesh from their bones well anyway good to meet you
Hello Everyone that might read this my name is Kelderth. This isn't my first time on this site (i have been looking over it from time to time) but this is my first time actually wanting to help build Santharia. I have been particulary interested in the poetry (it's quite good ) as i write some myself. So here I am hoping to meet many of you and I hope we get along well.
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