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« on: 29 January 2007, 15:34:30 »

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The small, brown, delicate frame of the “Strata” is no hint to its milk production. This animal is well suited for the barren, dry climate it is situated in, and thrives there, under the close care of humans, of course. The milk production of this tan sweetie is enough to supply Thalambath, Bardavos and Strata with milk, butter, cheese and cream.

It is simply not possible, that there are so many cows that all these cities have enough milk products as the entry hints here. Some, but surely not as much as towns farther up have. Nomads have of course plenty of milk, not so desert towns, i think they just have other drinks. 

The milk production of this tan sweetie is enough to supply the upper classes of Thalambath and Strata as well as those of Bardavos, Uderza and Varcopas with milk, butter, cheese and cream.


Appearance.  Strata cows are generally shorter, leaner, and overall more “ladylike” when compared to its northern cousins the baneg and the rimmilch cow . Calves grow horns that can be cut off at a young age, and they will not regenerate. Females have udders, a pink bag between its hind legs that grows and produces the milk. This Strata Cow may reach heights of up to four fores at the shoulders , although this is only in peak conditions and health. Their weight also varies with their health and surroundings, but a   eight hebs average cow is not uncommon

Skipped metric messurements and replaced it with Santharian, added a reference to meanwhile existing cows


Territory. This breed is only often found in the regions of Strata, north to Bardavos and there are many farms built in and around the desert. This breed of dairy cow oddly enough does very well in the heat, even extreme heat, as that is where they produce their maximum amount of milk

Could this please be replaced with following?

In Santharia this breed is only found in three places, north of Strata, west of Thalambath and for about a century now east of Bardavos, where a big farm was established around 1567 a.S. by Had‘rian the Stratanian. This breed of dairy cow oddly enough does very well in the heat, even extreme heat, as that is where they produce their maximum amount of milk

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