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« on: 13 March 2008, 05:49:53 »

Overview

The Battle at Alvang: Witchking's Night occurred in 62 b.S. when Ac'rónn Serveran, the heir and son of the Móch'rónn Saban Blackcloak, a dark elf mage and warlord, guided an enormous army to the enclave of Alvang, an immense fortress located on an island in the midst of the stormy and violent Ancythrian Sea. Severan's goal was to put an end to the Móch'rónn's plans to conquer the lands of Sarvonia. Severan commanded a contingent of elite elven archers and was joined by the armies of the human Helcrani leader Corvas and hundreds of dwarven warriors led by the renegade dwarf Gonthrol. This joined alliance of the races would later be a precursor of the "Sarvonian Alliance" that would become the key to the unification of the races later when Santharia was formed.

A Survivor's Account

The following account of the battle comes from the writings of Arasinya Tuarwen, one of Serveran's chief lieutenants and one of the sole survivors of the catastrophic disaster that befell the Alliance army. Her journals were kept hidden for many years until she felt safe that they could be published. Along with a few other survivors' accounts, Arasinya's journal tells a mostly complete account of the battle.

Prologue

The Móch'rónn Saban Blackcloak founded and built the immense fortress of Alvang on a small island in the midst of the Ancythrian Sea in eastern Sarvonia. The fortress and island were a place for Saban to build his power base and recruit and train an army to conquer the Ylfferhim leader Anthioullsn and his people. Some say that Blackcloak was drawn to the island by some magical essence, where that essence came from is not known and possibly never existed. After Saban took over the island he named the fort that he built "All'valán" (Styrásh for "Above the Dream").

Saban believed himself to be the true Móch'rónn and demanded tribute and servitude of all the elven tribes. Whether or not Saban actually believed the elves would declare him their leader is unknown. Nevertheless, the elves rejected Saban's overture and placed a new leader of the High Elven Circle, Anthioullsn, a Ylfferhim bard. Enraged at being rejected, Saban set about with a plan to conquer the elven people by force. He moved his group of darkling followers to a small island in the Ancythrian Sea and built up a large fortress and surrounding small town to house his armies and servants. From here, Saban Blackcloak could build and send his armies to attack the Ylfferhim people and later the Quaelhoirhim and the Maeverhim.

The Ylfferhim elves have never forgotten the time when Saban Blackcloak darkened their forests with his evil. A description of the dark elf as told by Arasinya Tuarwen who saw him still is told to this day:

"He is black as night, the dark one who descends upon our home like a violent storm. I have never seen such a beautiful dark one...his eyes shone like red jewels and his countenance was as midnight. I never saw him step upon the ground. It was like the very earth recoiled before him. As he turned his head to view the glorious home of my people, I saw his hair blow in the breeze and I feared for I thought I saw mists of sadness follow his wake. The very wind quieted around him and as he passed me by, I could not look away for his power held me in awe and I felt my very soul being pulled away by his gaze..."

The Alliance

Saban Blackcloak was a powerful mage and shrewd leader of his armies. He believed that his fortress could withstand any kind of assault. The sea around the island was rough and stormy providing no easy manner with which a ship could get to island. However, he never counted on his own son, Serveran, to lead an assault against Alvang along with an army of Helcrani warriors and dwarves.

Serveran, the son and heir of Saban, was kidnapped by the Ylfferhim leader Anthioullsn and hidden among the elves where he was raised to oppose his father. It was the first time that Saban had seen his son in many years and it was obvious that Serveran had become a capable leader of armies in his own right. It was Serveran who commanded the dark elven archers.

Also among Serveran's army was the human Helcrani leader Corvas and his army of human fighters. Corvas was an able and ruthless leader and perhaps in his middle age when the assault occurred. He commanded over four hundred swordsmen and spearmen.

Gonthrol, a renegade dwarf of the Mitharim clan, was the third part of Serveran's army. Gonthrol was a mercenary and an expert axe warrior who persuaded over three hundred of his men to follow him on the assault of Alvang. It was known that Saban Blackcloak's wave of violence would not stop with the elves, but would spread to the human settlements, particularly the Helcrani, and in turn the dwarves of Gonthol who were living within Helcrani borders. Gonthrol commanded more ground warriors.

The Attack

What is known of the battle is that during the first hours of the evening of the attack, the armies of Serveran prepared for a long siege. The Alliance, composed of Serveran's elven archers, the Helcrani foot soldiers and the dwarven warriors, boarded over two hundred ships for the journey across the Acythrian Sea to the island of Alvang. It is thought that close to perhaps one-third of the ships were lost to the raging sea and high winds that prevailed the northern sea. It is also thought that the dark elven magic also had something to do with the sea's violent behavior.

As the ships approached, the night grew more foggy and overcast, making visibility difficult. The crew could see an immense fortress dominating the night sky with the fortress towers hidden beneath the shrouded fog. The surrounding buildings were dark and quiet and no movement was seen or heard.

Hargran Orfas, captain of the Helcrani ship Midnight Gale later told this account of the journey:

"We had very little to see. The fog enshrouded us like a thick blanket. Everywhere I turned, the fog hugged me tight. I couldn't push it away and I felt as if my very breath was being taken from me. I pushed on, my crew pushed on and the Gale cut through the violent waves. It was our will alone that drove us forward. Our sister ships were torn asunder all around us as the waves ascended high above them and crashed down like a pair of steel jaws upon a piece of meat. We were fortunate...we suffered a loss of half the crew overboard. Never again will I sail that evil sea..."

When the ships finally made land, planks dropped open from the sides of the ships and the foot soldiers streamed out to storm the beaches of the island. They were then met with fierce resistance as the dark elf defenders rained down thousands of arrows and bolts upon the attackers.

As the dwarven and human soldiers took the brunt of the initial counterattack, Serveran's archers took their places on the decks of the ships and fired back. They had no good means of seeing the defenders, so they aimed where they thought an archer would lie. They also aimed for the nearest fortress buildings and windows hoping to hit something.

The attacking army, many of whom fell to the arrows, regrouped and made their way slowly up the beaches until they reached the edge of the town surrounding the fortress. From here, the Helcrani general Corvus led the charge. His men encountered hordes of dark elf warriors with which they engaged in fierce close combat.

Border Engagement

The Helcrani men succeeded in punching through the initial wave of defenders and began to spread out among the small barracks and buildings that surrounded the fortress itself along the northwestern side. Dark elf soldiers met them at every corner with drow archers poised atop buildings shooting down arrows upon the humans. The humans knew that without reinforcements, they couldn't spread out enough to secure the area and a victory. The dwarven foot soldiers should have been following the Helcrani, but were nowhere to be found.

The dwarves were caught up along with Serveran's archers battling the many drow mages that were unleashing powerful bursts of elemental magic upon the invaders. The western and southern sides of the landing area had become a chaotic mess of Alliance soldiers attempting to close the gap between themselves and the mages on higher ground.

It was then that Serveran ordered the elven archers to form up in a line and prepare a volley of arrows while the dwarves provided a defensive wall. The dwarves pushed upwards, many of them falling quickly to the onslaught of fireballs and tremors of earth beneath their feet.

The archers were prepared and Serveran's arm fell in a signal to fire. The arrows were let loose forming a thick cloud of raining death that fell upon the high ground and the mages formed up there. Using the temporary distraction, Gonthrol led the dwarves up the beach and over craggy rocks to the town border where they met with drow foot soldiers there.

Serveran's Charge

Serveran led his archers behind the dwarves and joined Gonthrol in hand to hand combat against the drow. As he rounded a corner, he saw to his left a few streets distant the Helcrani pinned down behind a crumbling wall. Drow archers and mages were firing off arrow and spell in an attempt to break the Helcrani shield.

Serveran cast about, satisfied that his area was secure, and motioned to Gonthrol where the Helcrani were trapped. The dwarves gathered up and formed a line with the archers behind them. Serveran gave the order and the group charged through the streets in a ferocious attack upon the drow defensive. Many of Serveran's men moved to the rooftops to better gain a line of attack. The thick line of dwarves weaved in and out of alleys and streets and found their target and the slaughter began again.

Corvas appeared from behind the wall and approached Serveran for orders. The elf moved off to confer with the human about the next stage of the attack.

The Undead Army

After three hours of fighting, the border town was securely in the hands of the Alliance. Many dead and wounded of both sides lay in the streets. The pitiful wailing and screaming echoed throughout the night.

The Allied leaders took the time to regroup and plan the next stage of the attack - upon Alvang itself. Serveran chose to lead a group of archers and humans directly to the gates of the fortress and enter there. The dwarves were chosen to attack from the underworks and tunnels rumored to exist underneath the fortress as the dwarves were adept at underground movement within tunnels. Corvas was chosen to stay behind and secure the town further and provide reinforcement if needed.

With the plan in place, the Alliance moved forwards towards the gates. Gonthrol and his men found a tunnel entrance and lined up to move down and under into the fortress where they would meet the humans and elves within.

It was then that the sound of movement could be heard behind them. To their horror, the dead that lay in the streets began to move and stand. The corpses arose, still bloodied and fresh with dripping wounds. Elves, drow, dwarves and human corpses shuffled slowly towards the Alliance group.

Serveran knew full well the powers of his father and cast a defiant glare upwards into the fortress towers. There in the many windows dotting the walls, he saw cloaked faces and malicious eyes staring back at him. Necromancers.

The air was heavy with necromantic magic. Serveran knew that the necromancers were using foul magic to animate the dead into a second, larger army as a desperate attempt to keep the Alliance away from Alvang. Corvas, shocked, but undeterred, took up arms and rallied his men. They charged the undead. The corpses were not agile and did not fight as they once did when they were living and did not give the Alliance much trouble. But, it took time for the Alliance to fight off the undead giving the enemy time to regroup and form a final defense within the fortress.

The Trap

What happened once the Alliance reached the gates of the fortress is uncertain. The forces of Saban Blackcloak knew of the attack and also knew of the powerful magical trap that lay in wait once any intruders dared pass through the fortress's gates. What exactly the trap was remains subject to myth.

What the trap did, however, is clear. A traitor from within the army of Serveran had betrayed the elves and informed Saban of the impending invasion of the fortress. The fortress defenders prepared to meet the Alliance once they broke through. Serveran and Corvas succeeded in pushing back the undead and gathered at the gates. They broke through and poured into the open area within the fortress walls.

A Helcrani soldier later said this of the breeching of the gates:

"We broke the gates through after what seemed like many hours battling the walking dead. Oh how my memories are forever seared with watching my former comrades die not once, but rise and die a second time by my own blade! I still see the agony in the eyes of the dead...their pain at having their torn and pierced bodies trapped by dark magics and forced to walk again against their will...how an undead can exist I shall never know.

Serveran led us through the gates and we found inside the walls many evil secrets that I shall not recall for as long as I live. For inside were instruments of pain and torture...tables and tools. Strange words and symbols covered the walls and floor. Some looked to have been made with blood, but I shall never be sure as I promptly wretched at the sight of it. Serveran, that brave elf, strode forward and cried out for his father. Something told him that the Blackcloak was not there...and possibly never was. Serveran beheld the writing and symbols for many minutes as if reading them silently. Then, he turned at once and motioned us all to depart quickly. We rushed outside...when suddenly I was blinded by a light so bright I felt as if flames were licking my very soul..."


The trap was sprung and magical energy filled the island in a massive blast of power that nearly destroyed every living being within the fortress and the surrounding town.

Serveran, Corvas and a few others survived, however, and it is not know how they did so. Legend has it that the survivors possessed enormous willpower and resisted the magic that was unleashed. Some say that the gods themselves protected them. The remaining members of the Alliance had no time to figure it out. From the writings and symbols within the fortress walls, Serveran knew that his father was bent on taking the power of the Earth Titans and had to be stopped.

Aftermath

Serveran, Corvas and the remaining archers and soldiers conducted a search for the dwarves who had gone under the tunnels but could not find them. It is assumed that Gonthrol did not survive the mysterious magical trap that killed nearly everyone else. Sadly, there was little time to grieve or honor the dead. Serveran ordered all those alive to board the ships awaiting nearby for the journey to follow Saban and stop him.

Serveran left the island of Alvang littered with the bodies of the dead. The fortress and surrounding town was left to the ravages of time to be shrouded in myth and legend.
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« Reply #1 on: 19 March 2008, 10:17:59 »

Hi Azhira,

I really looking forward to seeing what you come up with.  May I suggest that you try to contact Capher about this?  This is likely going to be a very involved entry, and he has already done a lot of background work on Saban Blackcloak, Alvang and even the battle itself.

Have fun!  :)

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« Reply #2 on: 19 March 2008, 15:26:17 »

The only thing that Capher wrote where a "Saban" is mentioned is the Wizard of the White Tower story. This is pretty old and perhaps doesn't fit to current concepts, which is also why Capher at some point wanted to completely revise it. However, he doesn't seem to have time to get to it.

Besides, the Saban he speaks about is definitely not the Saban of Witchking's Night and he doesn't mention that battle at all. So yeah - don't get confused, Trel!
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« Reply #3 on: 20 March 2008, 07:50:13 »

My apologies, Azhira, Art is right.   :)

I'm thinking of the wrong Saban.  Wren is the person who wrote up the Saban Blackcloak entry.

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« Reply #4 on: 20 March 2008, 16:18:54 »

Yep, Wren wrote the Saban entry and I discussed things with her back then when we did it. So I know a good deal about that guy and Alvang and stuff. I also gave Azhira a few pointers, but most important is that seh gets her creativity into the mix, so I don't want to determine how things have to be from my side. I guess Azhira is creative enough :)
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« Reply #5 on: 30 May 2008, 02:10:10 »

Ok, this entry has been long dormant but now I have finished the first draft and it is ready for comment!  :D :D
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« Reply #6 on: 31 May 2008, 13:04:07 »

First of all, very nice entry!  Just a few things:
(Shouldn’t the Overview be past tense)

Prologue
From here, Saban Blackcloak could build and send his armies to attack the Ylfferhim people and later the Quaelhoirhim (delete one of the spaces) and the Maeverhim.

The Attack
As the ships approached, the night grew more foggy and overcast, making visibility difficult. As the ships approached(this is the same start as the last sentence, perhaps you want to change it, but you don't have to.) the island, the crew could see an immense fortress dominating the night sky with the fortress towers hidden beneath the shrouded fog.

Border Engagement
The dwarven foot(I think there should be a space here)soldiers should have been following the Helcrani, but were nowhere to be found.

Using the temporary distraction, Gonthrol led the dwarves up the beach and over craggy rocks to the town border where they met with drow foot(and here)soldiers there.

Serveran's Charge
Serveran lead his archers behind the dwarves and joined Gonthrol in hand to hand combat against the drow.

The Undead Army
Serveran knew that the necromancers were using fire magic to animate the dead into a second, larger army as a desperate attempt to keep the Alliance away from Alvang.(How did he know it was fire magic, couldn’t earth also be used?)

The corpses were not agile and did not fight as they once did when they were living and did not give the Alliance much trouble. But it did slow them down. (Does that mean they didn’t fight at all, or just not as well?)

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« Reply #7 on: 02 June 2008, 22:44:26 »

Excellent finds, Mannix. I've corrected the issues you've pointed out and are colored Teal. Thanks!  :D
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« Reply #8 on: 02 June 2008, 22:49:50 »

I'm here to Help! grin
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« Reply #9 on: 07 June 2008, 05:38:41 »

Ok, some comments, Azhira! :D

Overview.

- In the Overview I would add at least that the Móh'rónn is a dark elf

- Enclave of Alvang: Lies in the Ancythrian Sea, which should also be mentioned. Just to get in as much information as possible

- Also the battle contingent Serveran put together would be a precursor of the "Sarvonian Alliance" that would become the key to the unification of the races later when Santharia was formed.

Prologue.

- Good would be as well to mention a character who provided these infos, as he was part of the whole drama and later on wrote it down. And based on that - mixed with other voices - you could put that entry together. This always looks much better if you mention your sources somewhere. You don't need to directly quote from that guy, but having that option open allows you to do that anytime it seems fitting :)

- Here as well when you start: Mentione his dark elven origins.

- You could hint on what is mentioned in the Enclave/Fortress entry:

Some say that Blackcloak was drawn to the island by some magical essence, where that essence came from is not known and possibly never existed. After Saban took over the island he named the fort that he built "All'valán" (Styrásh for "Above the Dream").

So there was most likely a reason why Saban chose this place above all others - because there were magical energies he could harness there for his dark purposes.

The Alliance.
- Something to fix here:
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The sea around the island was rough and stormy providing no easy manner with which a ship could get to island.


Serveran's Charge.
- Here's also a little mistake:
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Serveran led his archers behind the dwarves and joined Gonthrol in hand to hand combat against the drow.

The Trap.
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A traitor from within the army of Serveran had betrayed the elves and informed Saban of the impending invasion of the fortress.


- Additional note: It seems that Saban never actually was present on Alvang when the attack was made, and that it was all a set-up in order to distract his enemies and gain further time to progress on the journey to descend down to Hegedorn.

Maybe you could mention that Serveran and his companions found evidence that hinted at his whereabouts, which led to the succeeding persuit of Saban.

Okeydokey, looks fine in general Azhira! Pretty dramatic and intense stuff, just as a pivotal point in history should be recounted! clap
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« Reply #10 on: 09 June 2008, 22:01:05 »

Thanks for the comments, Arti! I shall continue to work on this with your comments in Yellow. It shall be ready for another look over soon.  :D
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« Reply #11 on: 20 June 2008, 23:22:19 »

Are all the updates already integarted, Azhira? - If possible I'd like to take this into this week's update!
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« Reply #12 on: 21 June 2008, 10:03:06 »

I'm sorry Arti...this entry is not yet ready. I need to do a bit of work on it still. Perhaps next time... :P
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« Reply #13 on: 23 June 2008, 21:56:15 »

Ok Mr. Arti! This is now ready for your perusal. I couldn't get to this over the weekend, so here it is.

Your comments and suggestions are in Yellow. I've added a main source and sprinkled the entry with other eyewitness accounts as well. This was a tough entry for me for some reason... azn
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« Reply #14 on: 24 June 2008, 03:36:53 »

Very nice, Azhira :) Definitely looks ready for integration now - I guess the added accounts of participants in the journey provide good further perspectives that make the whole thing look more complete! Very well done, and now we already have a first entry for the next update the day after the last update was finished, that's something as well, eh? ;)
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