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Twen Araerwen
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« on: 16 January 2009, 15:45:34 »

Well I am not really sure how or if this song could be used for the site. Yet it is an original by two of us newbs and hopefully it can fit into Caelereth somewhere. Personally I had visions of a Remusian woman singing on a cool winters night, mourning the passing of her love. Although I can write any backdrop needed for this to fit into the grand scheme of things. Other than that .... I hope you enjoy.

Last Dream

Last Dream
On a cold winter's dark,
watch the snow drifting away.
On a journey we embark,
till this night becomes day.

Far away to a land,
where the seas run red.
I extend my hand,
to reach out to the dead.

Float into oblivion,
I dreamed this dream would pass.
The evil will rise,
with black shadows they cast
and my sorrow at last, will be free.

Deep in the heart,
of a moment I did spend.
Where apart,
his hand did mend.

He ceased to strife,
cradled in my embrace.
Then let go his life,
and met death face to face.

Float into oblivion,
I dreamed this dream would pass.
The evil will rise,
with black shadows they cast
and my sorrow at last, will be free.

I couldn't have known, I couldn't have seen.
But in time I'll set his soul free.

Float into oblivion,
I dreamed this dream would pass.
The evil will rise,
with black shadows they cast
and my sorrow at last, will be free.
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« Reply #1 on: 16 January 2009, 19:16:03 »

Woa!   jawdrop  Both of you did a breathtaking job on this!    worship worship clap clap clap clap2 clap2 clap2
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« Reply #2 on: 16 January 2009, 21:26:28 »

Listened to this over and over.  Beautifully sung, and well written you two. :)

I think we can integrate this into Remusian society.  I see it as a modern contemporary piece, and not something that has been passed down.  Perhaps even influenced by a southern society.  Definitely from the Sudarok region, and from the artistic community therein.  Perhaps the singer can be the "rock star" of Remusian society.

Thoughts?
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« Reply #3 on: 16 January 2009, 22:00:48 »

This is beautiful!

Twen, you really should sing more songs for the site, your voice is lovely.  And the song itself is great, Lorek!

Aura + to you both!


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« Reply #4 on: 16 January 2009, 22:54:34 »

@Hylph: Thanks for the praise doll! The entire content I credit to Lorek, much less 'sanguine' than many of the songs he has written. heart

@Alysse: Thanks Alysse! After listening to Judith and your entries nominated for awards, could anyone walk away with anything less than inspiration? I would love to sing more for the site, been finding it more pleasurable than writing as of late. Now if I can get Lorek to keep the tempo down from Grindcore/Metal. grin

@Altario: I would love to integrate this into Remusian society if at all possible. Yet I am open to any place on the site that the community feels it would fit. After studying the lyrics with your idea in mind the song reminds me of a Lady Fair that had somehow pleaded with her lover not to go 'insert reason'. Unable to accept the fact that she could not persuade him to stay with her, she now blames herself for the mishaps that befell him. Now so deeply does she hold onto the memories that she feels that somehow he is still with her.

Not sure if there would be much popularity for such woeful lyrics on a daily basis. Possibly the song is sang as a Remusian woman's way to subtly implore caution from their honor bound lovers? Well those are just some simple ideas but I am open to anything hun. If it continues to go in this direction, I am sure you and I will chat over the specifics.

Input always desired, ideas from other parts of the world gladly accepted. 
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« Reply #5 on: 16 January 2009, 23:16:18 »

*Feels a tear streak down his face like a marathon runner.* I never imagined this song done with such a beautiful voice. You never cease to amaze me. I could feel her pain and yearning. worship clap worship clap worship clap Also, the speed is fine, favorite. hug Perfect job on the vocals. You should try out for American Idol so I can slap Simon if he says anything bad about you. ;)

@ Everyone: Thank you so much for the praise. We are honored to have such great friends.

Edit: One more @ meh cousin. OMGZ you posted my song. *Jumps up and down like an excited school boy.* About the sanguine and battle and grindcore/metal thing, that's just me. I do write the occasional love song, though. Never imagined one done so well. You have a great future ahead of you, Angel Voice.
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« Reply #6 on: 16 January 2009, 23:51:57 »

Is that you here, Twen? :D
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« Reply #7 on: 16 January 2009, 23:57:39 »

"Yikes! Yes Arti it is." ~Hides face from the world.~ "Err, could we not show my face? Sad enough I am singing, lol"
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« Reply #8 on: 17 January 2009, 00:14:18 »

Ooh, that was beautiful, you guys! Lovely singing, Twen, and great lyrics, Lorek. It sounded wonderful, and I never noticed the tempo issue, really. Great job, I'm sure this will get integrated quite quickly. Aura + to both of you. thumbup
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« Reply #9 on: 17 January 2009, 00:17:05 »

Well Morden to be honest, without background music .. I stopped a few times. Gave me a lot of chances to fix mistakes. But shhh! :)

P.S: Since Arti has discovered another little corner of my world, I cordially invite all of you to subscribe! I spend far more time here than I do there but who's counting. heart
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« Reply #10 on: 18 January 2009, 13:34:08 »

You held out on me!!??  Hylph linked me to your Vids.  (and I owe him BIG for this).  Wow.  Simply, and overwhelmingly, wow!

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« Reply #11 on: 18 January 2009, 15:21:24 »

GREAT! Now she'll blame it all on me  cry all the new fame and the compliments and adulations...
Don't blame me Twén, ARTI started it!   innoc
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« Reply #12 on: 20 January 2009, 04:55:17 »

The song is truly great, Twen! clap As are the lyrics, Lorek! thumbup

Though if you sing more you should consider getting a bit of a better equipment, Twen, like a microphone etc. Maybe our other singing bards who have recorded stuff for the site like Judy, Alysse or Wren can advise on how to get rid of the background noises. Cause that's truly the main problem - this voice needs the proper environment, and it will sound even better than it already does!  cool
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« Reply #13 on: 20 January 2009, 23:59:12 »

Thank you for the praising sentiments, Lord Artimidor. It was a pleasure to break away from my norm for a moment to expand my boundaries. That and she would have trout slapped me if I didn't. *Breaks out laughing.*
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