* 
Welcome Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?


*
gfxgfx Home Forum Help Search Login Register   gfxgfx
gfx gfx
gfx
Pages: [1] 2
Print
Author Topic: The Mindmeddlers  (Read 9625 times)
0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.
Eldor Delrossa
Aspiring Member
**

Gained Aura: 21
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 260


Researcher of Brownies and Magic


View Profile
« on: 13 October 2009, 11:56:35 »

Name: The Mindmeddlers (Var. Mindmanglers, Dark Mindsmoothers, Troubling Souls)

Overview: The Mindmeddlers as some call them, are rogue Eyashenes, or those that do no realise their origin. Eyashenes, or Mindsmoothers, are gifted individuals who have the ability to affect emotions. They use these gifts to soothe others, calm them, and to help cure maladies of the mind. While Mindsmoothers use their gift only for the benefit of others, these despicable creatures use them for their own selfish reasons, or even with malevolent intent. They have the abilities to affect the emotions of others and their states of mind. They can cause one to feel anger, confusion, jealousy, detachment, and any other emotions. They've also learned to harness and control Mindlashes, but only a few very powerful ones can cause permanent damage. Mindlashes are an involuntary reaction when a Mindsmoother becomes scared, upset, or angry, the reason that they avoid such emotions. They cause the mind to become temporarily or permanently mangled, and may cause headaches, blindness, and temporary insanity.

Appearance: Mindmeddlers do not have a particular dress code. Some of them, mostly the former Eyashenes, tend toward dark colours, such as indigo, dark grey, and sometimes even black. Some tend to be honourable Eyashenes, seemingly intent to help others sensing and soothing their emotions, while in fact they act like Macanti in the derogatory sense, being swinders and charlatans. This way, they can go undetected and cause harm and destruction in their wake. The members of the Mentalist organization wear black robes bearing the symbol of an eye, usually coloured red. They can come from any race and tribe, though greedy humans and the occasional orc tend to hold the majority of their ranks. Very few elves have been recorded to exist within their ranks, and the majority of those are Dark Elves. There haven't been recorded to be any dwarves among these beings, but it is possible.

Personality: Most of these Black Eyashenes are those who had a poor childhood, usually with abuse, and feel that they must repay the world for what has been done to them. Some are rogue Eyashenes that have different ideals and beliefs, and choose to separate themselves from their order to pursue a darker path. Very few are young Mindsmoothers who have been found by a Mindmeddler, and have been taught to hate the world.

In fact, most Mindmeddlers are loners, preferring to isolate themselves from the world, and cause havoc in their own little corners. There has only been one recorded order, and that is the Mentalists. They are no longer very active, and most of them are in hiding. Most of the loners tend to live in large cities where they stand a slim chance of being detected by a group of Eyashenes, and they can cause a little harm at a time.

Origin: It is believed that, as is the case with all Mindsmoothers, these beings were given their gifts by Eyasha, Godess of Peace. Most Eyashenes believe that these Mindmeddlers were originally meant to do good, but their hearts were corrupted by the evil that slumbered within their gift.

Myth/Lore: There have been a few sightings of them over the years, but not many. Only one recorded story of an organized group of Mindmeddlers exists, the recount of the Mentalists. It is said that they set up residence in a small village outside of Marcogg, and enslaved the people there. It is believed that they possessed a few very powerful Mindmeddlers in their group, called Mindmanglers. They were able to keep them in a lull, in which they had no coherent thought and did basically as they were told. Only did their tyranny come to an end when they were stopped by a group of brave Eyashenes, who were willing to sacrifice everything, even their morals to save these people, and possibly others, from the tyranny of these evil beings. The story is accounted for by word of mouth from the people of Marcogg. Because of this, many rumours have sprung up among the elite. Whenever an official or someone in office acts strange or out of turn, it is common superstition that a Mindmeddler has infiltrated their ranks. Because of this, many an adviser has been executed unjustly (or not) on accusations of playing with a most personal possession of most: their mind. One can never be sure of meeting a Mindmeddler when they are in a position of power. The Thane of Manthria now keeps tabs on every underling and adviser in his court. If even the slightest suspicion is raised, they are immediately ordered to trial, which usually results in an execution. An Eyashene is usually called upon to monitor the emotions, and to counter-act any attempted Meddling. Here is an account from an old woman who saw this happen approximately fifty years ago at the time this was written:

Years ago, a hooded figure came an' visited that village yonder, 'bout four hundred peds away. Wherever he passed, people got real dizzy-like, and they just dropped what they was doin' an' followed him. A good many more hooded figures followed behind the people. Pretty soon, they was all at the centre of the village, and he started talkin' all dark-like, in a deep voice. He done told ev'ryone what to do, gave 'em jobs, like cleanin' and tended the cattle, an' things. He also had 'em workin' on some big house he claimed, made it look nice enough ta be a castle. It wasn't very big-like, but it was still big enough to be a castle. Took 'em darn near a year ta finish. All them figures started livin' in that buildin', makin' them people do whatever the hell they pleased. For years them people worked, an' occasionally one of 'em would come to 'is senses, and try ta run. One o' them hoodies would stop 'im, an' he'd start fussin' on the ground, an' rollin' around like an old fool. Then 'e'd get real still-like, and they'd take 'im away.

One day, some o' them pointy-eared folk started askin' questions around this ol' city of Marcogg. There was a couple o' human folk with 'em, but not many. After a few days, them folks done set off toward that village. We tried to warn 'em, but they wouldn't listen worth a San. Someone followed 'em, an' watched 'em enter that castle. There was a darn many screams comin' from that there castle that night. In the mornin' only a few o' them folks came out. By that time, all them folks that were slaves was comin' back ta normal, an' didn't remember a thang. Them robed folks just went on their way, back ta where they came from. The one who'd followed 'em in the first place saw some o' 'em hoodies escape that castle, and run as fast as 'ier bastard legs 'ould carry 'em. I was the one who done seen it all. It turns out that the Thane had gone an' called 'em on account of 'im worryin' 'bout those hoodies tryin' ta take over Marcogg.
« Last Edit: 11 December 2009, 23:55:18 by Artimidor Federkiel » Logged

"The trials and tribulations of Brownies over the centuries have made them wary of humans. I am humbled to be called 'Brownie Friend'."- Eldor Delrossa
Eldor Delrossa
Aspiring Member
**

Gained Aura: 21
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 260


Researcher of Brownies and Magic


View Profile
« Reply #1 on: 13 October 2009, 12:12:16 »

I'm taking suggestions on names, not to say that I will use them, but I might find one that fits.
Logged

"The trials and tribulations of Brownies over the centuries have made them wary of humans. I am humbled to be called 'Brownie Friend'."- Eldor Delrossa
Valan Nonesuch
Santh. Member
***

Gained Aura: 113
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 1.507


Like a pudding bag full of knives


View Profile
« Reply #2 on: 13 October 2009, 12:51:38 »

Though it sounds cliche, "Black Eyashenes" seems to fit quite aptly. Eyasha's colour being white to begin with, the people that turn their powers towards less than peaceful pursuits should be some sort of antithesis to their "normal" counterparts. Add in that the "Evil" chosen were "black" and the good chosen where "White" it comes together quite nicely. (Yes, I realize Eyasha had nothing to do with the War of the Chosen. So shoot me.)
Logged

Beyond the horizon where the earth and the heavens meet
lies a certain point where they are not joined together and where, by stooping,
one might pass under the roof of the heavens.
Azhira Styralias
Santh. Member
***

Gained Aura: 132
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 2.774


Mód’dél’áey


View Profile
« Reply #3 on: 14 October 2009, 05:07:01 »

You may wish to bell ring Judy as she wrote the Eyashene entry. Confirm if this is something she would like to see done.  thumbup
Logged

No, I would not want to live in a world without dragons, as I would not want to live in a world without magic, for that is a world without mystery, and that is a world without faith. And that, I fear, for any reasoning, conscious being, would be the cruelest trick of all.
Eldor Delrossa
Aspiring Member
**

Gained Aura: 21
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 260


Researcher of Brownies and Magic


View Profile
« Reply #4 on: 14 October 2009, 11:46:02 »

One step ahead of ya Azzy. Sent her a PM last week. grin
Logged

"The trials and tribulations of Brownies over the centuries have made them wary of humans. I am humbled to be called 'Brownie Friend'."- Eldor Delrossa
Artimidor Federkiel
Administrator
*****

Gained Aura: 538
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 23.091



View Profile Homepage
« Reply #5 on: 15 October 2009, 02:59:19 »

The idea definitely sounds intriguing. If Mindsmoothers can smooth the mind, then there could also be people who try to mess around with it, using their gift the other direction. So I like that idea :) A better name wouldn't hurt, though.
Logged



"Between the mind that plans and the hands that build there must be a mediator, and this must be the heart." -- Maria (Metropolis)
Seeker
Santh. Member
***

Gained Aura: 465
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 1.934


Fire Mage


View Profile
« Reply #6 on: 15 October 2009, 12:20:50 »

Will-bender
Mind-twister
Brain-poker
Mind-blower
Persuader
Mind-melter
Logged

Every entry deserves a picture.   -Seeker
Artimidor Federkiel
Administrator
*****

Gained Aura: 538
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 23.091



View Profile Homepage
« Reply #7 on: 17 October 2009, 02:39:31 »

"Will-bender" sounds intriguing, some other suggestions might be too much on the comical side, which should be avoided. But nice thoughts anyway, Seeker!
Logged



"Between the mind that plans and the hands that build there must be a mediator, and this must be the heart." -- Maria (Metropolis)
Aaron Silverleaf
Aspiring Member
**

Gained Aura: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 47



View Profile
« Reply #8 on: 17 October 2009, 04:10:21 »

I personally really like Mind Twister.
Logged
Ta`lia of the Seven Jewels
Santh. Member
***

Gained Aura: 143
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 11.640


Shendar, Shen-D'auras


View Profile Homepage
« Reply #9 on: 18 October 2009, 05:15:25 »

Will bender sounds for me more powerful than mind twister.
Logged

"For me there is only the traveling on paths that have heart, on any path  that may have heart. There I travel, and the only worthwhile challenge is to traverse its full length. And there I travel looking,  breathlessly. ~Don Juan"
***Astropicture of the Day***Talia's Long, Long List***
Bard Judith
Santh. Member
***

Gained Aura: 365
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Posts: 7.650


Dwarvenmistress


View Profile Homepage
« Reply #10 on: 18 October 2009, 09:22:55 »

Willbender has the dignity but does not convey intent so clearly -  to be a dark parallel to Mindsmoother, how about Mindmeddler - which conveys the petty malice of someone who would delve into another's thoughts for the sake of hurt and chaos...... or even, for the very powerful, Mindmangler?
Logged

"Give me a land of boughs in leaf /  a land of trees that stand; / where trees are fallen there is grief; /  I love no leafless land."   --A.E. Housman
 
Artimidor Federkiel
Administrator
*****

Gained Aura: 538
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 23.091



View Profile Homepage
« Reply #11 on: 18 October 2009, 15:03:02 »

Hmm... The "Mind" in front has the problem that the "Mindsmoothers" also begin with "Mind", so we'd have "Mindsmoother" and "Mindmeddler", which could easier be mixed up. So ideal would be a word that stands entirely on its own methinks. "Meddler" and "mangler" sound great as well, but don't really fit to "will". Hmm....  Maybe something even more far-off like "Soulmeddler" or "Soulmangler", as in medieval times the connection between soul and mind might not so pronounced for the regular mortals. And this guys obviously have the capabilities to let you do things you wouldn't do otherwise, so they change your personality in a way - you could say they appear to make you "possessed" huh
« Last Edit: 18 October 2009, 15:04:38 by Artimidor Federkiel » Logged



"Between the mind that plans and the hands that build there must be a mediator, and this must be the heart." -- Maria (Metropolis)
Valan Nonesuch
Santh. Member
***

Gained Aura: 113
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 1.507


Like a pudding bag full of knives


View Profile
« Reply #12 on: 18 October 2009, 21:34:25 »

Rogue Eyashenes implies that all were once Eyashenes that turned to a less than beneficent use of their skills, which doesn't quite fit in with the idea there. Also, have you considered what might happen to apostate Eyashenes?

Logged

Beyond the horizon where the earth and the heavens meet
lies a certain point where they are not joined together and where, by stooping,
one might pass under the roof of the heavens.
Eldor Delrossa
Aspiring Member
**

Gained Aura: 21
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 260


Researcher of Brownies and Magic


View Profile
« Reply #13 on: 19 October 2009, 03:19:02 »

Oks ready for some comments.
Logged

"The trials and tribulations of Brownies over the centuries have made them wary of humans. I am humbled to be called 'Brownie Friend'."- Eldor Delrossa
Eldor Delrossa
Aspiring Member
**

Gained Aura: 21
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Posts: 260


Researcher of Brownies and Magic


View Profile
« Reply #14 on: 20 October 2009, 05:47:39 »

*BUMP*
Logged

"The trials and tribulations of Brownies over the centuries have made them wary of humans. I am humbled to be called 'Brownie Friend'."- Eldor Delrossa
Pages: [1] 2
Print
Jump to:  

Recent
[27 March 2019, 00:01:57]

[21 June 2018, 14:28:00]

[31 May 2017, 06:35:55]

[06 May 2017, 05:27:04]

[03 April 2017, 01:15:03]

[26 March 2017, 12:48:25]

[15 March 2017, 02:23:07]

[15 March 2017, 02:20:28]

[15 March 2017, 02:17:52]

[14 March 2017, 20:23:43]

[06 February 2017, 04:53:35]

[31 January 2017, 08:45:52]

[15 December 2016, 15:50:49]

[26 November 2016, 23:16:38]

[27 October 2016, 07:42:01]

[27 September 2016, 18:51:05]

[11 September 2016, 23:17:33]

[11 September 2016, 23:15:27]

[11 September 2016, 22:58:56]

[03 September 2016, 22:22:23]
Members
Total Members: 1019
Latest: lolanixon
Stats
Total Posts: 144592
Total Topics: 11052
Online Today: 29
Online Ever: 700
(23 January 2020, 20:05:39)
Users Online
Users: 0
Guests: 26
Total: 26

Powered by MySQL Powered by PHP Powered by SMF 1.1.21 | SMF © 2005, Simple Machines
TinyPortal v0.9.8 © Bloc
Valid XHTML 1.0! Valid CSS!
Theme based on Cerberus with Risen adjustments by Bloc and Krelia
Modified By Artimidor for The Santharian Dream
gfx
gfxgfx gfxgfx